The Holy Sun Immortal Lord Who Fights to Break the Sky

Don't write about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger to show off. It's not popular now. Many people hate it after reading it too much. The auction wave should directly exude the atmosphere of high-level Douzong. Do you want to eat or satisfy yourself? Only when the audience is satisfied is true satisfaction. This book is Dou Po There are only a few good books, don't waste them, Douzun's breakthrough should be put on the agenda, otherwise it will make the audience feel high-pressure. You can look at the rankings on the fantasy side. Basically, they are all those who show off their muscles without showing off or live forever. You can see now. Immortality will definitely not work in Goudao. You can't make up for the many children and many blessings genre. You can only take the awesome route. The pretentious genre is pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. I would like to give the author two suggestions. Either pretend to be pretentious until the end, or directly change to the cool genre from now on. Type, maybe it can become a high-quality product. I am a 13-year-old bookworm. I hope the author will consider it carefully. I say so much because this book is not bad and has the potential to become a high-quality product. If more than one author can read one more book, I don't want the author to be hit and quit the online literary world.

In the original novel, the idiot protagonist and the old scorpion devil are scumbags who capture many women and absorb them. The protagonist can still trust them. It's so stupid😰

This Yunyu Sect's cauldron should be universal. . Those three old guys are not just philanthropic things. The disciples they accept are all Dinglu. They harvest them regularly when they reach a certain level of cultivation. They also prefer the three brothers together. After accepting the protagonist, I guess I will add the protagonist together. I don't think the protagonist can save his woman from the three old ghosts. Besides, it doesn't matter whether the protagonist will be teased by his master. They don't need the protagonist to support him in old age, and his cultivation is not stuck. The protagonist is not that important. How could you write about such a sect? That sect in Zhongzhou is no better than this thing?

Stop watching. How old are you still doing this routine of losing your physique? Moisturized

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Zhongzhou is extremely poisonous from the beginning. Such a naive idiot trusts the three ghosts of the scorpion-licking demon. Why not continue to recognize the thief as his father? At the end of the day, he becomes a ry to serve the three ghosts and sells his origin to the imperial clan in exchange for resources to raise the three ghosts.

Give Xun'er more scenes, Xun'er's description is quite vivid, I like to watch the process of Xun'er gradually changing his liking for the protagonist 🙂

In that part, the master of the protagonist absorbs the pure Yang power of the protagonist. The protagonist was an adult in his previous life, and he still knew the character of the three people in the original work, and he still cared about them. You said it was good to be defensive at the beginning, and just wait until the strength comes out. The protagonist gave me the feeling that he has strength, but not his brain. In addition, I watched it in a skip. When I saw this part, I didn't want to read the previous ones. The previous ones showed how good they were towards the master and the sect. When I saw this, I felt that the protagonist was an SB. I felt that it was not half as good as Fengqi Qingshan. The protagonist in it is understanding and has a more arbitrary personality. I feel It fits the mind of a commoner who traveled to a fantasy world in his previous life. He is also wary of others and spares his son and apprentice. I feel that this is the mind of a commoner who travels to a fantasy world. Unlike the current Dou Po fanfics, which are either terrible in their integrity or cannot be read with their brains.

Emmm, it's a pity. The writing is pretty good but the character design is too unlucky. Not to mention that the teacher is the Three Demons. The three of them are selfish and will not treat their disciples as disciples. Those are tools, and the meat cauldron. . . As long as it doesn't kill people, it's not considered a poisonous drug. This meat cauldron can't be accepted by modern elementary school students. Those who have been beaten by society prefer truth, goodness and beauty. Although this thing is a bit fake in writing, after all, not everyone is a saint, but I feel that the author's writing style. . . The protagonist's character design should be more miserable, such as the reserve of the three demons who seize the body, so that there is no psychological burden to trick the three of them. Moreover, if the skills are changed, even if the profit is all the protagonist's, as long as the readers are not killed, there will be more. If the disciples of the three demons get the heroine of the plot, their first reaction is to practice cannibalism, and directly harvest the meat cauldron and buy a set, and these heroines will be gone. Yun Yu always deserved to die and couldn't survive. They didn't live long in the Underworld Cultivation Legend, let alone a normal fight in the Three Views. If they hadn't been able to escape without provoking the big forces, the protagonist actually had nothing to do with the ancient tribe. It's not surprising to see him getting scolded in this comment section.

