Shinto Game: Start by Beating the Jingzhe Drum

Isn't this similar to the book about Shen Nong Daojun? The character design is almost the same as "Struggle for power and profit, but was killed by anti-corruption". That book was abandoned because of the character design. I was speechless. At first, he looked like a normal person, but later he told me that I wanted to be a character like the Great Love Immortal. I hope this book is well written. Anyway, I will put it on the bookshelf first.

In this kind of novel, especially Shen Nong Taojun, the protagonist is careless and lacks the spirit of the beginning.

It's good-looking and creative. It's not a cool novel, nor does it look like a novice novel. If you like this style, it's best not to have a harem and try not to have a female protagonist. Most of the female protagonists in this style are either useless or collapsed. The combat power system is authority and the characters are well portrayed. Come on, I found it in the new book circle.

The writing is very good and the story is very readable! But I found that your kind of novels, such as the Well God and the Little Mountain God, will occupy a lot of words at the low levels of 9 and 8. If a book has 2 million words, the low-level ones like 789 can occupy 1 million words, while the more comfortable levels of 654 and 321, which are medium and high-level ones, will occupy very few words, which makes the whole book lose its sense of fun! Because the protagonist is always in a state of being dominated at a low level, it's very uncomfortable to watch.

To be honest, it's okay. There's no bitterness or deep hatred, nor are the upper management all villains, short-sighted, and the corpses are in plain sight. The protagonist's character is not full of surprises and is full of swear words.

It's still being updated. It's really slow and amazing.

Adjust your personal work and rest time, smooth out the outline, use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. If you can't write about feelings, it's normal, don't deliberately write, then update more and find more people to py.

The update is too slow. It lasted for several chapters. I don't know what the main character did.

Update quickly, it's been 12 days since I updated.

It's not a trap, right? I'm still waiting for more updates to watch together.

Unexpectedly, Shennong Daojun became the one-day champion.

The author describes the mythological system, constructs many powers, writes a lot about Yanxian's daily life, and lays many foreshadowings. This shows his ambition in the plot. However, the strength can be seen beyond the level. There is no evenly matched martial arts fight, and the outstanding villain shows Yanxian's martial arts, which makes the plot too dull!

The protagonist is very good at swordsmanship and is a little swordsman, which is not to my taste.

That's great, I really like this kind of traditional Chinese mythology

From the beginning, the game card race felt broken. Which game still has stuck races? Either all will do, or just one race. The author says that mechanical generals and gods are not a problem for foreign players. Mechanical General God is purely due to the author's poor writing skills. As for the rest, do you think only Chinese people are hostile to foreigners? The whole family can knock a dog's brains out. Wherever there are people, there will be fights

I was born in Jingzhe. What does it mean for people born in Jingzhe?

I read two or three, and my writing skills need to be improved.

There are no other problems. I just want to make a suggestion. Don't write about gods all the time but also write about people. Personally, I don't think gods are worth seeing if they are separated from people. It becomes a fantasy cultivator.

Keep it for a while and vote for you.

Good guy, I thought Yanxian was the name, but I didn't expect it was actually a swallow.

Have a flower feast, don't have a tea party next door that's going to kill you 😅. I would like to ask if the three fairies will separate in the future? Will Yanxian travel around the world? Can you write more stories about humans and immortals along the way? 🙂