Honghuang: Zhen Yuanzi Commands the Three Paths

It's a good start, here are some suggestions: 1. Don't touch any golden fingers like system simulators. They shouldn't have been there since the beginning of time. The character of the prehistoric era has been lost 2. Don't lose the characteristics that the prehistoric era should have, and don't lose what should be included in each period, but don't forcefully impose the things that should not be there (someone seems to have seen Xiuxianfang City in Wuyi Mountain during the Conferred Gods Period, and saw it like naming people Trump during the founding of the People's Republic of China) 3. Let's be clear, the main and supporting characters, you wrote about immortals, immortals, not pure people. Human nature can have a fairy spirit. Don't write the supporting characters as if they are villains, it would be better to write Siheyuan if you write them like this.

Great book! It's rare that this isn't the kind of system article that starts with the beginning. You said in the prehistoric period, the higher the chance and understanding, the higher the system will be. I'm just kidding, Pangu will create the system for you.

Although my writing is poor... Although my writing style is poor... Although I am very good in the comment area... But I am shameless (cross out, I love prehistoric literature)! Therefore, I beg all fellow Taoists not to read the book, but to turn to the last page even if you don't read it. Because now is the recommendation period, it is particularly important to follow up on reading, especially Monday and Tuesday, which are directly related to subsequent recommendations! Thank you fellow Taoists for your support! The new book will be updated at 4,000 per day. After the new book exposure period, I promise that it will be released at 10,000 per day, so that fellow Taoists who like this book can read it to their heart's content!

A few treasures are enough, as long as they are enough. The protagonist has treasures wherever he goes. In the end, it seems like a mess. He only appears once and never comes back. It feels like picking up a stone.

Licking a dog is really scary. Originally, Yuan Feng had a Taoist companion, Shi Huang, but I didn't mention it directly. Also, Feng seems to be a male, and Huang is a female.

What kind of bloody love is written in the prehistoric times?

The scene between Yuanfeng and Zhen Yuanzi was really dramatic

Ever since I got the heroine, I immediately didn't want to spend money reading books.

In fact, gender is a very vague concept in the prehistoric world. Because many of them are transformed from races that cannot be distinguished by gender. For example, the original form of Patriarch Hongjun is a hermaphrodite cricket. Zhen Atom is just a pile of mud. Sanqing is three lumps of air. So their outward appearance is that he thinks he is a man today. So today he looks like a man. Tomorrow he thinks he is a woman. Then he looks like a woman. The gender can be changed freely, such as the Taoist Cihang. Innate divinity has no gender, gender is acquired.

It's a little bit dense, and it doesn't capture the feeling of the supreme prehistoric world at all. It's just a fantasy covered in the prehistoric skin. There are also quite a few mistakes in some settings and common sense. Overall, it's okay to pass the time, but it can't withstand scrutiny. However, the author has a good attitude, which is an advantage.