My Building Materials Are Weird

The more I write, the less pretentious I am, and the more I write, the less pretentious I am. Perhaps the author of the Four Eight Middle Schools is tired of writing and is no longer good at writing, so he has started another underworld track.                                                                                                                                       seeing Lin Fan walking out of his own way, but seeing the chapters where I couldn't bear it and gave up on him, and his original intention to work and fish for fun made me laugh out loud, and I spent money to gain popularity. Why is it that smelting multiple qi into one means going out of your own way? Isn't this the original effect of the protagonist's method? Are you very proud of taking the ultimate weakening direction? The plot of the intrigue is different, and the forces are very abstract. Most of the first few hundred chapters are from the perspective of the protagonist, which is a bit interesting. From the 400th chapter, most of them are written about the intrigue between these forces. I am really convinced. There are too many magic weapons in the front, but they are useless later. Just count how many magic weapons you have practiced. Summary The protagonist is a kindergarten principal who just started his business. Due to lack of capital, he does everything by himself. He finds food and drink by himself, makes exercise equipment by himself, and writes study materials by himself. Kindergarten teachers are born from older children. They don't have the ability to ask questions. They just wait for the principal to feed them. What about young children? A newborn baby not only needs to be fed by the older kindergarten teacher, but also has to be fed by the principal if it feels unhappy. It also has to be praised. If you don't praise it, it will make you cry. ——It's very capitalistic. It's so right. Customers are God. Employees will run away if they are unhappy. The park has just opened and it is difficult to recruit employees. They need to be appeased. If you haven't subscribed yet, want to watch it, and think it's okay, you are welcome to come in and enjoy it. Lin Fan appeared in Chapter 75, and Lin Fan created the magic in Chapter 585. It can be said that he plays an important supporting role throughout the entire book. I witnessed a living legend. The mentality changes from mature to childish. The more you live, the younger you become, and the more you live, the less responsible you are. The protagonist is so great that I cried to death. I saw someone complaining that the protagonist controls everything of those who have practiced other methods. I can only say that after practicing the protagonist's method, you can lie down and feed yourself like this. I also think, people can enjoy so much in this life and die without regrets. By the way, I turned on automatic subscription and subscribed to 4 more chapters without reading them. I rewarded them to the author. I really enjoyed it. Normally I don't comment much, but honest people are like this, once you pull it, you have to pull it big. If any book friends can read this fragmentary review of mine, I can only say thank you for reading it.

It is actually difficult for me to write a book review I was actually quite pleasantly surprised when I discovered this book. It has a good idea, a good creativity, and a good foundation. There are ideas and heights. Just watch it, there are some details that become more and more satisfying and bearable. From the beginning, I read it word by word, then skipped paragraphs, and then skipped chapters. 1. The leaders of various forces and the cadres of primary school classes really have no area, and they cannot see even a little bit of the capabilities, structure, and magnanimity that big forces should have, and they are full of licking words; 2. From the middle of the first stage, there are too many praises from different angles, from a few sentences, to entire paragraphs, to entire chapters of pretentiousness. 3. In farming novels, group portraits are the best carrier, but now they are not group or single, and all the characters come out of the same mold. 4. There is nothing wrong with the role of the protagonist's female assistant, but the story is about a real failure, something that can be completely solved by a merit shop. I don't know why it must be written. 5. The author probably has little experience in organizational management, and does not feel very clear about the operations of large organizations and the operations of a large social level. A secretary is an organization, not a specific person. Even if there is only one secretary, he is an organization. 6. In a society where great power belongs to itself, the conflicts between individuals and organizations are too understated. 🙏 I still recommend the book. Just looking at it, a colorful seed grows too plain and watery. I feel it, so don't blame the author!

What's weird? This is good fortune, a great opportunity. If we look at the worldview of the Great Desolate Current, Weirdness is equivalent to the innate sanctity formed from the fragments of rules that fell when Pangu created the world. Of course, Weirdness is contaminated with negative emotions. In the Great Desolate Worldview, aren't there ferocious beasts that were born from the resentment of three thousand chaotic gods and demons? Of course, this is just an earlier prehistoric worldview. The current prehistoric worldview has evolved, and myths that reverse cause and effect are the mainstream.

