Become a Disciple of Huashan, but the Sword Sect!

Too bad, Ning Zhongze, who single-handedly brought up the protagonist, did not receive such treatment. When he met Linghu Chong, he directly gave away the martial arts he had obtained through cheating. 666 Comes up and directly explodes the poison, right? What kind of coward novel?

Be careful, it's very frustrating, and the more you write, the more frustrating it becomes.

I am speechless as I write this. Why is such a high strength used? I had to watch the people from the Songshan Sect jumping up and down. Reading martial arts novels is just for fun, otherwise who would read them?

Roll it up, roll it up!

People nowadays feel that they understand Xiaoao and Linghu Chong after watching a TV series. The mistress who raised him, loved and cared for him was defiled by the demon sect, and Linghu Chong hid it and did not dare to say anything. She was kind to him, and gave the treasured elixir to his four gentlemen, Plum, Orchid, Bamboo and Chrysanthemum. He watched helplessly when they were poisoned, and when they were forced to die, he didn't even fart. Even if Yue Buqun was born, did Yue raise Linghu Chong? Try your best to teach him martial arts and train him as his successor. The result? Others instigating nuns to steal things, making friends with cannibals (literally)÷students There are too many words, let's start with these to refute me! !

Here's an idea: Since we are talking about the sword formula to ward off evil spirits, we have to talk about Southern Shaolin. Since we are talking about Southern Shaolin, we have to talk about Shaolin martial arts In my opinion, the sword formula to ward off evil spirits is not impossible to practice, but it does require the assistance of Shaolin martial arts In the Eight Parts of the Demi-Gods and Dragons, the Yi Jin Jing is one book with two sutras, and there is the Divine Foot Sutra, which is the full name of the Divine Foot Sutra of Magadha's Desire for Samadhi Breaking and Achievement. The Eight Deities and the Dragons say that it is: [The Divine Foot Sutra is originally a wonderful method for defusing external demons during martial arts] So what are external demons? Buddhism says that internal demons are obstacles caused by one's own body and mind, such as greed, anger, ignorance and other troubles. External demons are obstacles imposed by the outside world. Since obstacles imposed by the outside world, everything you see with your eyes, smell with your nose, hear with your ears, taste with your mouth, and touch with your body are all external demons, then how can those heat caused by practicing the evil-repelling sword manual not be considered external demons? So if you have the help of the Divine Foot Sutra, you can definitely practice the evil-repelling sword manual! We might as well extend it a little further What does a person look like after removing external demons? Of course, it is to further remove the internal demons, that is, the greed, anger, and ignorance in people's hearts. However, without the temptation of external demons, the internal demons are water without a source, which is relatively good. And Shaolin happens to have two magical skills that need to be removed. It can only be practiced after removing the internal demons: The first is the Yi Jin Jing: This "Yi Jin Jing" is actually the supreme treasure book in martial arts, but the method of practice is very difficult, and it is necessary to explore the "self-image and human image". There is no thought of practicing martial arts in my heart. However, monks who practice this superior martial arts must be brave and diligent in order to achieve success. Who doesn't want to benefit from practice as soon as possible? It is really difficult to have "nothing to live in". Over the past hundreds of years, there have been many eminent monks practicing the Yi Jin Jing in the Shaolin Temple. However, after years of hard work, they often achieved nothing. Therefore, the monks thought that the sutra had no efficacious effect, and it was stolen by A'Zhu that day. Although the eminent monks in the temple were angry, they did not take it as a big deal. More than a hundred years ago, there was a monk in Shaolin Temple who became a monk since childhood. He was mentally retarded and crazy. His master studied the "Yi Jin Jing" diligently and failed, so he became angry and passed away. This crazy monk picked up the scriptures next to his master's body, started practicing happily, and actually became a master. But why his martial arts was so strong, until he passed away and returned to the west, he could not explain the reason, and no one else knew that it was due to the "Yi Jin Jing". The second is the Arhat's magical skill of subduing demons: How did he know that the paintings on these puppets were a set of "Arhat's magical skills of subduing demons" created by the senior monks of the Shaolin sect. Each puppet is an Arhat. This magical skill combines the great achievements of Buddhist internal skills and is extremely profound and subtle. Just the first step of taking the mind and returning to the origin requires getting rid of all worldly worries and distracting thoughts. Not one person in a hundred thousand people may be able to do it. Smart people always have many things to think about, but if they are dull, they cannot understand the myriad changes. The eminent monk who created this set of magical skills knew that there were very few talented people in the world who were both smart and simple. Although there are quite a few monks in Buddhism who have good abilities and have cultivated to the point of not being tainted by material desires, if they practice this magical skill, they will inevitably "focus on martial arts" wholeheartedly, which will become a major obstacle to the realization of Buddhism. Buddhism calls "greed, anger, and ignorance" the three poisons. Greed for money and sex is definitely greed, and indulgence in Zen and martial arts is also greed. Therefore, clay powder was applied on the outside of the wooden arhat, and oil paint was painted on it to draw the Shaolin's authentic internal Kung Fu introduction, so that future generations would not see the wooden arhat and practice it without thinking of their own abilities, in vain and lose their lives, or leave the righteous path of Buddhism. This practice condition is similar to the Yi Jin Jing Then let's extend it a bit What happens after the internal demons are removed? I am afraid that it is to achieve what the Diamond Sutra says: No self. No one cares. No signs of sentient beings. The appearance of a person without life. That's why Subhuti. A Bodhisattva should be free from all appearances. Develop anuttara-samyak-sambodhicitta. Don't live in color and give birth to your mind. The sound, fragrance, and dharma should not touch the mind. Since this is not this and that is not that, then this is not here, and that is not that, and "I" has no self-image, no person, no sentient being, and no life-span, then "I" is not here Then the "not on this shore, not on the other side, not in the middle" of Evil King Shi Zhixuan's Immortality Seal doesn't coincide with it?

