The Great Evil God in the World of Ghost Stories

Shennong's test book, everything represents only personal opinions. This book is ugly, very ugly, and some of the plot details are really disgusting. It's not that cool, nor is the writing. Just like the brother downstairs said, the dialogue between the protagonists is like a human-machine. You can also see the common points of some bad articles, which are a bit ignorant, a waste of time, and a waste of time even if you want to prostitute. Also, the author likes to use three words at the same time to describe the protagonist's inner mind. He lists it just like this, such as sadness, regret, guilt, and self-blame in his heart. I will read it further. Some friends said that this copy is quite interesting. I will come over and comment after reading this copy.

The main characters are nanny and nosy. It's none of your business, why are you provoking it?

The protagonist and supporting characters all look like humans and machines

Don't tell me that you only get skill points by completing those dungeons. To put it bluntly, I read your novel because of the lanky ghosts and scary stories in your introduction. But if you only get skill points by completing the dungeon, wouldn't you feel like you're entering a treasure trove but leaving empty-handed? I'm just trying to get you to acquire the abilities of the protagonists in those stories, but the result is this

The protagonist is quite useless, and it fits the current situation of our contemporary college students.

Just treat it as a practice. After more than ten chapters, you started to write crookedly. It can be seen that you wanted to highlight that the protagonist is capable, but maybe the writing is not good, and he wrote it as a fool. The other characters were also written inexplicably, and the transitions were also inexplicable.

The internal signature was approved, and the status was modified today. Friends who have not invested in the car, hurry up and invest. There are many manuscripts for this book, so you can invest with confidence.

I don't know what you want to write. .

Confused, what's going on with this book😅

What the hell? Inexplicably, he died in Chapter 4!

Please give me some pointers on my book. It will be updated stably and will not be flooded with information.

How should I put it? I just feel that the protagonist has no desire, no ability, no strength, and everything follows Goldfinger's lead. The only change after rebirth is that he has a golden finger, but other than that he is still a waste.

How should I put it, I can watch it, and it feels pretty good. At least this copy of the severed hand looks quite interesting.

[Recommendation]: In this world full of absurdity and chaos, the protagonist Gu Yang uses his wisdom and courage to travel through time and space, solve mysteries, and start a fierce battle with the ancient gods. He said boldly: Now that I have traveled through time, I will change everything. Anyone who prevents me from changing will eventually be defeated by me. [Brief Description of the Work]: In this absurd and chaotic world, the protagonist Gu Yang returns after being reborn. He travels through the gaps in time and space, traveling back and forth between the two worlds, shattering ghost stories and destroying legends. He launched a fierce battle with the ancient gods, trying to save the world in danger. His goal is to destroy the ancient gods and restore order to the world. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"} [Work information]: Book title: In the World of Ghost Stories The Great Evil God Author: Small Town Poets Type: Suspense-Detective Reasoning Tags: Rebirth, Cthulhu, Fast-paced, Decisive Killing Word Count: 72,000 words, serialized Evaluation: Seedlings, Licorice [Recommendation Index ]: ★★★☆☆ [Recommended group]: People who like fast-paced novels and Cthulhu novels [Points to watch]: 1. The protagonist is a reborn person. Although he only lived one more year in the future, his memory He has a very good memory and can clearly remember what will happen in the future. This can help the protagonist avoid or save many tragedies that should not happen. For example, the protagonist recognizes a young couple he meets at the beginning. They will die in the near future and immediately reminds them. The protagonist's identity as a reborn person adds mystery and tension to this novel. His knowledge of the future makes him a special being. 2. The protagonist has very upright views and a kind heart. As a college student, he has a deep understanding of the butterfly effect. He was worried that his intervention would change the future in his memory, causing him to lose the advantage of being a reborn person. But when he saw people who would die tragically in the future walking past him, he couldn't help but step forward to remind him. There was the young couple who repaired the computer in front of him, and the girl Jiang Xiaodan who had a crush on him behind him. They all barely escaped death after being warned by the protagonist. [Disadvantages]: The author's dialogue writing is very stiff. In the setting, Jiang Xiaodan has always been deeply in love with the protagonist, and even took the initiative to confess his love, but still refused to give up after being rejected. Such a person thinks that the protagonist is cursing her when the protagonist reminds her to pay attention to safety recently,? Are you really not strangers? The male idol you like reminds you to pay attention to safety, but you still scold him? The author is obviously not good at emotional writing.