Cold Jade Fairy

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You mentioned this cultivation speed, and with the plug-in, the result is that one level will be born every ten years. I'm convinced.

The protagonist is one of the reincarnations of the fairy couple, and they end up spreading flowers. How could there be so many coincidences? I got the cold jade, the sword box, the old dragon's good fortune, and Ling'er's yin and yang pool body shaping for no reason. It's either the cause and effect arrangement of the Fairy Queen's hand, or the author's storyline is too rigid 🪖, but some plots are indeed very rigid.

In fact, as a modern time traveler, it is somewhat inconsistent to not first think of the mutually reinforcing relationship between the five elements, yin and yang, ice and fire when entering the world of immortality! However, it is considered a minor problem and the impact can be ignored.

Are you serious about going out to sea to hunt beasts on the second level of Qi training? Why are you going to cheat again? Just do part-time work. It's still exposed. Compared to being exposed, it's better than going to sea.

Not bad, come on, is there a female lead for the protagonist?

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What the hell is this writing about? I went to Fangshi and still wanted to visit? Awesome

I won't go into details about how the protagonist interacts with people, finds resources, obtains benefits and improves. I won't go into details about how the protagonist is clever and smart, and how to develop quickly with a small fortune. Instead, I spend so much time explaining in the first 20 chapters that the protagonist actually has no sense of participation at all, no actual profit, and even the leftovers in the subsequent turmoil. The story of the ancestor of the Zhao family who failed to hunt a turtle and was promoted to a fake elixir... It is hard to imagine how important the plot can be led to by this latter incident, so that so much ink was spent in the early stage. One word, water.

There are too many descriptions in my heart. It's watery. The main descriptions I read are all 2 paragraphs of fighting. 2 Chapters describing what's in my heart. It's very confusing. It's too much.

Very good. I just found this book last night and read it in one sitting. Good luck, author! But there is a question. Why is it that after taking the Foundation Establishment Pill, I can only build one level of Foundation and cannot go up? ? You must build the foundation by yourself and not rely on the foundation-building pill to be able to upgrade to the golden elixir! Is there something wrong with this setting?

Adding finesse?

The story is well written, but the most important thing is missing. When I read novels, I draw pictures, and when I listen to music, I draw pictures. One is to feel refreshed, and the other is to resonate. The closer the protagonist is to the public, the more sympathetic he is. Greed, anger, and ignorance are slowly integrated into the character, and the character becomes three-dimensional. Those who watch Cultivation basically like themselves, puppets, pets, beauties, magic weapons, slaves, romantic encounters, slowly arrange it, the old six enemies meet the old six protagonists, this is so cool.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Not knowing what to think, either playing with the master, or writing in a diary. Who the serious person keeps a diary? 😡

Damn it's really rubbish. I thought I had a good book, so I thought I'd read a few more chapters, but it turned out to be another piece of shit that was forcibly finished. Blacklisted!

How to put it, ice spirit root + being "driven" out of the sect + opening a talisman + elixir, the golden finger is an ice space + attack magic weapon. This first part is very interesting. Anyway, I quite like it, but I'm really tired of traditional spiritual roots. But there is a little thunder in the mid-term. For example, in that elixir conference, such a good life-extending pill was given to a mortal just to verify its efficacy. It was a bit much. It is possible to scrape off a few scraps and make the mortal grow old and strong. This would have a deeper and more shocking impact on Xu Da. After all, the effects of items will be greatly reduced when they reach the monks. Another thing that makes me feel a little discouraged is that too many people died. The Peng family and his son can let Peng Hu escape, and it will not affect the development of the plot later, as long as there is no contact. It's actually okay to give some of these little sweet dates to readers. Keep up the good work, author!

Goldfinger is similar to too many books and is very discouraging.