A Certain Wizard at Hogwarts

What kind of emotional drama are you writing? No one will read this book because of the emotional drama, but some people will abandon the book because your emotional drama is unsatisfactory.

Don't be obsessed with teachers and students, it's too perverted

Don't fall in love with teachers and students. Teachers have a dominant position and authority over students. Teacher-student relationships often involve one party dominating the other. This actually feels like coercion. And in schools, teachers also play a guardian role for students. . . .

Aren't you feeling awkward that an artificial intelligence that is by your side all the time is actually a male?

It is indeed very good. It is one of the rare HP novels that has both good writing and logic. The characters are naturally formed, generally not OC, and there is no deliberate pretentiousness. It feels similar to Professor Magic's book. It has great potential for good writing. What I like most is that the protagonist is not exaggerated or arrogant, focuses on magic research, and does not forget to connect the plot. The plot is smooth and interesting, and will make people read.

I forgot what era the plot was set in, and now that it has been twenty years since Harry broke the law, I still remember the general plot.

The Fall of Hogwarts

Is Thomson's Kedavra the same Thomson I thought he was?

No, I was just thinking about getting fat, so why did I film a eunuch? Didn't you finish the exam? Even if I update one chapter every day, that's fine.

I haven't started reading it yet, but I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist, and if so, whether the author can write it well. After all, many authors in the starting point are not good at writing emotional lines. It would be better to have no emotional lines. I just use the emotional lines to delay the time and cheat the word count.

The writing is good so far, and the protagonist is also very likable. I would like to ask the author if he has decided on who the heroine will be.

The writing is very good, and the writing style is also very good. It is an excellent work like the well-received Professor Magic Pattern. I just hope that such a protagonist will not kneel down, not slander, not make sense, concentrate on studying his own magic, and not mess with the plot. I hope the author will always keep it!

What's going on? Author, do you want to take some responsibility? Even if you sign it, just jump out and tell us. Instead of saying nothing, did you fail the exam? What else is going on? Can you continue to update? If you can't continue to tell me, I will delete the book.

I took a look at the comment section and found that the heroine has not yet been decided, so let's raise it first... If the author is confident in his emotional drama, it is okay to have a heroine, but I think the main character in the copywriting is a teacher, so forget it about Hermione Luna. A child who is eleven or twelve years old and has watched him grow up is not a dark and evil style... The author chose Fleur very well, or he may create an original one.

Why don't you want Hermione to be the heroine? Just because you don't like it doesn't mean that others don't like it. It's the worst to choose someone else to be the heroine, but Hermione is the one who is best portrayed in Harry Potter. Can you choose other supporting characters to have their own characteristics? Especially for the supporting characters who don't have many introductions and settings in the original work, there is no need to design one yourself, because you don't read fan fiction to see your own characters. If you want other female protagonists, consider the harem.

Hermione seems to be more talented than her superiors. She cannot compare with Dumbledore, two generations of Dark Lords, and some professors. She is both a learning type and a hard-working type. She seems to have almost no creativity and basically just follows the script. A genius of her level can only be found at Hogwarts in a few years.

Where did Mrs. Molly get her inexplicable name? Molly Weasley is her full married name, and she should be called Mrs. Weasley. Even if you use her maiden name, Mrs. Prewett, it's not that outrageous 😒 Surname + Mr./Mrs. Is basic etiquette!

My initial setting for the protagonist was that I had seen the movie, but had completely forgotten it. I only had a little impression of some characters, and I remembered a few famous scenes, such as Harry dealing with the basilisk and Neville killing the snake. I admit that part of the meaning of this setting is for my own laziness. If necessary, I can mechanically deceive the gods by asking the protagonist to recall the original plot. After being corrected by many readers, I understand that doing so will make readers feel confused and unable to see clearly. I deeply apologize for this. This is my fault and has reduced the reading experience of all readers. Sorry everyone, just pretend that the protagonist doesn't know anything about the plot after leaving the secret room. There will no longer be scenes that give readers a sense of separation. This incident also taught me a lesson. Settings should sometimes be absolute and should not leave any room for convenience, leaving readers confused. I have learned the lesson and am deeply aware of it. I hope to bring a better reading experience to readers and friends, and sincerely thank you all for your support.

Good book recommendation

According to current standards, it is an excellent book and worth recommending.

Really good! Give you a recommendation vote! Come on! Build a magical world from the perspective of the protagonist!

So far, I feel pretty good, the writing is pretty good, and it doesn't feel too inconsistent.