Battle Through the Heavens: The Saint Sun Immortal Venerable

Don't write about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger to show off. It's not popular now. Many people hate it after reading it too much. The auction wave should directly exude the atmosphere of high-level Douzong. Do you want to eat or satisfy yourself? Only when the audience is satisfied is true satisfaction. This book is Dou Po There are only a few good books, don't waste them, Douzun's breakthrough should be put on the agenda, otherwise it will make the audience feel high-pressure. You can look at the rankings on the fantasy side. Basically, they are all those who show off their muscles without showing off or live forever. You can see now. Immortality will definitely not work in Goudao. You can't make up for the many children and many blessings genre. You can only take the awesome route. The pretentious genre is pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. I would like to give the author two suggestions. Either pretend to be pretentious until the end, or directly change to the cool genre from now on. Type, maybe it can become a high-quality product. I am a 13-year-old bookworm. I hope the author will consider it carefully. I say so much because this book is not bad and has the potential to become a high-quality product. If more than one author can read one more book, I don't want the author to be hit and quit the online literary world.

In the original novel, the idiot protagonist and the old scorpion devil are scumbags who capture many women and absorb them. The protagonist can still trust them. It's so stupid😰

This Yunyu Sect's cauldron should be universal. . Those three old guys are not just philanthropic things. The disciples they accept are all Dinglu. They harvest them regularly when they reach a certain level of cultivation. They also prefer the three brothers together. After accepting the protagonist, I guess I will add the protagonist together. I don't think the protagonist can save his woman from the three old ghosts. Besides, it doesn't matter whether the protagonist will be teased by his master. They don't need the protagonist to support him in old age, and his cultivation is not stuck. The protagonist is not that important. How could you write about such a sect? That sect in Zhongzhou is no better than this thing?

Stop watching. How old are you still doing this routine of losing your physique? Moisturized

Zhongzhou is extremely poisonous from the beginning. Such a naive idiot trusts the three ghosts of the scorpion-licking demon. Why not continue to recognize the thief as his father? At the end of the day, he becomes a ry to serve the three ghosts and sells his origin to the imperial clan in exchange for resources to raise the three ghosts.

Too 6

Give Xun'er more scenes, Xun'er's description is quite vivid, I like to watch the process of Xun'er gradually changing his liking for the protagonist 🙂

In that part, the master of the protagonist absorbs the pure Yang power of the protagonist. The protagonist was an adult in his previous life, and he still knew the character of the three people in the original work, and he still cared about them. You said it was good to be defensive at the beginning, and just wait until the strength comes out. The protagonist gave me the feeling that he has strength, but not his brain. In addition, I watched it in a skip. When I saw this part, I didn't want to read the previous ones. The previous ones showed how good they were towards the master and the sect. When I saw this, I felt that the protagonist was an SB. I felt that it was not half as good as Fengqi Qingshan. The protagonist in it is understanding and has a more arbitrary personality. I feel It fits the mind of a commoner who traveled to a fantasy world in his previous life. He is also wary of others and spares his son and apprentice. I feel that this is the mind of a commoner who travels to a fantasy world. Unlike the current Dou Po fanfics, which are either terrible in their integrity or cannot be read with their brains.

Emmm, it's a pity. The writing is pretty good but the character design is too unlucky. Not to mention that the teacher is the Three Demons. The three of them are selfish and will not treat their disciples as disciples. Those are tools, and the meat cauldron. . . As long as it doesn't kill people, it's not considered a poisonous drug. This meat cauldron can't be accepted by modern elementary school students. Those who have been beaten by society prefer truth, goodness and beauty. Although this thing is a bit fake in writing, after all, not everyone is a saint, but I feel that the author's writing style. . . The protagonist's character design should be more miserable, such as the reserve of the three demons who seize the body, so that there is no psychological burden to trick the three of them. Moreover, if the skills are changed, even if the profit is all the protagonist's, as long as the readers are not killed, there will be more. If the disciples of the three demons get the heroine of the plot, their first reaction is to practice cannibalism, and directly harvest the meat cauldron and buy a set, and these heroines will be gone. Yun Yu always deserved to die and couldn't survive. They didn't live long in the Underworld Cultivation Legend, let alone a normal fight in the Three Views. If they hadn't been able to escape without provoking the big forces, the protagonist actually had nothing to do with the ancient tribe. It's not surprising to see him getting scolded in this comment section.

Okay, okay, take Yunyun at the beginning, and enter the colorful scales on the shelf, how can you control the little blue-scaled medical fairy, and let the four phoenixes fly together? As expected of Hehuan... Ahem, the Holy Son of Yunyu Sect 😍😍😍😍