Youshan Shengzi Road

My evaluation is worse than no evaluation at all

Some book friends pointed out that the pace is a bit slow. I am also aware of this problem, but the overall tone and outline layout of this book are destined to be somewhat group-like and slow-moving from the beginning. Each heroine is portrayed a little bit and needs to be interspersed. I don't want to turn them into tools with no participation, only flesh and blood without soul. I can only say that it is difficult to write. So, we can only try our best to update more. Many plots will gradually unfold in the future, which will naturally become more interesting and exciting. You don't have to be late for a good meal, right? If you really dislike it, you can keep it slowly on a bookshelf, as long as it doesn't collect too much dust. This is the author's first book. Although it has many flaws and shortcomings, it is not a eunuch. You can rest assured on this. PS: This book will not abuse the owner, and we will not suffer any losses. Maybe occasionally it seems that we suffer a small loss at the moment, just to take advantage of greater advantages later.

This book's description of women's appearance is really wonderful🤓

The writing is solid, but a bit slow. It would be better if the ups and downs of the plot could be adjusted. It's probably a harem story, but it's not the kind where you just draw superficial appearances to attract LSP, it's quite good.

Brother, you've been holding back for 200 chapters, but you have to give your first time to a woman whose husband is still alive? What's your point? You might as well give your first time to Liu Lu

A book that was so popular at the time was ruined by your ink like this.

The character design is really a bit sick. What a great story. The protagonist turns around and plays with other people's wives for no apparent reason. The sects and skills are also unreasonable. For example, in the chapter where the protagonist practices core skills to control corpses, others also say that the method of planting seeds for slavery is so unbearable.

Waiting for the opportunity, the writing is very solid, and it will become popular if there is a chance. The problem of not being popular at the moment should be that it was too slow to develop in the early stage and the world view is too big.

I think the author's writing is quite to my liking. I don't say it's a master, but at least it's pretty good. Why do I feel like there are so few people there😅

Slow, really too slow. Maybe it's because I'm used to reading novels. I can't get back to the time when I first entered the online literary world and loved to read all genres 😢

1. If Xu is the heroine, she goes to her cousin to practice her charm skills in the middle of the night. Later, she looks down on her cousin, and she still listens to her cousin's words and doesn't like the male protagonist. Is her cousin's words more authoritative than those of her sisters? It really doesn't make much sense, maybe it's just that there aren't many scenes, it's all about jumping around in a minefield, just trying to ignore people. 2. There are two currently on base, one rq passerby and one Mu Qiang m 3. Why is Xu's question magnified? Because it is obvious that the Youshan girl group is to be packed. Regardless of the introduction or background, the female lead must also be in t1, especially when other lightning protections are basically good. As for An's sentence, the most important person in life is probably her master. In this comparison, Xu's flaws are very obvious.

Not a son of man! The update speed is too slow. I finished reading it in one day. The writing is good. It's above average. Except for the couple who did the task, they didn't explain it clearly enough. They were confused and their mental journey was not clear. Everything else is good. The heroines have different personalities and the characters are full-bodied.

It's the first time I've seen a novel resurrected like this in so many years. It's amazing and touching.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can't figure out what level the protagonist is. The writing is so vague that you can't stand it.

This book is well written and getting better and better. I hope the author can maintain his mentality and persevere.

Yes, although it is slow to warm up, it highlights the advantages of slow warming. There is a process of upgrading, and the male protagonist himself also has a change in his character.

This book is getting better and better. The monthly votes have been voted for. I hope the author will continue to work hard and have a beginning and end. Don't be like the father-in-law next door who went to Dongchang to study and ended up with the beginning but the end 🙂

That's a little overstated, just because I hope that the author's strong writing skills should not have such achievements just because of the plot. I think what can be changed without destroying the existing plot is to improve the benefits obtained by the protagonist, strengthen the golden finger's abilities, and improve the protagonist's own talents besides the golden finger's aura. Now it seems that the protagonist only has to deal with people and be ruthless in planning, and his own talents are also very important, otherwise it will be as low-end as the system flow novel.

It will take at least three months to half a year. The writing is good.

Uncle Dong will be very happy if you can update Chapter 5, but Uncle Dong will be very unhappy if you update Chapter 5 today.

Haha, I am the first

Will one day return? The Ultimate Star Card Master, I'll wait until the author's reply is completed.

Instead of lingering here half-dead, it would be better to summarize the shortcomings and disadvantages and start a new book.