After the Eldest Lady Fell in Love with Me

The book is good, and the characters are not broken. The advantage is that the male and female protagonists use each other's CPU strategy and the male protagonist controls others, and gives out benefits from time to time. The male and female protagonists deal with each other very well, the logic is smooth, and it can accept the recommended reading of bad guys and hopeless people. The following is a demining guide for sensitive groups. The protagonist is bad, the heroine is bad, the succubus is like a moth to a flame, the weak are controlled, the nobility of people cannot be seen here, emotions are chips here, sex is entertainment and means here, and the author does not seem to intend to write a reversal, which is very unsuitable for those with glassy hearts or sunny innocence. The following are personal thoughts. It's too tragic. I hope the people in the story are more noble (the author can just ignore this sentence)

I hope the author can transcend the framework of CPU and use the introduction of emotion to manipulate the entire situation from a higher level. If it is always limited to the framework of pick-up techniques and emotional consultation, it will be a bit inferior. The protagonist's excessive combat power is also a hidden danger. Stronger combat power requires stronger challenges and more obvious foils. It is a big challenge to write a plot with twists and turns on the premise of already having a strong foundation. Come on, author, and write better and exciting articles!

When it's over, I'll make up for a monthly pass.

To readers: I regret to inform you that my first book "After the Eldest Girl Falling in Love with Me", which was once titled "Tokyo: I Raised a Succubus", was inspected for risky content and has been temporarily blocked. When I received this message, I was in a taxi, getting ready to have breakfast. I originally thought that the daily bookings had been 10,000 for a month, but the average booking reached 500. Maybe it was because I came from a recommended website. After all, today is Thursday. When you open it, you will see that people are stupid. I didn't have time to think too much at the time, so I immediately took a screenshot and went to the editor. The reply I got was "I'm so dead, let's write a new book". These seven words announced the end of the first book in my life. Really sad. The new book actually already has an outline, and the level may have indeed improved, but I still feel sad that the story of Tokyo should not stop here. The last time I was so sad was when I lost the first car in my life, a second-hand Cruze that I bought frugally and paid off a loan. It was scrapped on the road because I had no money to maintain it. I used to hear people say that they would be sad if they lost something because there is no better substitute. Today I found that this is not the case. Even if the editor is more optimistic about the new book, it may no longer be recommended in the first round, but it still feels that it should not be like this and does not want to be like this. The results of this book, one month after it was put on the shelf, accumulated 57,415 subscriptions, with an average subscription of 568, and a maximum subscription of 1,384. The results are very average, and the level of popularity cannot be said to be good, but I just want to finish writing it, and I really want to give them an ending. Zuo Yuxing was just about to stand up, Aka Rankaku hadn't waited for the answer she wanted, and Hanajima Yumeko hadn't moved into Asuka's house yet. I don't know how to explain it to 1384 readers. I still want to finish writing, even if no one reads it. The new book "After the Cat Lady Fell in Love with Me" has been released and has been reviewed. After the signing process is completed and the new book issue is sorted out, I will slowly continue writing the story of Tokyo. Maybe there will be a day when it will be released. There are three volumes at the back of this book, namely November, the flowers and moon in Kyoto, December, the heavy snow in Tokyo, and January, the world full of desire and love. The story was originally scheduled to end on January 17th, Chiran Crane's birthday. Forget it, stop talking and go watch the sea. The sea in Qingdao Badaguan is really beautiful. The pass is difficult, but the road ahead is bright and long.                                              Catching Cats and Brewing Wine

The biggest highlight of this book is the actions of the protagonist. Unlike the protagonists of other romance novels, the male protagonist is a deep-thinking person who will not fall into mental infighting about having a harem like the male protagonists of many romance novels. I hope that the male protagonist will achieve the harem in his own way. I guess it will be like the sister and maid, leaving the three eldest ladies with no choice but to accept the harem. The plot of the book is really good. In addition, I personally think that the male protagonist loves Aksomekaku. In Karuizawa Akazuru said that those who love her cannot hurt her. At the end of Hokkaido, Aka Ranzuru also said once that the male protagonist was actually attracted to her, but he just didn't say it. In short, I hope that the male protagonist's style will be maintained, and there will be no torture plots where the female protagonist does not accept it and the other female protagonist does not want it. This is also very torturing for readers.

Is it your kid who fainted with his elbow in the Easter match?

