Cyberheart

This is the author. I can't reply without a mobile phone, but I have been reading posts and other things.

What can I say about this writing? I always feel that something is missing. There is no shortage of plot, but the jumps in details are too stiff.

After watching it for so long, I found that Wu Xuan was quite miserable. He was obviously a strong man with strong bones, but because he didn't have a mecha weapon that could be used, he was being walked around all the time.

Your start is pretty much the same as the last one. There is a kind of person who wants to write a lot but only writes a little bit of everything. Especially the first few chapters. You should write more and explain the background of the era more clearly. The protagonist has arrived not long ago and has not yet remembered it, so use the protagonist's perspective and life to analyze more.

The author's writing is to my liking, and the writing style is passable, but it's not very popular, which is a pity.

70 Chapters and 340,000 words? The author is too honest.

I feel like the more I write, the more I deviate from the core. The later part is not cybernetic at all, but has a feeling of apocalyptic martial arts.

Damn it, thank you Cyberpunk for switching to Cthulhu

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The number of words in this chapter is not enough, the author is getting angry

It seems that it has changed from a normal upgrade article to something interesting.