Back to 1983: The Era of Heated Brick Beds and Earthen Kilns

To be honest, if a person has been lazy and lazy for decades, can he become diligent after being reborn? I don't believe it!

Without the desire to continue reading, there is no need for the existence of useless waste.

Come on ✊Many people write about why Rebirth is so awesome. In my opinion, it's too nonsense. Ordinary people basically have no ability

This book has been internally invested, so feel free to invest and the status will be changed immediately

1. Emotion and rhythm are the advantages 2. The waste setting is a bit poisonous. You can write that the loss of a child will cause decadence, but it cannot be a waste that leads to the loss of a child and then becomes more decadent. In this way, the protagonist is neither pitiable nor likable. Readers can reach 80% in the first three chapters 3. The cat in the female channel is seriously ill, and the ethical plot of the brother's feud is disgusting 4. According to the level of the crisis, 1---10, your crisis of saving people is counted as 5. The proportion of front and rear counterweights is too large, the crisis is exaggerated in the front and the crisis is overcome in the back. If you want 10 chapters, you can open 3/7. Exaggerate the impact of the crisis on the protagonist's life (such as how much she likes the boss, how much the daughter-in-law loves the boss, the affection the two have for their first child, etc.), And shape the child into the "light" of the young couple in their hard life. The disaster of two children is the source of destruction in the couple's life. Behind - the rescue process, plan 1 and then failed, plan 2 failed, plan 3 dawned, and finally at the time of mental breakdown after rebirth, the child got a turn for the better. In this way, a self-redemption & redemption of others, a perfect ending 5. Dialect and vernacular is a label, which is pretty good 6. The sense of picture needs to be strengthened, so that people living in the city or non-Northwesterners cannot imagine the environment of the protagonist through words.

The introduction is so honest. The public grain tax and the three mentions and five unifications of the whole country will not be exempted until 2006 or 2008...

I suggest that the author change his job. If he is really free, go fishing more often. Writing is really not suitable for you. It hurts to say this, but this is indeed the most disturbing novel I have read since I started. My son is about to die, and I don't even know if he can be saved. He still has such rich mental activities, thinking about things that are going wrong between his parents and his family! There is no sense of rhythm, and it is hard to tell when to go fast and when to go slow. It's been more than ten chapters, and apart from knowing that the protagonist is a loser, it's very uncomfortable. None of the other characters are vivid.

Already invested, come on, work hard to write a book, make me rich

The procrastination at the beginning makes it obvious that the male protagonist is useless and has nothing to do with rebirth.

Speechless! Waste is still waste after rebirth