The world view of this book is quite good. I like the type. The main world of the earth will break through and automatically attract the fusion of all realms. Wanjie also wants to occupy a place in the new world after the integration, so there are various regular monsters, that is, weird ones, and the protagonist is a Taoist-type existence who creates and transmits laws. The idea is quite right. I didn't read the harem, but some of the detailed descriptions are misleading. The other thing is that the writing is a bit watery, which is a matter of opinion. The upper limit will be higher if some details are taken care of. At present, the protagonist cannot make the final decision, and the people below have not grown up. Later, the protagonist should be raised in level, the strength of the people below should be increased, and the conflict between the worlds should be intensified, so that there can be various climaxes. These all take time, I will take a look at them later.

He is always invincible and awesome, but you write down where he is awesome. You just rely on talking about how awesome he is. You have to mention a few sentences in each chapter. Don't you know how to describe him in profile? Being invincible depends entirely on words, right?

The world view of this book is quite good, but the description is like an instruction manual, stinky and long, with the same number of words, introducing the exercises over and over again.

Are there any benefits to exposing yourself to preaching at the first level? Can it directly improve the protagonist's cultivation level? I think the protagonist's cultivation is normal and nothing special. If the preaching is only fed back to the artifact, it cannot directly increase the protagonist's cultivation speed. Why expose himself so early? Can't you practice comfortably to the third level first? Anyway, according to what the author wrote later, the four pillars must be condensed one by one. The protagonist's cultivation speed will not change whether he preaches or not. If you rely purely on talent to practice, you can't practice to the third level first and then preach. Wouldn't the preaching be smoother and less dangerous?

I feel that the biggest failure of this novel is the female assistant. The author has been trying to elevate a vase character to an important supporting role or the position of the heroine. It's disgusting. The most important thing about the heroine's position is that it is irreplaceable for the protagonist and the author. However, it is obvious that the position of the female assistant can be replaced by any subordinate. She is just a vase. Apart from being able to watch, it is useless.

What this female assistant wrote is really annoying.

That female assistant is so disgusting. I endured more than two hundred and sixty chapters. I can't watch anymore. Goodbye.

I feel like it didn't write a big horror, but instead focused on the intrigue. Although the weirdness is nothing to the protagonist, the weirdness of the others is just like a background board.

The pace is too slow. After more than one hundred and almost two hundred chapters, his disciples still don't have the first level. They have been creating magic and developing it but they have no strength. What are they developing? The initial setting is that spiritual masters support the world, and both weird and spiritual masters start at the first level, and the world background is also weak in all aspects. Then it has been developing at a low level, and then it is emphasized that the world will further change and be promoted in two years, and then the cheating is also one year to first level. Which disciples will play nonsense in the subsequent disaster?

I kept repeating the same sentence over and over again, and nine out of ten words were useless. I was just trying to fill my head with water. Many people said before that I should not repeat nonsense. The author humbly accepted the reply, but was determined not to change it. In the following chapters, it was obvious that there were fewer and fewer people, and no one commented. He only focused on defrauding money, and refused to take the right path. This is a test of how long the readers can endure.

To summarize, this is a paper. I kept telling the story over and over in practice, but the story made no progress at all. The story goes back and forth in order to bring out the protagonist.

Chapter 207 is only level 2. It's incredible, it's really good at water, it's all about incomprehensible words about wheels. Do you want to finish it in chapter 2000?

There are two books before and after charging. It was a bit poisonous before charging, but I can tolerate it. After charging, it is not a little bit poisonous You write about a person who blazed a trail, pretending to be cool, pretending to be cool, and being low-key. In addition, the Sun Tong you wrote is simply extremely toxic. After hundreds of pictures, he is still at the third level. How many levels do you want to write? Tenth level? Level 15? So when did you write it, and do you still have creative ideas later on? Especially the one with four doors and twelve pillars is really disgusting.

Nice creative setting! But there is a lot of nonsense, various settings, all kinds of water, nothing exciting, just very dry. A useless novel! There are no good novels.

If you don't know how to write a heroine, then don't add it. Do you really not want to give up on that part of the readers? And if you don't write well, you won't be able to please that part of the readers? Of course, if you bring your own lust into it, I can only say I wish you happiness. Believe it or not, your book would have been a whole lot better without the description of this female assistant.