One word! ! ! Wash Linghu Chong's novel! Don't look at it and think about it for yourself!

The protagonist fell in love with Ning Zhongze, and then Ning Zhongze married Yue Buqun. He was not very kind to Linghu Chong, and taught him all the techniques of Gua Gai. It was a classic and old style. It reminded me of the cuckold king who played the flute outside the door to entertain the heroine during her bridal chamber. In this aspect, it looks like Hong Kong-style martial arts. After appearing a few decades later, things get right. Bai Yueguang, who is married to someone else, has a deep friendship and is the apprentice of a cheating master.

Some people's flexible bottom line: Why didn't Linghu Chong talk about the Huashan Cave. Original work: I told you, but the old Yue couple didn't listen. Some people: Can Lao Yue and his wife teleport? Don't you know it's been playing on a loop in their ears? Won't you keep talking until they listen? Some people really have double standards. Linghu Chong wanted to say that he was blocked and it was Linghu Chong's fault. Lao Yue and his wife didn't want to hear it. Ning Zhong even blocked Linghu Chong back directly, but he had no responsibility at all. As expected, it is you who are feudal, and Lao Yue has to kowtow to you 😁

The writing is very good. You can try to arrange other secrets of martial arts in Jin Yong's novels and the treasures that can be obtained in the Ming Dynasty for the protagonist. For example, Huashan School's own "Anti-Liangyi Sword" and Kun The Lun faction's "Liang Yi Sword" can even give Zhang Wuji a headache if combined well, and the Kongtong faction's "Seven Injury Fist" and "Yin Yang Mill" can all be planned. In the original work, both factions exist, but they are small in number and weak in power. The treasure of Zhongda Gongfang, the golden Buddha treasure of Zhongtianning Temple (you can add "Shen Zhao Jing" and "Tang Poetry Sword Technique" to it), the training room of the ancient tomb sect in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" In the two stone chambers connected to the left and right in the middle, there are almost all the exercises of Wang Chongyang and Lin Chaoying. The "Jade Girl Su Xin Sword Technique" in the "Jade Girl Heart Sutra" is at the entrance of the ancient tomb. There are incomplete exercises of the "Nine Yang Sutra". Moreover, Yang Guo has learned almost all the five unique skills in the world. There must be some surviving skills. In the cemetery of Iron Palm Peak, there is the "Iron Palm Skill" that competes with the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon. There should also be traces of it on Peach Blossom Island. The Tibetan Snow Mountain Wheel The temple has the "Flame Knife" and "Dragon and Elephant Prajna Gong". The place where Zhang Wuji's sutras are buried near Zhuwu Lianzhuang in Tianshan has Wang Nangu's "Poison Sutra", Hu Qingniu's "Medical Sutra", Zhang Wuji's "Nine Yang Sutra", and Gusu Yanzi In Wu's cemetery, there are Gusu Murong's "Three Fingers", "Dragon City Sword Technique", and "Star Movement", almost all the martial arts secret books of Xiaoyao Sect in Tong Lao's underground palace on Lingjiu Peak in Kunlun Mountain, and Li Qiushui of Xixia Kingdom left behind Some of the martial arts secrets of the Xiaoyao sect in the Royal Secret Path: "White Rainbow Palm", "Little Wuxiang Magical Skills", "Lingbo Weibu", etc., Dali Tianlong Temple's "Six Meridians Sword Formation", "One Yang Finger", "Kurong Magical Skills",

