How Can a Succubus Be a Hero?

The writing is quite good, but the main character is not irreplaceable in the slightest, so I don't have much of an impression of this character when watching it, and sometimes I find it boring.

Readership: 858454280 If you decide to give up, please tell me below this post where the poisonous points and lightning points are, so that I can learn from the experience for my next book. Just talk about the shortcomings. As far as I know, the problems are: the protagonist is not focused enough, the wits are not outstanding, the sense of oppression is not strong enough, there is no hook, there are too many typos, and the harem is incongruous after changing to pure love and passion. The current data of this book is at the bottom of the same period, but I will not cut it. I will strive to finish it with 700,000 words. The follow-up reading ratio is even less than the single digits of the trial push. The collection-to-read reading ratio has reached an astonishing 400:1. It is estimated that the collection ratio will be even worse after it is released. In jargon, it means the writing is broken. If you were a rational person, you would have cut the book and opened a trumpet at this moment. But just like what I said in the novel, "I don't dodge or avoid my pitches, and I will never run away from difficulties." I will persist until the 700,000 words are completed. "The so-called starting game means fighting with players who cannot play on their backs." There are so many people crying in forums and post bars begging to sign a contract, but I signed a contract, but it was a eunuch. This is absolutely unjustifiable. "Those dead souls in Writers' Square will not let me go." When I was twelve years old, reading books in the citizen library, I had a dream. I want to enter Dengeki Bunko. It's funny, but that's how I was "born to be". This is the story I started. I will never be a eunuch.

I hope the author can calm down and finish writing well!

Fortunately, nothing serious. T_TDo you know? I saw it from the daily guide!

Yes, even the protagonist is too weak. He doesn't do much damage and is brittle. It makes sense that he can't be a hero.

Such a sensible author is so rare. Every one of them is accompanied by pictures. Why not harem! What's the difference between a man's abstinence and a eunuch's!

After reading Chapter 28, I have to say that the author is very good at setting up, and can often see a complex and novel world through the details. The interesting and unconventional characters such as the Succubus Hero and the Gluttonous Sister can't help but make readers look forward to their stories. What is vastly different from the excellence of the setting is the author's plot and shaping. The most prominent one is that the weakest demon general named as the wise general relies almost entirely on his strength to promote the plan except for the second stage of "Inviting the King into the Urn" and the clown-like stage based on poor intelligence. In addition, the protagonist's combat power is erratic. One moment, his life hangs on ordinary monsters, and the next moment, he is able to severely injure demon generals. The supporting character has obvious tool-man attributes, and Walker, who could have been the protagonist in other novels, easily received the lunch box and so on. I hope the author can write better and better

The characters are excellent and the plot is compact. Come on,

Realistic map background always feels a bit out of place

If the harem is changed to pure love, are there many female partners?😠😠

They've all been poisoned, but why are there still so few people?

Are you sure you are angry and not furious?😁

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The organization of the language has improved significantly, and you can see where the ideas came from, but it's interesting

How can a succubus be called a brave man when his fate is changing? 😍

This book will be finished, right? Every time I go to the dormitory, I worry that I will see the cut book when I come back ( I really like this book orz

Staying with the succubus every day but doing nothing. No matter how you look at it, this is just tj or yw.

Seeing how hard you guys work so hard to collect opinions, I can look forward to your next book.

The writing is quite good. Maybe it's because it's a new book written by a newcomer so the results are not good. It will probably be better if there are regular readers in the future.

I've been reading the comment section now. Did the author write a lot of intimate interactions with other girls in the front, and then changed the harem to a single female protagonist? If that's the case, I can run away.

It still feels well written. The beginning is really boring and lacks something engaging, but things start to get better in the free second half. The foreshadowing before and after is also well laid out, and the combat part is written in a fluid and exciting manner, but too much of the daily routine is weakened, like rushing to complete tasks in a game. And why does everything have two stages?😄