It's so long-winded, and the explanation takes up three-quarters of the book. For example: 1. A small problem will have eight different perspectives, angles, characters, forces, etc. To describe its different viewpoints. 2. The content duplication rate is relatively high. A question may be discussed in two pages to support another new question and so on. 3. However, the content and framework are relatively rigorous. It's the kind of movie that you want to watch but feel bored about. You miss it when you don't watch it, and you feel like you've eaten a lot of air after watching it.

All kinds of blowing, blowing in every chapter, all kinds of blowing on the protagonist, the old lady's foot bindings, smelly, long, too watery

It feels like the author put all his thoughts into the setting. Even if the plot has a little bit of novelty, it won't be completely novel.

I subscribed to 100 chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. Don't subscribe. It's too watery. If it looks cool, it's actually quite acceptable. As a result, the author said many times that it was an invincible flow, but I saw that it was not true. Who else has the protagonist beaten to death with pig's feet? For example, the three mouse brothers suppressed them first and then killed them. Others have issued a fatwa, what can the protagonist do to fight back other than to save his life? Is this the invincible flow you set up? No one would enjoy reading a book like this. After writing so many words, the first level is still there. Then spread out a lot of things. The setting is very good, but the main character is too heavy to watch, and it is too watery to make people want to subscribe. .

It's definitely hard to explain in one word. This method has a mine clearance success rate of over 90%.

The novel is too verbose. The language and things are not refined at all. Too much nonsense. The author wrote this: Chapter 2000 can't stop it. 20 Points a ticket is too expensive

How can I put it, the first few chapters are very boring, and the settings are largely ignored. I thought it was behind the scenes, but it turned out not to be the case. Even if you have to stand in front of the stage, why not wait for the protagonist to have power? Chapter 10 will give others extraordinary skills that are not available in the whole world.

Why did it develop into mutual flattery later on? Dao Zuliu couldn't write the system well, but he went to write flattery and embarrassing articles. Is this so bad? 😡😡

It's a pity that the subject matter is good, but the writing style is so poor and confusing that it makes people sleepy after reading it.

The author is very creative and creates new ideas. He is ahead of everyone and lets the people behind him fill in the blanks. His imagination is good and his IQ is online. I haven't seen any parts that have lost his IQ yet. As long as the backend does not collapse, the quality can be guaranteed. If the plot twist is better, he may become a god. The author should be careful not to be banned. This kind of book is very good. As long as what is written is basically high-quality or above, Be sure not to be banned, don't be banned, don't be banned. Do you know there is a (Master God Avenue)? It was so good that he was often banned. He slowly kept on writing it, and directly conferred the title of god in one book. Later, due to some reasons, he was banned and the ending was not very good! The author must persevere! Come on

The writing is a bit outrageous. If you practice your method, even the air and sea will be under your control. There are so many people who come to be puppets.

Suggestions: About the characters: The author portrays the characters well through dialogue and side descriptions, but the characters' appearance and temperament are still vague, and the impression is not deep enough after reading it; About the environment: I hope the author can describe more about the environment when switching scenes, so as to provide readers with room for imagination; About farming: This book focuses on farming. It can describe more about the layout, environment, and changes over time of Qingyun Mountain and its surroundings; About geographical space: At the beginning of the book, more than eight years have passed since the fusion of all realms and the great changes in the world. The world's area has expanded nearly a hundred times. The distance between the east-west and north-south of the country where the protagonist is located is about one million miles. The distance between the east-west, north-south of a province is more than 100,000 miles. Before the great changes, The circumference of the earth's equator is only 80,000 miles, which shows the huge geographical space; I hope the author will consider the characters' physical fitness, moving speed, moving distance and moving time when describing cross-regional movements of characters; the book describes that warriors from all over the country gathered in Qingyun Mountain in less than a month, and the speed of the warriors would need to travel tens of thousands of miles a day. The author will see if it is reasonable; About the social background: great changes in the world, sea and land Air traffic is cut off, cross-regional water grids are cut off, and the flow of materials and people is blocked. The water grid in a city can still be self-sufficient. Where do oil, coal, natural gas, food and other bulk materials and digital equipment such as chips, mobile phones, and computers come from? The living standards of human beings are not described in detail; the towns and villages outside the city are not explained. I hope the author can improve the details and depict a wonderful world.