A Succubus Nun from the Start: I Can Edit Character Traits

This kind of novel should be severely criticized. I will criticize as much as I write.

I thought the nun succubus was a succubus who could control her desires, but now she's just a succubus immune to the Holy Light. It's boring! All women have been trained, and they will do that at every turn (omitting ten thousand words). They are not succubi, but they are more exaggerated than succubi elsewhere!

You have the idea, but if you don't even dare to write on the sidelines of this kind of subject, can you achieve results?

When I read the title, I thought the main character was a succubus nun. It was so exciting that I had to watch it. But when I took a closer look, I realized that it was not the case. It immediately became boring.

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Why aren't your equipment used by Rosalin? Don't you have a sword? Why keep it for yourself?

The biggest problem is writing the data stream, but the data is messy without going through the settings of the brain. The growth value of the character has nothing to do with the actual attributes. Low-level equipment is always "immune to holy light", "immune to psychic magic" and "80% damage reduction of the fire element". With your settings, do magicians in this world still have a meaning to exist? They all went to become physical warriors

Every time I thought the protagonist was a succubus nun, I clicked in. I thought I could see the ts succubus being molested by villagers in the church, struggling to suppress her nature and failing. When I saw the introduction, I realized it wasn't…

The author of the subsequent plot obviously intended to reduce the sense of reality of the plot, and this is right. I even suggest that the author simply doesn't write a realistic plot. It's no problem. Readers won't care why the protagonist can play games 24 hours a day. Even insisting that you just let the protagonist buy some kind of game cabin and just put in a random reason, the readers will not care about it at all. Downplaying the realistic plot is the right choice, after all, it is not an urban novel. In the past, when online game novels were popular, I had seen too many urban novels written out of hand because they could not grasp the balance between games and reality.

No, can the protagonist speak properly and not use adjectives randomly? Is it just to reduce the number of words or do you think it is more immersive to write like this?                                                                                                                  The protagonist said calmly and calmly, I 🥚 Oh, it's really against the peace, isn't it? It's too abrupt.