As the title states, a person reads a book based on his own factors, such as his or her personal worldview, outlook on knowledge, and values. These concepts originate from each person's different experiences. These different experiences and one's own feelings form different people. Then the root cause of reading a book is different people. Therefore, different people will inevitably have different evaluations when reading the same book. Because I have nothing to do, I summarized a template for reading from my personal perspective (the word template is inappropriate because I can't think of other words, and this is just a personal perspective) Writing. . . I personally think there are three levels of writing. The lowest is the kind that people can't stand, the medium is the kind that can be read, and the normal ones can be read with medium writing (different factors are involved here). For example, I used to prefer novels with depth, but I don't like the kind of novels that are written by novices, but I have a good impression of novels with depth) type. . . Some people like fantasy, and some people like Xianxia, because an individual has different preferences at different times, and these different periods are determined by his different environments and different moods at the moment (take me as an example, I liked Xianxia when I was young, and after a while I started to I like fantasy cities, which is determined by my different moods. Now I like Japanese romance novels, and I even don't like them if they don't have Japanese names. Don't complain! This is determined by different moods) The characters. . . If a person likes a character, then the character will reflect himself to some extent, and he himself will also determine what kind of character he will like. There are many such as those that are decisive, gentle, and funny. Different characters will affect his evaluation of the book (also take my personal example, I used to like Fang Ping and Chen Pingan, then I went to watch Fang Yuan, and then I liked to read those kings, etc. Now I like the Tokyo Love Danger Game, mainly because of the sense of substitution!! If you ask me to read Fang Yuan when I like Chen Pingan, then I will definitely not have a great impression, this is because People at different times) Just like the purpose of reading a book is to have a sense of immersion in a character, then because of the difference in people, I will not like the Nine Dog Training Book for the time being. Compared with him, I will prefer the Tokyo Love Threat Game. The reason is just a personal problem In addition, what I said is not perfect, such as the plot, supporting roles, and many other things have not been added. There are definitely more than the three I mentioned above. It is due to my lack of personal expression ability and my inability to specifically perfect and express it. Everyone is welcome to express their own views and opinions, and at the same time improve my personal theory. Finally, everyone comes to Qidian to read novels, and pay attention to pleasing yourself. As long as you like it, read it, and don't read it if you don't like it. Don't get too entangled, and remember to please yourself, just like what I said, it is to please myself. Everyone should be able to understand my theory. If you don't understand, feel free to comment. You can help me improve it, you can complain about me, but at this moment, as long as you please yourself, it may be different in the future, because time can change everything. Everyone is different, don't impose your will on others.

Here's a note for all of you Shen Nong friends who are here for free: If the brainwave matches, it's fairy grass. If it doesn't match, it's also good food. Sometimes the behavior of the male protagonist may be too kind for people to accept. Book friends, please act within your ability.

Horai Yukie turns out not to be a villain! Damn it!

To be honest, this is my first time to see someone win the resurrection match 👍

The description of the eldest lady is a bit weak, I love the succubus so much! I feel like I can write a plot line (you have to have a clear outline) Then why don't we slow down a little and polish the details? (Write less and leave some time to revise the article) Of course, I support the author very much! I hope it will be more perverted and emotionally rich! 😍😍😍

Twin Maid

The subject matter of this love-is-war novel is very good, but I think it is a failure because the sense of system existence in this novel is too strong or the help provided by external objects is too great. Because the most attractive part of this kind of novel should be that the male and female protagonists are at the same level and pull each other off. But now it feels like the male protagonist is not as good as the female protagonist without a system (succubus), and the male protagonist's level is much worse. I just feel that the current male protagonist has no ambition, no talent, and does not have the heart-wrenching magnanimity of the villain. He also occasionally likes to use some dirty tricks. (It's not that there's something wrong with being evil, but I think the male protagonist should be a magnanimous villain like Cao Cao)

The explanation of the "love system" is a little surprising (mainly because I read too many love articles and suddenly there was an explanation of the so-called love system. This setting is quite good) The writing is good, it is comfortable to read, there are not many poisonous points, the characters are full-bodied, there are no uncomfortable behaviors, and the climax is also very good at stimulating the reader's emotions. Overall, what I saw is still very good (´∀｀*)

Two words describe this book. It's a masterpiece. I haven't read such a fun book in a long time. I just don't know why the popularity is so low.

I said that I had been feeling weak recently. It turned out that it was Drunk Cat who wished me every day and played the flute every night.

It's a pity that this book is not very popular, but the writing is really good. The author has cut off the next two books, and I haven't started reading them yet, but I read in the testimonial that I don't like the protagonists of the last two books, so I can't write anymore. Why don't I try to re-skin the next one, Makoto Asuka. The character of the protagonist should be strong-willed and clear-cut. I have an idea. The main plot should be based on conquering the eldest lady. I can make up another reason. For example, I can time-travel into the body of a down-and-out young man who has just lost his family, and then choose to marry into another family for revenge.

Does the author Ji need some Dihuang Pills? Can he write 10,000 words in one day? It's not enough.

It's a very nice book. I've ordered all of it and supported it.

What kind of aircraft is the author working on and hasn't been updated yet?

The male protagonist is a scumbag, I hope he is more scumbag!

The writing is very good. The author is great. I will give you all the monthly tickets

I hope the next book will have an ending where he gets stabbed

The protagonist circulates among four yanderes and heals himself

It's so cool, why isn't it popular?

Shugenye can't sleep

Why is it gone again

It was the first time I saw the combination of two dimensions and games. I was a little surprised. It was very interesting.

Additional refinement😚

Take a few bites first to see if it's poisonous👆🤓