The Max-Level Ancestor in the Mortal World

I read a few chapters with a confused look on my face and left with a confused look on my face.

After reading three chapters, it seems that your goal is to animate the writing and character development, and the characters are classic Chinese comics that you want to play funny. The writing is okay, but it is not suitable for readers like me. I suggest changing the section to light novels.

Who is the protagonist? Does the author intend to write about Danmei?

The first hour of the book is quite humorous, and many jokes and jokes are quite interesting. After about 60 chapters, the laughter faded and it started to become boring. The subsequent plots became more and more confusing.

I feel that the problem with this book is that the plot is too tight and a bit confusing. I really want to start, the protagonist starts moving the giant panda police when he has an ancestor, probably to express the feeling that his whole life is in chaos because of his ancestor. But there is no hidden plot of the protagonist here You may not be able to feel the main plot. It is a small world and you are hiding from the police. The protagonist really thinks there is nothing to do! But this is the main line. This book is the same as the daily life of male high school students, the daily life of female high school students, devil daddy, going back in time and becoming a cat. These works are the same Because the ancestors are here and the adventure they bring is the main line. It does not necessarily have to save the world, it can be funny and ordinary. But there should actually be an additional hidden line here, just like the protagonist has lived for so many years, doesn't he have friends? If you don't have your own life, isn't there anything interesting about your own life? That is, so many things can be covered in 200 chapters. You have simplified it a lot. For example, when the pandas first come to the protagonist, they can live a relatively peaceful life, but their peace is interrupted when eating and shopping. I really want to live. It's not that the electrocardiogram keeps shaking up and down. Could it be that your life is actually that you won five million as soon as you graduated, and then you found out that you were cheated, and you immediately started to catch thieves. This life is so tiring. It's like a taut rubber band that will only be stretched indefinitely. The protagonist should rest and spend some time peacefully before starting the next adventure, which could be playing chess with the uncle or taking a walk with friends. Just a transition. Now is the time for praise I think the writing is quite interesting. I really like the story of going to the land of evil people in it. This one also has bugs, but I really like the nonsense in it. The uncle drove the tractor in a kind way, but ended up getting into the car of an evil person. My imagination was that the uncle was driving a tractor and planned to sell the man. When he was discovered, he started to go crazy and started shaking like a husky. I almost died laughing. I feel like the evil in the Village of Evil is not highlighted here, because it is related to the case. It can be that all the people in a village are sinister and cunning, and go crazy like huskies at night. This place is too compact. For example, we had a meal in the village, a little story happened, and then the main story started.

I specially rewarded you with 100 coins to speak. I have read this book a long time ago. At that time, my classmate Chen Xiang was disgusted when he was rescued by Liu Nanxi.        ， . .

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Before I knew it, it was already 100,000 words long! It's time to ask for a wave of favorites, comments and votes!

The price of these things for cultivating immortals is too outrageous, isn't it? A talisman only costs a thousand cabbage? And it is still a high-quality talisman, and it uses the real currency system... Treating the Grandmaster as a beast. I don't know how to put it. Liu Xiaozi has no sense of responsibility at all. The Grandmaster gave him the opportunity and ended it without showing any gratitude. He also thought that the Grandmaster was here to coax everyone. An old man Wu appeared and kept kicking his nose. Xiaozi Liu didn't want the Grandmaster to stand up and give nice words to others. He was speechless.

Happy article, looks quite relaxing. It basically has nothing to do with cultivating immortals, and the level system is completely rotten. The writing is okay, and the previous ones I watched were okay, but starting from that secret realm, I couldn't stand it anymore.