Be a Common Man

The author writes very well! I thought it was very appetizing at first, and then it got better and better! The explanation in the book is very clear. In the beginning, there are causes behind the effects, and then there are causes behind the effects! The logic system is very complete, and the whole text becomes fluent every time I read it! The hearty feeling can also stimulate my own thinking! What I thought didn't make sense at first, you'll understand why when you look at it later! Now I am very curious about how the author will arrange the role of Liu Huchen! Let's take a bold guess, is it from the upper world? This book is definitely one of the best works of mortal fandom I have ever read! Recommended! Recommend!

The introduction is a huge poison. Why is the second spirit root arranged to practice the five spirit root exercises? Why are they not arranged to eat shit? How can the second spirit root be practiced without the other three spiritual roots? Normally there is no movement. Show the immortal cultivation techniques to mortals without spiritual roots. There is no movement after practicing until death. In another case, three spiritual roots are missing, only two of the spiritual energy are absorbed into the body, and the other three are missing. The five elements are unbalanced, and the body explodes and dies due to forced refining. However, the brief introduction to the body of the acquired five elements is really made up. What the author means: I say practice makes you practice, there is no reason. Since you don't care, don't use logic, don't use your brain, you can ascend to immortality in a second, and let the protagonist trim his hair, he can just write and create whatever he wants.

Five Elements Spiritual Roots, does the protagonist have a mine at home, or is he highly qualified, or is he a god? It's outrageous that this thing can build a foundation under the mortal system!

I'm really convinced. As soon as I found the solution to Xin Ruyin's Dragon Roar Body, they left. Didn't you even look for it? Finally, we formed the Yuanying. When we returned to Tiannan, the people were dead. We mourned for a while, and then the harem continued to accept girls. I tm Xin Ruyin is my favorite female character among mortals, followed by Yuan Yao... But in the end, their endings are not as good as those of the original novel. Looking at the title of your novel, you are just being a common person, double. I can't bear to act hypocritically as a nanny for Han Li. In some plots, I got the opportunity and directly donated it to Han Li. I won't pick on you. After all, Han Li is also providing elixirs to the protagonist, but you don't want to. You should deal with the opportunity. If you have the strength to take it, leave it to Han Li and let him take it. One will not benefit, and the other will not strengthen the friendship. I feel so bad. Protagonist, you drove Qi Yunxiao away just to let Xin Ruyin die with regrets. When the protagonist's heart palpitated in the first turn of Chongyuan Palace in the third turn, my first reaction was that something had happened to Xin Ruyin. As a result, she got together with Chen Qiaoqian and directly took the mission to Yuejing. Knowing that he would be in seclusion for a long time, he just refused to take a look at his confidante who had no background. If you have a background, you don't dare to break through the bottom line, and if you don't have a background, you don't cherish it and keep it with you.

I can't stand the introduction of the two-spirit-root cultivation method of five-spirit-root cultivation.

The reason for abandoning the pit: 1. The introduction said that there is no golden finger, and forced arrangements are everywhere. 2. There are too many female protagonists. 3. Randomly change the settings of the original work. 4. There are too many branch lines and they are too long. This is a fanfic. Please try to focus on the main line and don't write the branch lines too long. 5. I came here to see the protagonist pretending to be 13. In order to reduce the protagonist's excessive combat power, he was forcibly injured, and not just once. I was speechless. 6. The setting is too advanced. Where did the human world come from so many things and knowledge that are rare even in the upper world? 7. There is no distinction between Lingbao and Tongtian Lingbao. At first, I thought it was just like the original work. The Lingbao was called Tongtian Lingbao in the human world. Later I found out that it was not the Tongtian Lingbao referred to in the upper world. Where did so many Tongtian Lingbao come from in the human world? Through the setting, one or two items are already too much. Why are there more later?

The author's writing is very good. I have invested in it. The beginning of Wulinggen also has the flavor of a mortal. I would like to ask the author who the heroine is. Just one heroine or one or two. I hope the author will not collect vases or start a harem.

The author's stallion talent is so strong that the protagonist lived two lives, but when he saw a little girl on the roadside, he was stunned. More than once, I was speechless.

The magic modification is too ugly and extremely poisonous! However, the author feels that his magic modification is very good 😥

