In Hong Kong, the Winner Is King

I really think you need to push the plot further, and the protagonist you wrote is really a bit silly. . You don't want to be a young and Dangerous guy and you want to find a backer, and you haven't written down the timeline yet. How are you going to use the 300 million bond? The biggest failure is being a star. . . You have a movie company, but you don't have theater chains. If you don't rely on Wang Dong to divide the accounts, you can be dragged to death. And you wrote that the box office explosion of Hong Kong movies happened in the 1990s. The main industries in Hong Kong are finance and real estate. At this time, you can't keep up with the industrial industry at all. You can only make profits from investment. If you add the big era, it must be the 1990s. Then hurry up and buy Li's, do some entertainment, earn dollars abroad, engage in some high-tech, don't be stupid and write about the underworld. If you really write about the underworld, would you like to see if you have a spokesperson, or cultivate one? Don't say you can't clean it up, anything can be solved if you have money. If your industry becomes bigger, it will not collapse at all. Hong Kong Island will no longer want those job opportunities?

I'm speechless. So many Hong Kong dramas and worlds have been combined, and finally I want to make a movie. Author, what are you thinking? And these Hong Kong dramas are much more exciting than Free America. He has no trump cards of his own and no power of his own. It's not just as simple as the kidnapping of the richest man Li's son. But the normal development is not to gather all the people around you and want to make money. Not to mention the other dads who followed the Ding brothers in the great era and bought a lot of money. Or simply kidnapped the entire family, at that time. Is it so clear to distinguish between black and white? Only the barrel of a gun is the hardest. After you get the money, you can buy some equipment to build an independent island and build an independent country. Then you can make a few big changes and improve your hard power. It's not much better than making a movie. Finally, we will establish several companies similar to Blackwater in the world. Taking any path is better than making a movie, secretly making something big before Hong Kong's return. Put the Political Department, the Education Bureau. And all the rats in the legislative department have been wiped out. Sometimes diplomatic relations are established with the mainland. They can even cooperate to develop the economy. Relying on the demographic dividend of the mainland, your small country will develop.

Maybe I didn't read it carefully enough. As a cool novel, you give me so many tricks, you're a prophet of plot, you're powerful, you're handsome and strong, but I almost didn't feel any real pleasure Many online articles will dissuade readers because of their brainless plots, but what's different about you is that you're naive. I've rarely seen someone like you after reading online articles for so long But my writing skills are actually pretty good, and it's smooth to read. If you learn how to write online articles, you should be able to make a living from it.

He keeps saying that there are only women but no heroines, but he has been entangled with a gangster lady Wang Fengyi for so long? It's exactly like the rhythm of a royal empress. The protagonist is just an outstanding martial artist, and he just wants to take over? In the film and television industry at that time, there were no theaters. Want to become fat in one bite? What about dreaming? Just rely on the protagonist's strength? Memory? Dream on! ! ! Relying on force, the story of Bruce Lee tells us, is of no use! Rely on memory? Korean drama The Youngest Son of a Chaebol Family This movie tells us that it is also useless. So, depending on the protagonist's behavior, he will either get a job halfway or compromise and become a rich man. As for the legend of an era and global domination, forget about it and just go to sleep.

The first part is okay, but after chapter 40 it's like everyone is drinking.

Clearly, clearly, clearly

The biggest problem is that the writing is too detailed, not the plot, but the content. You are writing an online novel, not a script. There is no need to write out all the characters in every shape, coupled with the psychological analysis of the actions, it is too tiring to read. The key is that the characters with some roles are written in this way, which makes it difficult to watch. However, the plot slowly advances and the connection is very good.

See Chapter 112. I really can't stand it anymore. This is not how you write Hong Kong TV series.

It's a bit difficult to write, and it's not exciting at all. It's not as good as the last book written for Marvel. Anyway, the last book was a book where the character of the Xianxia was inconsistent and too heavy-handed. After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

According to the author's writing method, the layout breaks out of most of the plot of the movie, and one or two chapters are not enough to read.

Why does this introduction smell like an emperor and a god of war?

Did the protagonist travel across time just to become a star and open an entertainment company? !

Too complicated, too slow to start, and no obvious climax. (There's not enough color, so I just took it all in one stroke)

You should cut this one off as soon as possible, and continue to open another Marvel book. Summarize the bad points of the previous book, and you are actually very good at avoiding the bad points. I will give you a summary of the poisonous points of the previous book (which I personally think are poisonous). First, the characters summoned do not meet the strength that readers think they should have (Lucar fought Kingpin, and the battle was hard). Second, the Xianxia character does not match Marvel. Third, the summoned character is out of control and even dead. Fourthly, some places ended abruptly when the climax was reached, such as the sudden end of the King of Fighters competition, which was very uncomfortable.

I saw Meng Na and ordered this book

Where is the harem I want? I'm not happy either. I can watch it or not.

Others are written like NPCs

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It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away!

As long as your protagonist accepts Sister Marry, I will watch it

Traveling through Hong Kong dramas has to be a harem, because there are so many female stars in Hong Kong movies, and choosing one over another will affect readers who don't want that one! But please don't have a harem just for the sake of a harem. Don't break up some CPs that are not that bad if they should exist! Otherwise, there were hundreds of movies in 80-90-00, each of which required at least one woman, and you would have hundreds of harems? ! 🤔😅