Okay, okay, take Yunyun at the beginning, and enter the colorful scales on the shelf, how can you control the little blue-scaled medical fairy, and let the four phoenixes fly together? As expected of Hehuan... Ahem, the Holy Son of Yunyu Sect 😍😍😍😍

It's too low, it's too low. It's actually right for you to go to the little doctor Xian Qinglin. You'd be a fool not to escort Dou Zun's top talent within twenty years. But you, a fighting sect, are blowing up fish ponds in the northwest continent, and even if you fight a little mu snake, you can't even say a damn thing about it. What does it mean to you to be charming and charming? ! Please 🙏 figure out your position 😑 The northwest plot emphasizes a quick and innovative idea. After all, you are not a fighting spirit or a fighting king, but a terrifying and powerful fighting sect! . Anti-inflammation means nothing to you if you interact with people in the Great Fighter stage. There are Dou Zun-level figures hidden behind the Tian She Mansion, so ask your teacher to come over. Even those in green clothes will take a long time 😅

It's just that the first one is very well written, but the rest is rubbish.

Qing Lin is so poisonous. I feel that the author has not read the original work, maybe he has not finished the anime, and maybe he just started writing after reading a few fan books. The person from Tian She Mansion found Qing Lin before the protagonist and Xiao Yan, and Liu

In other words, this book can be read at first glance, but not in detail. There is nothing wrong with pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. Although it happens a bit frequently, there is nothing wrong with it. The biggest problem is the shaping of the character of the Little Medical Fairy. I have forgotten what it was like in the original work, so I will just excerpt some from Baidu. "The little medical fairy is a little sensitive in her heart. In fact, what she needs is not much. A little trust can put a beautiful smile on her pretty face." "The little medical fairy is quiet by nature and does not make friends with others. The four years as the leader of the Poison Sect have created her rather cold temperament. With such a temperament, it is basically impossible for her to take the initiative to contact or talk to someone who is not an acquaintance. " The character of the Little Medical Fairy in this book is completely like a little maid after the protagonist appears. There is no sense of violation even if the name of the Little Medical Fairy is replaced by an original character by the author. It's not that I can't accept the little medical fairy becoming a maid, but I don't feel the logic of her wanting to change her character. The plot in Qingshan Town just told her not to be too kind. Her character shouldn't have changed much, and placing the role of the Little Medical Fairy on the maid made me feel that the arc of this character was wiped out. For example, if Lin Daiyu is transformed into a maid who can't quarrel with others, can't talk back, and no longer has her own temper, is this still Lin Daiyu? I hope the author will think about the behavioral logic of the character when creating the character, which will be more conducive to writing better works.

To be honest, anti-inflammatory people are really good. Why do you want to kill? Isn't it bad to be friends? It's not like the grievances between teachers can't be resolved. When the time comes, it's better to go to Daqian together than to fight alone.

I have read 8 chapters in total in 4 days, and I am still playing with the two from Tian She Mansion. Zhongzhou Douzong fights two Dou Emperors in a small place so hard, you don't need to become Dou Emperor, Dou Emperor is even embarrassed to watch it.

Douzong and Douhuang can fight for four or five chapters, wouldn't your strength just crush them all the way?

Your background has persuaded you to quit. Yunyu Sect is such a disgusting sect, and Sanscorpion is even more despicable in the world. . . I'm afraid that the settings may crash. Wouldn't it be better if you switch to Yin Gu?

Shennong, it looks okay. It looks pretty cool, but I haven't noticed much about the poison for the time being. It's just that the female characters are a bit underrepresented, but that's okay. After all, he is tall, rich and handsome

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Except for the messy writing in Chapter 17, the rest is just a bit watery, but still readable.

What kind of plane does the chapter repeat? Make second money

Please read it, please listen to me...

Has Xun'er confiscated it yet?🙂

Three Thousand Thunder is a low-level body fighting skill of the Earth level It is divided into three levels, Thunder Flash, Thunder Instant, and Three Thousand Thunder Although it is at the low level of the Earth level, its speed is comparable to that of the high-level body fighting skills of the Earth level. Beautiful After training, the swamp will be as smooth as walking on the ground The Great Dou Master will be able to compete head-on with the powerful Dou Ling master and remain invincible The Eight-Star Great Dou Master can be completely defeated when encountering the Dou King. Retreat At the peak of Dou Wang, you can easily defeat two Dou Wang with this fighting skill If you practice to the extreme, you can start to practice the Three Thousand Thunder Phantom Body, the treasure of Fenglei Pavilion Every scroll recording the Three Thousand Thunder Movements was made by the master of Fenglei Pavilion with great effort. Each scroll contains a trace of wind and thunder power. Only by taking the power of wind and thunder as your own can you start to learn the Three Thousand Thunder Movements. But the power of wind and thunder is so overbearing that ordinary people cannot refine it at all, but people with strange fire can easily refine it. Three thousand thunders are divided into three levels: thunder flash, thunder instant and three thousand thunders. Once you reach the highest level of three thousand thunders, your movement speed will be the same as teleportation, and you will move quietly across the space. Silently, even the strong ones of Douzong could not catch up, but Three Thousand Thunderbolts was quite difficult to practice. Even a person with extremely powerful soul power like Xiao Yan took more than fifty days to barely reach the first level of Three Thousand Thunderbolts. After that, it was not until the Douhuang realm that Xiao Yan could use the highest level of Three Thousand Thunderbolts.