Today's novels are becoming more and more like games, and games are becoming more and more like novels. Recently, in the story of Black Myth Wukong, I saw that fan fiction can be written in this way. A new work adapted from the original work is just a fan fiction~ And there is a sentence in the cross talk joke, let's carry forward the cross talk career~ remove the dross and keep the worse~ It really corresponds to the online literary world. Whether it is the original work of Journey to the West or a masterpiece of online literature, what is provided is the blueprint. Second creation not only needs the blueprint as a reference, but also needs the foundation and accumulation. They all belong to cultivating immortals, one has connotation, and the other is to create a new account and open a plug-in to live broadcast and play dungeons. The text of cultivating immortals originally refers to Taoist classics to pave the way for its own world. When I saw the black myth Wukong, I realized what another meaning of the cauldron is, not just the dual cultivation of joy. It even refines people or demons into elixirs. Provide immortality to the bosses. Corresponding to the mortal world, it just happened to be stuck. What is the medicine that Han Li used to refine the elixir in the Chaos Star Sea~the inner elixir of the monster. What is the purpose of cultivating immortality? Immortality. What to major in cultivating immortals~The soul is immortal What to comprehend in cultivating immortals~The Dao (Dao of Heaven) They all say that cultivating immortals is cruel, but what the fan fiction mentions is not cruelty but men who kill, kill and rob outside, and marry a bunch of women to accompany and support them in the cave. This, this, this... Why don't the male protagonist just start the game under the cover of the moon, jump to the door of acacia, and marry a bunch of little girls to enjoy acacia every day? The performance of Liu Bei, who has a completely different style and loves harem beauties, and who loves Liu Bei has improved significantly. Either you can cultivate your original intention, use demons to enter the Tao, only cultivate yourself, follow the laws of the sky and the earth, the demonic energy is overwhelming, and Long Aotian's style of dragon's inverse scales will cause death if touched, etc. Are also good. Or it is even better if you are upright, mentally clean, pursue the enlightenment of the way of heaven, and practice hard to achieve another way of heaven and replace it. In the original work, why old readers call Han Li Han Lao Mo, Han Paopao, Han Tianzun, etc., That is the character personality of the original work. As for my fellow fans, there are still a few who still remember the names of those live broadcast accounts. I joined a group called Yanyue Zong Daily and asked the author: Does your book have a heart-searching part? The answer is no. Is there a plot for the third part? The answer is not to consider only the spiritual world. Is there any inner growth and transformation of the protagonist? The answer is that I write a cool novel, and the protagonist must be smooth, otherwise there will be no market. Isn't that just a straight line? Isn't this just a game guide, a cool writing route? Isn't it just a brainless and semi-splendid writing route? It's more fun. Isn't it just a simple mode game with plug-ins enabled? There are still many readers who pursue this good one and that other good one. What's so good about it? A male protagonist who likes the harem joins the Moon-Sealing Sect and then falls in love with the younger sister of the Moon-Sealing Sect. He goes to the Yellow Wind Valley to choose a concubine, and even meets Nangong Wan. All the main storylines are collected, all the techniques and secrets are learned, yes, all are collected. Simple mode allows plug-ins to be used to live-stream game strategies and plots. Hey... I write ancient urban literature with a fairy skin hanging on it. You plow the fields and I weave cloth... I write a skin-changing book with a fan tag. Readers who have lost so much hair in exchange for it only need to read the opening chapter and go directly to the table of contents to understand the whole book. Why~Copy it~ Looking back at Black Myth Wukong, think about its outline and its method of dealing with emotions. The perfect one may not necessarily be the best. It doesn't mean that it is difficult to calm down, but it can really be peaceful. It is indeed peaceful. I hope that the gang of planners will return to the Internet literary world. Is there still a way to survive? Only one person can experience the good or bad.

What the hell is this introduction? Can practicing Five Elements Exercise with Two Spiritual Roots actually achieve Five Spiritual Roots? Then people from the spiritual world need to replenish chicken feather spiritual roots.

If the three spiritual roots can be supplemented with exercises to complete the five elements, the two saints of Tianxing will not die in depression.

The Five Spiritual Roots persuaded 80% of the people to retreat, and Han Li sent the Sky Bottle to persuade 10% of the people to retreat. What do you think, author? Are you doing this as a fanfic?

First, the protagonist keeps talking about stability, stability, stability. What is the result? When encountering the Jiutian Regret Sky Bell, he rashly suffered a loss, and then reflected on it. Not long after, he went to Fangshi and returned to Fangshi. He was so arrogant that he almost lost it again... May I ask the author, what exactly did the protagonist reflect on? Force the author to copy "Stability" 10,000 times, otherwise you won't know what "stability" means! Second, the setting is nothing new. Spells, exercises, principles of cultivating immortals, weapon refining... I haven't seen a single innovation. Even if you refine weapons and build a motorcycle, I would say you have an idea. But if you read the novel yourself, after removing the part of "A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", it is just a common fantasy routine. This is a fan! There is only one way out for fans: take a new path that is different from Han Li! If there is nothing new, you might as well read the original work! The world view can be the same, but the details can be different. The time travelers must be a little different from the natives! Whether you are cultivating immortality scientifically, cultivating immortality by covering the sky, cultivating immortality by coiling dragons... Or anything else, it's all fine. If it doesn't work for you, you should have watched "Journey to the West" and follow it! You can't travel back in time. All the knowledge from your previous life is useless, and you don't have any ideas. You have to rely on "luck" throughout the journey, right? Come on!

