There Are Billions of Gods Inside Me

I feel that some of the other characters in the author's works are more or less strong, but the protagonist, IMHO, is not strong at all. I feel that your writing power is basically spent on other characters. The protagonist is really poorly described by you. It is such a big hook, there is no strong character at all, and there is no sense of satisfaction in confronting others.

The protagonist is so awesome, but I haven't written the feeling yet. It always feels like the most ferocious fish in the river, but if the river dries up, the fish can't do anything. I also read a book about Qi training period, relying on whatever artistic conception, he can actually kill immortals. They are not on the same level. How can you beat others? What era are we in now? What's important is to use force to overwhelm others. It's like a monkey fighting with a person. Who can compare their strength? People can use guns and cannons at different levels. If you just want to fight with others and always compete with others for strength, others are not so stupid.

Your plot is not very good. As for your ex-girlfriend Bai Muchan, let's not mention it. There is also official surveillance on the earth. Or is it that the earth is just a tool to improve your cultivation, the specific plot is on the other side

The realms are simply a mess. The power and realm gap of Dahuang Sword Cultivator have been repeatedly emphasized. As a result, after practicing an entry-level martial arts, you always feel that you can cross several great realms. Is it appropriate? You might as well not define the boundary, it's useless, just use quantifiers (**cow/horse) to define the intensity, which seems clear. Your realm seems quite complicated. It turns out that everyone can leapfrog. What's the point?

The indigenous protagonist, the data of the Xixi version... If the blood exceeds 1 in the test, he can give you half a chapter of water. I wonder how many small numbers are behind 0.999

Is Liang Xiao the same as Zhong Yue's senior brother Feng Xiaozhong? Humanity is supreme. This setting looks good.

The contrast is too big. The protagonist is obviously given such a big hook, but every time he is arranged to fight, he fails. It's so unpleasant to watch.

There's something wrong starting from the senior brother, what's the hook behind Si Wuxie? He can be more pretentious than his senior brother, but his pig feet are like a fool's, and he can't even enjoy his brainless writing.

I was annoyed when I saw the pressure state. The state is so low, the combat power is so high, and they keep talking about the physical body is not enough, but the strength is not mentioned at all. I stopped reading. It was originally a full set, but the writing at the end was too bad.

After reading eight or nine chapters, I still feel a little frustrated, not happy, and not up to par. The protagonist's behavior in the world feels very immature, and the skills of another world can be passed on casually. Although it is to cheat the protagonist, the easier it is for people to get things easily, the more likely they will not return it. Things, and being so casual without looking at character, I don't know what trouble will happen later. In the main world, there are a few small characters jumping around the protagonist all the time. They are disgusting and difficult to kill. I have only read a few chapters and I can't accept this style. Sorry, I'll leave here first.