People like Linghu Chong, who collude with Demon Cult monsters, do not distinguish between right and wrong, and have fans of drunkards who are oblivious to their sins. Again, the right path, even if it is a floor tile like Yu Canghai, has a bottom line. The Demon Cult is truly committed to all kinds of evil, trampling on the bottom line of mankind, and the differences in the world are suddenly revealed 🤭🤭 Stop talking about it After a while, Chong Fen will mention the favor of breaking the temple to save his life again. The hundred times you saved Linghu Chong is not as good as the one that Chong broke the temple to save this time. Any kind of upbringing grace is messed up. In the eyes of Chong Fen, it's just a piece of shit. By the way, I'd like to add that before you broke the temple again, your Chong brother just pretended to commit suicide and let Tian Boguang run away.

I have always felt that Yang Kang was wronged, the son of a well-behaved billionaire, but a beggar father came to recognize him. The important thing is that his mother never told him the truth. In the end, everyone forced him to recognize his father. One had raised him for more than ten years and treated him like a son, and the other was a stranger's biological father. Before he could recover from the truth, he was kidnapped by various morals and forced to recognize his father.

The biggest tragedy in "Swordsman" is Yue Buqun. He has struggled all his life to promote Huashan. The protagonist's position and background are denied and guarded by Yue Buqun. For Lao Yue, the battle of sword energy is equivalent to the current ZZ mistake. That's why I broke into your room in the middle of the night and wanted to kill you. Although I didn't do it, it couldn't change Lao Yue's prejudice against you. You can have an excuse for not passing on the Little Immortality Secret to Yue Buqun. But Ning Zhongze has been so good to you. She has protected you and taken care of you since you were a child. Without her always interceding for you, you would have been killed by your master or Brother Yue. You didn't teach Ning Zhongze the secret of immortality, and you still hid it. If you want to say that you don't have a sense of security, it doesn't matter if no one believes it. It will make sense to protect you more in the future. But if you don't even teach Ning Zhongze, it's really too vicious to teach Linghu Chong, a big white-eyed wolf. When I saw Xiaoao before, I saw Linghu Chong's unrestrained, unrestrained and wanton attitude. When I grew up, I realized that Linghu Chong was like a child from a poor family in today's society. Occasionally, he made his first pot of gold from society, but he did not give a penny to improve the conditions of his family. He did not pay attention to Lao Yue's difficulties in earning money to support the family and send his children to school. He also made friends with some unscrupulous people outside, borrowed money from usury, and gambled. As a result, all these people came to force Lao Yue to pay off his debts. And you still recognize him as your godfather outside, knowing that he is Lao Yue's mortal enemy, and you still recognize him as your godfather, without remembering Lao Yue's painstaking upbringing. You are such an unfaithful, unfilial, unkind and unjust person, and you still teach him your little secret of longevity. This is really poisonous. Linghu Chong is just a white-eyed wolf who eats alone. What are you trying to do?

