There Are Billions of Gods Inside Me

I feel that some of the other characters in the author's works are more or less strong, but the protagonist, IMHO, is not strong at all. I feel that your writing power is basically spent on other characters. The protagonist is really poorly described by you. It is such a big hook, there is no strong character at all, and there is no sense of satisfaction in confronting others.

The protagonist is so awesome, but I haven't written the feeling yet. It always feels like the most ferocious fish in the river, but if the river dries up, the fish can't do anything. I also read a book about Qi training period, relying on whatever artistic conception, he can actually kill immortals. They are not on the same level. How can you beat others? What era are we in now? What's important is to use force to overwhelm others. It's like a monkey fighting with a person. Who can compare their strength? People can use guns and cannons at different levels. If you just want to fight with others and always compete with others for strength, others are not so stupid.

Your plot is not very good. As for your ex-girlfriend Bai Muchan, let's not mention it. There is also official surveillance on the earth. Or is it that the earth is just a tool to improve your cultivation, the specific plot is on the other side

The indigenous protagonist, the data of the Xixi version... If the blood exceeds 1 in the test, he can give you half a chapter of water. I wonder how many small numbers are behind 0.999

The realms are simply a mess. The power and realm gap of Dahuang Sword Cultivator have been repeatedly emphasized. As a result, after practicing an entry-level martial arts, you always feel that you can cross several great realms. Is it appropriate? You might as well not define the boundary, it's useless, just use quantifiers (**cow/horse) to define the intensity, which seems clear. Your realm seems quite complicated. It turns out that everyone can leapfrog. What's the point?

Is Liang Xiao the same as Zhong Yue's senior brother Feng Xiaozhong? Humanity is supreme. This setting looks good.

There's something wrong starting from the senior brother, what's the hook behind Si Wuxie? He can be more pretentious than his senior brother, but his pig feet are like a fool's, and he can't even enjoy his brainless writing.

The contrast is too big. The protagonist is obviously given such a big hook, but every time he is arranged to fight, he fails. It's so unpleasant to watch.

After reading eight or nine chapters, I still feel a little frustrated, not happy, and not up to par. The protagonist's behavior in the world feels very immature, and the skills of another world can be passed on casually. Although it is to cheat the protagonist, the easier it is for people to get things easily, the more likely they will not return it. Things, and being so casual without looking at character, I don't know what trouble will happen later. In the main world, there are a few small characters jumping around the protagonist all the time. They are disgusting and difficult to kill. I have only read a few chapters and I can't accept this style. Sorry, I'll leave here first.

I was annoyed when I saw the pressure state. The state is so low, the combat power is so high, and they keep talking about the physical body is not enough, but the strength is not mentioned at all. I stopped reading. It was originally a full set, but the writing at the end was too bad.

I don't understand it at all. After reading all the chapters, I came to the conclusion that the main world has no effect at all, and it is all improved by the training of the Blue Star people. So what is the protagonist doing running around? Can't you just go to your happy hometown and be invincible? Author, do you want to take a look at what you wrote?

The Gu family of Blue Star was procrastinating in dealing with it, and it was enough to just say that they were not from the Gu family. Luo Liba is so talkative that I don't know what the relationship is with him.

The starting point is not as good as a tomato.

That Si Wuxie is like a powerful cultivator. Do you think it looks like it?

The realm is too tight. In order to advance the plot, the protagonist is always not given time to practice, and other characters are tricked into chasing the protagonist.

Since when did sword-drawing techniques appear everywhere? It's very annoying. Also, do you practice sword-drawing just for the purpose of slashing the sky?

It feels good but feels bad at the same time. I have been fighting for a long time and it is still like this. Why not have an enemy that can be crushed directly? The hook is so big and our expectations are so high. But you have such a 💩 half-hearted feeling. I have to say that you have reduced my desire to read this novel to the lowest point.

How can I continue to read at such a slow speed?

Ready to blacken it, getting more and more wet.

What are you writing about? Ten years ago?

It's so bad, the combat power has collapsed, and now the update is just like putting out the outline.

About 2/3 of it is water, and there are a lot of typos that have not been corrected. The plot is repetitive and has no new ideas. I will continue to work hard in the next book, if there is one.

It's just pure fun, except that the front part is a little bit not cool enough. (Others are benevolent and wise are wise) But it's really cool

I don't know when, "IQ Online" became a dispensable label and the choice of a few authors I don't know when, looking at the choices of most authors, you came up with the idea of ​​writing yourself At every moment when inspiration strikes, you write down the creativity, looking forward to using this creativity to add to your own work Every time At a moment when you are not understood, you open your book and look at the protagonists and supporting characters, as if you have become them, and they have become your close friends And one day, you suddenly find this comment in the vast sea of books, and suddenly encounter this book, you may get a friend, get an understanding, and get some ideas...

If the earth has not become a light-year planet, how can it become an ancestral planet?

It's okay in the early stage, but the water pump is great in the later stage.

Realm and combat power are too general. Bad review.

The ancient gods of the extreme path are just comparable to the god kings, but they may not necessarily be able to kill the god kings. We also need to consider how many ancient gods the god king broke through. If the Ancient God of Ji Dao can beat the God King of the Nine Stars Ancient God, the gap between Jiu Xing and Ji Dao will be too exaggerated The protagonist, the Three Star Ancient God, can kill the Desolate King. A large group of six or seven star desolate beasts besieged the protagonist in the ancient god world.

I recommend my own copy of "The Age of Inviting Gods: The Beginning to Welcome Sun Dasheng!" Invite God into the bottle theme, fantasy and martial arts. If you are interested, you can come and take a look!

The speed update is completed. Start a new book. There is nothing interesting to read later.