I Have a Yellow Beam Cave Sky

The book is good, but the people in the comment section are too violent. No matter who speaks and has some opinions about the book, they will be scolded by a group of people. Even if they make suggestions normally, they will be scolded. It doesn't feel like a normal situation. When I read through the book reviews, the atmosphere of discussion is gone. It feels a bit like flattering. Anyway, I can't stand this kind of atmosphere. I suggest the author to take care of the book review. The purpose of reading the book review is to discuss the plot together, but it turns out that your book review is all scolding and makes people go away.

Looking at this writing style and looking at this trumpet account, it looks like a veteran, but does a veteran need to open a trumpet? That must be the father-in-law. I dare to ask whether this father-in-law is from the East Factory or the West Factory?

At first glance, it looked like it was written by an old guy, who said, "Who are you, the reincarnation of the earth?"

The reincarnation of the old man, the novice is not so meticulous

My friends, I was busy with work some time ago, and I was infected by a respiratory disease, so I have been low on energy. After receiving the intravenous drip today, I finally came back to life. Then today, I read the text I had written from beginning to end and revised some details. I also read carefully all the comments that you can see. It is true that the development of the Yugui chapter was a little abrupt. Maybe I was standing from a God's perspective. I said before that I ignored everyone's feelings. This was my mistake. I would like to apologize here. I always believe that a book must satisfy most people and make everyone enjoy reading it. I cannot ignore the pain points that everyone has mentioned. Some of you may be able to find that I wrote the book as a dumpling made for vinegar, but the dumplings are not delicious and the taste of vinegar cannot be shown. Therefore, I adjusted the outline today and moved the Yugui chapter to the back. The current plot was directly deleted and connected from the second chapter of Jixiang Temple to my later outline. I am currently recommending this book. If I delete a lot of it at once, it will most likely cut off a certain amount of traffic and sacrifice a certain amount of exposure. But I don't want to regret it later. I want to give everyone a better reading experience. So, it doesn't matter anymore. Traffic and other issues are no longer a problem. After all, it is indeed my fault. I will stand up straight after being beaten, and I will gain wisdom from the pain. Therefore, now that the strong man cuts off his wrist, all chapters from chapter 41 onwards have been deleted. Please let all book friends know this. Thank you for your support

What a stupid memory! The mess is not over yet! It's been a few days and I'm still writing memories, and the more I read, the more annoying I become.

I just finished reading it, let me tell you my feelings. This should be the transformation or trial work of the classic fairy tale master. The writing is first-class and the cultural heritage is unique. The descriptions of both the scenes and the characters in the book are very delicate and will not make people forget after reading it. But the author may have just written this This type of book can be said to be perfect, but the creation of the protagonist is a bit distorted. The author should have wanted to cast a protagonist of the type Wu Song in "The Demon Lord from the Sky, the Tai Sui God on Earth", but in the end, people saw a sincere gentleman wearing the skin of Wu Song. I think the author can modify the protagonist's character appropriately. The humble opinion of a ten-year-old bookworm. To write this kind of book, you have to write about his madness, his arrogance, his rebelliousness, and his ruthlessness in eliminating the people around him and treating all living beings as useless.

I used the template of a reckless man, but inside it was Wen Qingjia and the Holy Mother. A group of people who killed their husbands and abandoned their children could be saved and still enjoy their old age.

Really, if you want to write about the protagonist's glorious past, just go back to the past. Don't wait until you finish recalling and forget everything that happened before. You can wait for the protagonist to reminisce about a short period of reunion with old friends, a short period of revisiting old places and a short period of memories, and a short period of fighting against old enemies. Don't it affect the unfolding of the story in the present time, okay?

Which old man? Let this filthy land reincarnate again.

After all, I am a time traveler. If I continue writing like this, it will almost become a series of Aboriginal Immortal Martial Arts. Apart from bringing a golden finger, which is of little use, this time travel has no other effect at all. The greatest advantage of a time traveler, apart from the golden finger, is the advanced way of thinking. This feels like a complete Aboriginal.

😰Which dynasty's father-in-law came out?

Whose father-in-law are you? It's really rude to not state your name in this windy place.

To be honest, the people around the male protagonist either act as nannies for them, drag the protagonist back at every turn, or want to kill the male protagonist. I feel that this male protagonist is really too difficult.

Damn, he must be really an old eunuch, and the writing style seems to remind me of an old friend.

If you want to write a generous tragedy, the protagonist is not suitable to be a time-traveler. Aboriginal people are more convenient for the development of the story. The changes in the characters' emotions are more reasonable and have a sense of inclusion. The time-travelers themselves have a God's perspective, so there is no such feeling.

The protagonist is so kind, almost like a saint, which makes it difficult for me, a time traveler, to take on the role.

Isn't it good to write in vernacular? The whole text has to be mixed with vernacular, which makes it uncomfortable to read 🙂

The front part is quite gripping, but what nonsense plot unfolds in the back part. I suggest you watch Tuxue Zhenren to see how the rough and rough protagonist is written. Do you know how to exploit your strengths and avoid your weaknesses?

The common people need you, a loser, to seek justice?

It is estimated that Hua Gong has left the palace in public again.

I am from a rural area, and I just want to read the author's other works.

Do you want to update the author? Come back and kick me