The Peninsula’s Little Landlord

Female lead Bae Joo-hyun

In Korean entertainment novels, the male lead is either Tang Jiuye, Ahn Jung-hoon, Kim Jong-min, or someone who has cultivated to the Yang God realm. You're just an ordinary person, heh heh. The chaebol heir is tired and wants you to push him along, so you have to do it properly. Otherwise, you'll just have to sell your goddess-like girlfriend a condom to increase your sense of participation. 😁

Lim Na-yeon's character card

It looks good, but it's too small. Since you're a time traveler, why not go big? Just buy a whole building, build apartments, live on the top floor yourself, and rent the rest to these people. Maybe a patriotic entrepreneur from China will come along and register a company. Looking at what you've written, you care about reducing the number of people from 9 to 8, and you want to help the Crown.

The main character's character design seems pretty good so far, giving off a very natural feel. His help to Hara also feels natural, making the reader want to keep reading. Writing a good Korean entertainment novel is difficult, so good luck, author!

Readers pay for your books; if you can afford to write, then write; if you can't, then don't. Constantly saying you're too late to revise, and it's all just copy-pasting—what's going on? Do you have any respect for your readers? Unfollowed.

Yoona

The two biggest flaws in your book are: one, the career storyline is extremely boring and inexplicably includes a bunch of scenes with Jia YT; the other, you portray Sunny as a pimp, constantly recruiting women into the male lead's harem, making the female lead's characterization utterly disgusting.

I just saw the VIP chapter. I don't know if there's a missing chapter 88 after chapter 87. I don't object to multiple female leads, but I don't want it to be a huge harem, like the Zodiac or the Twenty-Four Knights. Four to six female leads is the most.

Lee Soon-kyu