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In addition to martial arts and fighting skills, another thing that helps in training and fighting is elixirs. People who make elixirs for a living are alchemists. Only people with fire attribute fighting spirit mixed with a trace of wood attribute can be alchemists. It is precisely because of these harsh conditions that there is a scarcity of alchemists. Because of the scarcity of alchemists and the importance of elixirs, the status of alchemists is extremely noble. There are many factors that affect the quality of elixirs, mainly the alchemist's soul power, flame, medicinal cauldron, quality of medicinal materials and the experience of the alchemist. The alchemist converts fighting spirit into real fire and catalyzes it with wood attribute fighting spirit before it can be used to refine medicine. The flames produced by the transformation of fighting spirit are the worst, the beast fire taken from Warcraft is better, and the best is the strange fire born between heaven and earth. To convert Dou Qi into real fire, you must be a Dou Wang or above, or a fourth-grade alchemist or above. Those below Dou Wang or a fourth-grade alchemist can only convert Dou Qi into real fire with the help of a medicinal cauldron. The soul has no levels, but is divided into the four realms of the mortal and spiritual emperor. The first three realms are divided into the early, middle and late stages of Dzogchen. The imperial realm is no longer divided. There are also techniques for cultivating soul power, but they are really rare. There is only one technique for cultivating the soul in the whole book. Ordinary people can only improve their soul power when they are promoted or promoted. A good medicine cauldron is an important magical weapon for alchemists. The medicine refining industry also arranges medicine cauldrons into a Heavenly Cauldron List, with a total of thirteen medicine cauldrons. However, these are only useful to less advanced alchemists. A ninth-level alchemist can use strange fire to directly create the best medicine cauldron. The elixirs refined by alchemists have different effects, including consumable healing elixirs and elixirs for restoring fighting energy, elixirs that directly or indirectly enhance a person's strength, elixirs that extend lifespan, elixirs that repair the soul, and elixirs with various auxiliary functions, etc. The elixirs are divided into grades one to nine. There are no obvious phenomena in the first to third grades. You can judge the quality of the elixir by looking at whether there are elixir patterns on the surface. The elixirs of the fourth grade have the fragrance of elixirs. The elixirs of the fifth grade will produce energy ripples. The elixirs of the sixth grade can cause strange phenomena in the world and initially possess spiritual intelligence and learn to escape. The elixirs of the seventh grade are divided into three levels: elementary, middle and high, which will attract elixir thunder. Eighth-grade elixirs require souls in the spiritual realm to refine them. The alchemist gives the elixir spiritual energy and attracts colored elixirs. The elixirs are divided into two to nine colors according to the number of elixir colors. The elixirs will automatically turn into elixir beasts in various animal shapes. Ninth-grade elixirs require heavenly souls to refine them. Not only do they need to be endowed with spirituality, but they also need to be endowed with the power of heaven and earth. Refining elixirs is regarded as creating a living being. The ninth grade is divided into Bao Dan, Xuan Dan and Jin Dan. The ninth-grade treasure elixir will attract black magic thunder, the ninth-grade mysterious elixir will rain down pills, and needs to be tempered to perfection by the black magic thunder, and the ninth-grade golden elixir will attract nine mysterious golden thunders. Emperor-grade elixirs require Emperor-level souls and Dou-Emperor cultivation levels, and can be refined using Origin Qi as the material. The strength of the imperial elixir is also extremely powerful. Just the prototype elixir can easily deal with four nine-star fighting saints. The ten levels of elixirs basically correspond to the level of the user. For example, a strong person at the Dou Wang level basically needs elixirs of level five and above. Only elixirs of level eight and above are attractive to the strong ones of Dou Zun.

The author's writing is very good and definitely worth reading and subscribing to. I recommend a book that is decisive in killing and has many joys. "The old man in time travels picks up rags and makes a living by making bad movies" which is hilarious...