A Succubus Nun from the Start: I Can Edit Character Traits
开局魅魔修女，我能编辑人设词条
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- Gaming
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- Game Otherworld
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Too vulgar
This kind of novel should be severely criticized; I'll criticize as many as it's written.
The setup is good, but it's a pity it's wasted.
I thought the succubus was a succubus who could control her desires, but now she's just a succubus immune to holy light. It's boring! All the women have been trained in the same way, always wanting to do *that* (omitting thousands of words), they're not succubi, but they're even more outrageous than succubi elsewhere!
I have the idea, but if you don't even dare to write about this kind of borderline subject matter, how can you expect to achieve results?
The title is more appealing than the book itself.
Judging from the title, I thought the protagonist was a succubus nun, which sounded so exciting I couldn't miss it. But after a closer look, I realized it wasn't, and it instantly lost its appeal.
Succubus
Why didn't you give your equipment to Rosserin? Don't you have a sword? Why are you keeping it for yourself?
The biggest problem is writing data streams, but the data isn't processed by the brain and is a mess. A character's growth value has no relation to their actual attributes. Low-level equipment constantly grants "Holy Light Immunity," "Mind Magic Immunity," and "80% Fire Damage Reduction." With this kind of system, what's the point of mages in this world? Everyone's just playing as a physical damage dealer.
I always clicked in thinking the main character was a succubus nun. I thought I would see the succubus being teased by the villagers in the church, struggling to suppress her true nature, but she failed and trembled. After reading the description, I realized it wasn't...
The author clearly intended to reduce the presence of real-world events in the later plot, and that was the right thing to do. I would even suggest that the author simply omit the real-world events altogether; it wouldn't be a problem, readers wouldn't care why the protagonist can spend 24 hours a day in a game.
No, can the main character speak properly instead of piling on adjectives? Is this just to pad the word count or do you think it makes the story more immersive? The protagonist would casually say things like, "Holy crap," which felt really out of place and abrupt.