The Peninsula’s Little Landlord

The heroine Bae Joo Hyun

The male protagonist of Korean entertainment is either Tang Jiuye, An Zhengxun, Jin Zhongming, or someone who has cultivated to Yangshen. You are an ordinary person. Hehe, the rich man is tired. If he wants you to push him, you have to push him well. Otherwise, you can sell your pretty girlfriend a condom to increase the sense of participation 😁

Lin Nalian Character Card

It looks good, but it's too small. Since you're a time traveler, why not make it bigger? Just buy a building, build an apartment and live on the top floor yourself, and then rent the rest to these people. Let another patriotic entrepreneur come from China and register a company. Judging from what you wrote, you care about the transformation of 9 people into 8 people, and you also want to help Crown. Will you save Shirley and Ha Ra later on? What can you do if your current small status is enough? It's too late on the timeline. Later, it suddenly becomes even more abrupt. I hope it won't crash. There is no system and the identity and background settings are not high, so it will crash too easily. It feels frustrating to look at it now

Now it seems that the character design of the protagonist is quite good, giving people a very natural feeling, and the help to Hara is also relatively natural, which makes people want to read more. It is difficult to write a Korean entertainment novel well, so please do your best, author.

Readers spend money to buy books. If you can write, you should write. If you can't, stop writing. You can't change anything all day long without having time to change it first and then change it. It's all copy and paste. What's going on? Is it worthy of readers? Unlocked

Yoona

The two biggest poisonous points of your book are that the career line is extremely boring and you have to write a lot of plots with Jia Yt. The other is that you write Sunny like a pimp, recruiting people to join the male protagonist's harem, and the writing of the female protagonist is disgusting.

I just saw the VIP chapter, and I don't know if there is a lack of 88 chapters after 87. I personally don't object to more female protagonists, but I don't want a big harem with a zodiac sign or a 24 knights. There are 4 to 6 female protagonists at the most. Since Huang Xu claims not to be a scumbag, don't do it like Healing Korean Entertainment. It was like driving a bulldozer to increase the protagonist's abilities. The bond between the three reborn men and women Sulli and Hela was highlighted in the front and was very well written. Later, twelve female protagonist cards came directly and became the Aquaman mode. Personally, I think the president + Taeyeon (or one or two others from SNSD), Goo Hara + Sulli, Hyomin +? (Crown group or a relatively close group), this way it is convenient to start a group, and the number of people is enough. There is no need to open a big harem, and 6 or 7 is not a lot. If you write too many female characters, they will just become bed partners.

Lee Soon Kyu