After Three Thousand Years of Initial Brushing, Reality Is Gone?

There are too many typos, so I'm trying to persuade you to cancel them.

The test is completed. The setting is slightly new, the dialogue design and character descriptions are mediocre, and the plot and story are quite satisfactory. I often use the character panel to shoot the reader in the face for the whole page. I don't know if this phenomenon will still happen after it is released. To sum up: the advantages are that there are no disadvantages, and the disadvantages are that there are no advantages

A harem without a female protagonist, does that mean there is a harem that is not female? 🐶

I am not male ketone, please male ketone please stop following me, thank you.

I have read dozens of chapters. Although it is only a few dozen chapters originally, the settings given by the author are not too complicated and do not seem burdensome. They do pay attention to details. Some of the detailed settings will be introduced in this chapter. Of course, some of the character data include the behavior of using double casting, but it does not count. What's the point? I like the protagonist's character. He's not bitter and hateful, but he's not a vulgar psychopath either. It's interesting but not exaggerated. The writing is very fluent and doesn't feel fragmented or inexplicable. The world view is currently predicted to be quite large, and it feels like it will be very interesting as it unfolds. In order to prevent the author from showing off, I had no choice but to advertise. (The brackets should be deleted, one for each Shoggoth maid)

We have been collecting simple designs for nobles, adventurers, cultists, hell creatures, and strange creatures for a long time. The selected mage can go to the group to receive the author's bonus.

Passing by, I was stunned for a moment when I saw the harem without a heroine, but after reading what the author said, I understood a little bit. I want to help him explain a few words. First of all, multiple heroine color tags are risky for the book. Don't ask why. Secondly, there is a debate about single and multiple female protagonists at the starting point, but in fact, clearly stating whether it is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists can avoid the chaos in the comment area, but it may still lead to a fight. The author may want to avoid risks, but he did not expect to be hooked by no female protagonist and a stallion. This is really dumbfounding. Just a reminder, if you want to eat one or two, don't blame the readers for being rude. You will have to accept both good and bad reviews. What the author means is that the secret of his harem is that everyone is equal, regardless of whether there is a big wife or a married woman. Readers can rank them in their own minds, but they are not allowed to slander one person because of another. In the end, we made dumplings and smashed them together. I don't want to explain too much, but you need to know that multiple heroines ≈ harem. If you want to trade in stocks, you can't say you are a harem. A harem is by no means equal to a stallion, because a harem is not a vase. The reasons need to be understood and understood through reading time. You will understand it after 10 years of reading novels. Don't always rush to various authors with wrong understandings. They may just not understand. Of course, I haven't read the text yet. Even if I say that these have nothing to do with the book, you can still understand it.

Brushing skills for thousands of years Another psychotic protagonist

It's still not famous enough, but it's not that the writing is bad. The obvious shortcomings have been mentioned below. The settings are a bit complicated, and the plot description is not attractive enough. The latter point is a problem of writing power, which cannot be changed in a short time. For the former point, you can try to slowly add settings to the plot as much as possible, and don't shoot all the settings at once. It's like the setting that the protagonist's world has been swallowed up. It can be buried all the time. In the middle or even later stages of the plot, it can be slowly introduced with the setting of the gods. Progress little by little, and the plot has its ups and downs, so that it can be fascinating. People are curious. You have to learn to whet their appetite. If you catch them with a grappling hook, it won't matter if your writing skills are a little worse.

What is the content of the book? Let's talk about Shen Nong.

You, you can't remember the character's name at all. You can't give more characteristics or numbers to the characters. Who are these? I can remember Maid Spider and Kluru

I prefer to watch the player's story while jumping. The protagonist starts the game with porn, and the protagonist keeps abstaining from sex in the rest of the story. It's really yours 🤭

This novel looks okay, but it actually has a lot of problems. Let's do this. Author, please send me one million words first, and I will check them for you.

So what can I say... The name is a flaw. The main character has a detailed name and is difficult to recognize. The full name of the main character is very similar. It is difficult to distinguish when abbreviating it verbally. It is even more difficult to distinguish the typos in the names. It is not clear whether they are typed correctly or incorrectly. There is no big problem except that the name is difficult for people to recognize (

When I have time, I'll sort out these animal-eared slimes and the main characters again. Now except for the secretary and the spider, the impression is blurry

Why is the title of the book "Three Thousand Years" and the introduction "Five Thousand Years"?

A vampire with a very elegant appearance

I feel like I wrote well, but I shouldn't get this grade. . .

The content and subject matter are good enough to be considered good enough, but the large and increasingly frequent typos and omissions that make the sentences unintelligible and the confusion of character names leading to jumps in scenes are really too serious, and the way the errors and omissions are dealt with will not be changed even after reminders or catching bugs, which is quite frustrating.

It's been a month. Not updated yet. Looks like it's been sent

There is no heroine in the harem, do you want to solve it?