If Yue Buqun is a bad person, then he should simply find a way to accept Ning Zhongze. There is no need to write a bit ambiguous and not accept him. It's not impossible for the author to choose between Yue and Linghu Chong to write Yue as the bad guy, but giving Linghu Chong Kung Fu for free seems too brainless. Firstly, a child can't hide things, so it's hard for a teacher to not know if he is given an internal skill to practice openly. Secondly, it seems that the protagonist is being used as a tool for free. Fan fiction, especially when the protagonist of the original work is not a perfect person, is very taboo about giving too many adventures, which is tantamount to screening readers.

You're not invincible yet, so you gave the cheating technique to Yue Buqun's disciple Linghu Chong. What do you think? After a few chapters, you start screening readers?

I got mad after reading Chapter 8. Is Linghu Chong the author's biological father or something? ? This pure white-eyed wolf, the senior sister is so kind to the protagonist. If the protagonist's skills are for fear of causing trouble, then no one should teach them. However, the protagonist is given such a scumbag as Linghu Chong and even calls him "don't waste his talent". It's hilarious.

Another one licking Linghu Chong flashed away

It's getting better Finally there are novels that I can read in the martial arts section. It's not easy.

The chapters you wrote after going down the mountain were average. Now I suspect that you bought the first ten chapters with money.

Don't be fooled by a few ** and read more posts, especially those with a lot of comments. Then you will know how poisonous this book is.

This novel is well written, but has constant poisonous points and is constantly fed with shit.

If you don't develop your sect after getting money, you will give your head iron to the corrupt officials in the border army. Is Ming Dynasty weak because it has no money? Then it has been corrupted. If you really want to save the world, can't you recruit orphans and train them in Huashan? Next to Huashan is Guyuan Military Town, one of the nine sides. If you really want to develop, just train disciples to infiltrate and raise your own soldiers! Wulin Jianghu, boss, what did you write...

Let me introduce the background of the protagonist. A 5-year-old child just went to Huashan to join the Sword Sect for two or three days, and then the Sword Sect was destroyed by the group. The protagonist and the sword sect have no deep emotional foundation at all, so the head of the air sect keeps him as his apprentice. Let's talk about the main character's poisonous points first. It's been three years since I traveled back in time. I've practiced martial arts and given up on myself. I feel like a waste. I can still accept this. After all, people always want to give up when they fail. Maybe the author wants to create a growth-oriented protagonist. Then you said that the protagonist can't calm down when practicing Qigong. I can barely accept it. If modern people travel back in time to meditate and practice for a long time, this may happen. But you have traveled through time for three years, and you also said that the reason why you can't calm down is because you have short videos of dancing ladies in your mind? ? ? Also, even if you gave up on yourself before the plug-in came out, you will always give up on yourself and blame others after the plug-in was given to you. Are you sure this protagonist is not mentally ill? Then there is Yue Buqun. Two or three days after the protagonist entered the Sword Sect, the Sword Sect was destroyed, and then he was accepted as a disciple by the head of the Qi Sect. The protagonist and Yue Buqun Ning Zhongze have lived together for more than ten years. Yue Buqun is still wary of the protagonist, right? Yue Buqun in the original work is not so narrow-minded. He has been wary of the protagonist for more than ten years since he was a child. He has had a dog for more than ten years and has a deep relationship. There are also plug-ins about the protagonist, which can be integrated and upgraded. I think I can accept it if you practice it on your own without giving it to anyone, and I can accept it if you want to share it with your closest people, but you won't share it with the head master who treats you like his own son until his death, and you won't share it with your senior sister who has been very good to you for more than ten years. You are not willing to teach Linghu Chong, who has just come to the mountain, to teach him the skills?

This author asked for comments from the navy and posted the votes himself. A large number of Shennong have already died.