Chapter 23: I can't hold on any longer. The Sky Bottle is just a golden finger for mortal novels. If you want to grab it, grab it. If you don't want to grab it, make it up yourself. You are already an author writing online articles. Is it so difficult to make up a golden finger? So cowardly? What am I afraid of if I have the final say in my novel?

Han Li is the protagonist. You don't have to worry about it. Don't write Han Laomo so innocently. And Han Laomo's Taoist heart and caution are engraved in his bones. Don't write him down like he's mindless and still needs you to worry about him.

Taking apart the CP and working as a nanny is really both a sign and a memorial. It seems so noble to do it without grabbing the vials. The Taoist companion I was looking for, the protagonist's head also has a slight green color, and there will be no such plot as the first acquaintance with Chen Qiaoqian without Senior Brother Lu. Needless to say, Xin Ruyin, the protagonist found a way to break the body of Dragon Roar, but later found out that Xin Ruyin felt that she was not worthy of the protagonist and ran away. There will be no such thing in the future. Man, when you see this, you will know that the author is pretending to be very excited. I think the title of the book is called a common person, it is better to be called a private person. It has written more than two million words and has such a dismal result. This can only be said that the author deserves it. The two-word evaluation is well deserved 👍👍👍

I don't understand the use of refining so many rubbish natal magic weapons. The protagonist is too out of touch and takes too much for granted.

Talent! Watching Han Li at the first level of Qi training holding the Sky Vase, you are afraid of the Han Li in the future. . . Is there no future version of yourself? The author doesn't want the protagonist to take Han Li's Sky Palm Vase and the opportunity. Why should he always be next to Han Li. . .

I read more than a dozen chapters! I have no desire to read any more! The first three chapters give people the feeling that they are pretending to be mysterious!

Accepted, Xing Palace is such a wealthy person, the twin saint daughters have no auxiliary elixir to conceive, and Ling Xiaotian wants to steal the protagonist. Do you accept it? This is a plot that can be written by humans?

I read a reader's book review today and thought it was very good. I couldn't help but post it and give him a thumbs up Book Friends 20231117153420711 Intern 2023-11-27 15:51 Fan fiction is the supplement and continuation of the worldview of the original novel. The focus is on the deconstruction of the original worldview and adding one's own views to the protagonist to construct. Instead of doing the same thing as the protagonist of the original work, which makes the protagonist seem to have no opinion and depth, many protagonists of fan fiction rely on the so-called plot advantages to forcefully apply the development path of the protagonist of the original work, resulting in the world view of the original work being turned into a static background board. Fan fiction deconstructs the plot of the original worldview from the perspective of the protagonist. In fact, the protagonist intervenes in the construction of the worldview, otherwise things that suddenly appear that are not in the original worldview cannot be explained at all. Almost all those who can read fan fiction have read the original novels and have a certain understanding of the original things and formed a preliminary perceptual understanding. If the author wants to output his opinions, he must be logically consistent, otherwise readers will use the original works to debate the author in order to defend their own opinions. Only by deconstructing, integrating and constructing the original worldview can the author get rid of the influence of the original worldview, and readers can accept your new definition of things in the original worldview. Writing fan fiction is the same as the ancients rewriting Confucian books. Even when Confucius was still alive, he would say, "This is my Confucian book." This is not what I meant. My reply: The book friend is really knowledgeable and insightful. I really hope to meet and have a good chat! To be honest, when I was arranging the game, I added some of my understanding of the mortal world bit by bit. It was not until I did research on the biggest bugs later that I connected them together, and then formed a set of world cognition that belongs to the protagonist, and determined a path that belongs entirely to the protagonist. I think I will make some adjustments, maybe adjust the entire outline that I have written, but the first two hundred chapters should remain unchanged, I can only start adding them later!

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Upright? If you don't care for yourself, you will be punished by heaven and earth. Your hypocrisy makes me sick.

In fact, I feel that if you give an opportunity, you should give it an opportunity, but don't give it too outrageously and without any logic. This aspect of the Soul-Calming Bell is very speechless. Besides, it was written earlier that the protagonist has excellent understanding, so he should also be a master at learning magic and various arts. It would be fine to give it away like this.

I was so stupid that I forcibly arranged three chickens for Han Li. They were really chickens, the kind they sell. I arranged three chickens for Han Li to serve as concubines. You are also awesome.

The author would like to explain, how do you let go of the struggle between the great avenues? If you get the Sky Palm Vase and develop it carefully, you can at least transform into a god or even ascend to the fairy world. If you don't build a foundation, it's still far away. Just like you are trying to rob an antique with someone who is much weaker than you but may have (but may not necessarily have) a background that can make you live a life of food and clothing and prosperity. If you don't rob it, you will live a life similar to that of a low-level migrant worker. Should you rob it, or not? This is the decision to change the name. Since ancient times, the battle between the avenues has been the most cruel. Either you die or I live. If Han Li knows that you know about the Heavenly Vase and are planning to rob it, will he let you go?

Don't make the protagonist too stupid.

The author has been delaying for a long time. Hurry up and take down Ling Yuling.

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