Kill Offline, American Drama Explodes

The author needs to show his previous level. The jokes can be blended in naturally, but he cannot make jokes just for the sake of making jokes. So far, it looks a bit messy, and it feels a bit like making complaints for the sake of making comments. It is not very natural and smooth 😡

Summer, Baywatch

In the past, complaints were added to novels. For example, the American drama Doctor has a main plot and a branch plot, and various girls + complaints, which is very natural and interesting. Now it's jokes + complaints. There is no main line, there are fewer girls, and there are more complaints than the main line girls. The author is completely enjoying himself.

The Big Bang Theory: Sheldon, Leonard, Howard, Raj, Penny, Bernadette, Emily, Priya, Dr. Elizabeth Plimpton Evil Force: The Wen Family's Daddy Charlie's Diary: Teddy Duncan's Family of 7 Baywatch: Summer The Big Bang Theory prequel: Peggy Fruit Candy: Haley Ghost Whisperer: Melinda Prank Kiss: Reiko Matsumoto The Big Bang Theory: Bernadette, Demi the Doll Dead Silence: Demi, Stepmother Onmyoji 2: Himiko Urenka: Urenka Magic: Lydia The Bad Seed: Emma the Bad Seed Orphan Rage: Esther, Kate, Max John Wick: John Wick Non-Strong C Drug: Linda Better Call Saul + Breaking Bad: Old Mac Descendants of the Sun : Korean senior Jiang Muyan Stairway to Heaven: Korean senior Han Yuli Sassy Girl: Sassy Girl Two and a Half Men: Charlie, Ellen, Jack, Rose She Came to Me: Dr. Patricia Bones: Bones American Horror Story: Zoe

I don't care about the killing line. I don't go abroad. I only care about whether there are many beauties and whether I can let them have children and have more children.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. If this book had been written ten years earlier, it would have been pornographic and humorous, with jokes and jokes that could occasionally sublimate the theme. Nowadays, only jokes are left, so I still stick to the baggage and tell jokes. It's not like the short videos created by AI collectives like Snow Mountain Rescue Fox, which allow you to watch and have fun from different angles. It's tasteless

Lydia

After reading more than 20 chapters, I felt like the author was watching a TV series and couldn't hold it in until halfway through. He pressed pause and complained fiercely about the speeches in the TV series. There was no complete story and it was all complaints.

I understand the core point of your book. In the name of a killing line, all the penniless women in movies and TV series are included in the harem; in essence, it is a stallion novel.

If you criticize too many people, it will appear that you only know how to beep. I remember praising the protagonist before for being decisive in killing. Are you writing a female channel, giving up violence?

The combination is not good at all, it gives me a headache to watch, it is all about explanations, and it is like a short story at every turn.

It's boring. It's all about complaining and making fun of people. There's no plot at all.

Some of the jokes are really forced into the plot, which is very uncomfortable to watch. And are you sure you don't want to change the name of the protagonist? Do foreigners really call you by your full Chinese name?

After reading three chapters, I don't know what the golden finger is for. You are a god from another universe but you can't use any of your abilities in reality, so what's the use? It was such a fierce operation that it ended up being two hundred and fifty.

I hope the author can adjust his status as soon as possible. The current tendency to entertain himself is too serious.

There are probably not many people who can be attracted by the explosion of American dramas and are spoiled. Why is your subject so popular?

American TV series, and The Big Bang Theory, this group of high-minded people have half a dime to do with the killing line, The one with the lowest academic qualifications is a Jewish graduate student. .

It feels like the protagonists in the author's works are becoming more and more sophisticated.

It feels a bit like complaining for the sake of complaining. Not interesting

Simplify it, the plot is too dense and lacks storytelling.

This article is a bit messy, making complaints and making jokes, which feels average.

The protagonist appears less and less, they are all gags, and the plot does not advance.

It turns out that you were the one who wrote the book about one superpower per season. I thought it was so familiar, so I kept saying it. It was funny at first, but after reading too much, it became more and more boring. 😔

Kelia & Catherine

In that timeline of Friends, when the economy was absolutely on the upswing, how could there be so many killing lines?

The wind has already hit the Internet articles, but when will it hit reality?

Why does a good urban beauty variety show need to add extraordinary power? There is no logic at all in writing it.

After reading 6 chapters, it's an American drama, but it also has the element of cultivating immortals, and then adds the power of comedy. This is really not good to watch.

Although the setting of plug-ins is very weird, please respect the surrounding plot characters. Taking off his pants in the street and in the presence of the two plot protagonists, he extinguished the fire in the distance and left a rainbow behind 😅

Little Red Riding Hood