Overall, I can read it. There are few poisonous points, the writing is good, and the writing is fascinating. The shortcomings are that there are few poisonous points, but the poisonous points are big. I borrowed the skills that I borrowed from Golden Finger to combine, and handed it over to Linghu Chong after I was full. To be honest, I don't think there is anything wrong with it if you give it to Ning Zhongze or Yue Buqun before he started killing. Teaching Linghu Chong is really mentally ill. The time when the compensation was given later, although I was a little unhappy, it was not a big problem. Linghu Chong was really off-putting.

During the battle at Jade Girl Peak, it was clearly explained in the original work that except Feng Qingyang, Feng Congcheng and the others were not in Huashan and did not participate! Where does the saying go down the mountain come from?

Being an airbender doesn't mean you don't practice swordsmanship, and being a swordsman doesn't mean you don't practice qi. It's just that the outline is different. There is no such thing as practicing one kind and not practicing at all. The protagonist's question is extremely strange. I asked the protagonist in turn, there are two Huashan disciples, one has practiced internal force for ten years but does not understand swordsmanship at all, and the other has practiced swordsmanship for ten years but knows nothing about internal force. Who is more powerful?

Evaluate this book objectively. Overall, the writing is quite good, with a focus on laughter and pride, mixed with martial arts, and a relatively broad world view. The character of the protagonist is okay, the writing style, fighting, plot, supporting roles and villain creation are all okay. Like Sword Out of Emei, I am the Front, it can be regarded as a masterpiece of martial arts. Although many readers scolded him, why he didn't accept Ning Zhongze, why he casually passed on internal skills, why he couldn't even beat Dongfang Bubai who had not practiced Sunflower for the first time in Jianghu... I can only say that everyone has their own preferences. The more serious shortcomings are the shortcomings of Shuangdian: 1. Time travel martial arts, Shuangdian recommends martial arts first and foremost. This book is okay, but it lacks my own hard work, inspiration, and planning for the golden finger of martial arts. The early stage is mainly about encountering any problems. What should I accept? The lack of active search, completion, and upgrading resulted in a weak main plot in the early stage, and also lack of surprises and admiration for readers. If it had been earlier like the complementary Golden Bell of Shen Zhao Jing, allowing the protagonist to have stronger planning, the early stage of this book would have been a lot brighter. 2. The time travel feature of Shuangdian 2 is seriously insufficient. It's martial arts, yes, but martial arts is also history. You, a modern person, don't know the importance of money? Don't know the importance of steel? Are spring carriages uncomfortable? Does distilled wine taste bad? As a result, the protagonist is really like a knight, wandering around the world, and when he has money, he donates it to the anti-Japanese generals. Fortunately, the writing and plot setting are very good, otherwise the popularity would have been lost in the early stage. 3. The third cool point is that women lack love. There are so many female heroes in martial arts. Since you are writing about martial arts, you must have a harem. You can also be ambiguous or scumbag, especially those who have a high status and cannot rely on the protagonist to accompany them day and night. It does not affect the plot. Just write it! However, martial arts is difficult to write. If it is written like this, it is definitely a masterpiece. As for scolding the data, I don't think it is. Overall, good and interesting

The logic of teaching Linghu Chong but not Ning Zhongze is actually easy to understand. In the original work, Linghu Chong did not tell anything about Feng Qingyang even when he was expelled from his master, so he was guaranteed to keep his promise. What about Ning Zhongze? Who can guarantee that she will not turn towards her husband? If the protagonist teaches her, wouldn't it be embarrassing if she changes hands and teaches Yue Buqun?

A lot of people in the comment area said that Linghu Chong was washed away, but have you ever considered that the Linghu Chong in this book is still the same person as the original one? The growing environment has changed, and the martial arts strength has also changed. Is Linghu Chong, who was raised by the protagonist, still the same person as in the original work? You haven't read the book, have you? If calling Linghu Chong would mean scolding, then the author should change Linghu Chong's name to Linghu Goudan.