My Ability Pool Is Superior to Others

So far, this book is quite good and is a good source of information. However, I felt that the rhythm of the plot was a bit delayed. There was too much writing in the first copy, and the settings were not fully revealed. For example, as soon as I entered the door, I saw Chang Wei playing Laifu. The fight was very exciting, but after playing more than 50 cards, I still didn't know who Chang Wei was, who Laifu was, and why they were fighting. This is a bit confusing for readers.

Plot: The first round of zombie dungeons is okay, it seems very straightforward and focuses on describing the protagonist's personal abilities. The second round of parasitic beasts was okay, and I started to rely on local indigenous people. The last few chapters where the last one took control of the whole game really made me feel good. The third round... Because I skipped watching, the entire plot began to focus on the description of local indigenous people. The protagonist was the overlord who leaked after the indigenous plot ended, and the enjoyment dropped significantly. Settings: The world that returns after each copy is definitely a big failure. It is the same as the previous one. It is similar to the previous one plus the academic writing style of Shuiwen. It seems to be inconsistent. Then there is the title, which currently seems to have no use other than to pretend to be awkward (the author is like a fan of the online game Zha Zhahui)

After waiting for several months, it actually came back to life. I tried my best to make all reservations. I hope it won't be interrupted again.

It looks pretty good, but it's too short. Can you please make more

Now I feel that the protagonist is color blind, seeing silver as gold and gold as color, because the protagonist's ability seems to have dropped by a level. Gold is almost the same as other people's silver, and there is no sense of intensity at all.

I wrote more than fifty chapters in one dungeon, and I still don't know what the purpose of the deathmatch is. There are also cheats. The protagonist has two golds and a colored skill, but he doesn't look very powerful.

If you don't choose unlimited shield, just choose it. Wireless shield is basically invincible as long as you don't get killed instantly at first sight, okay? Which one should I choose? The reason is that the color ability is not so ordinary. You can patch it later, but it is disgusting to death.

Goldfinger is indeed not refreshing enough, it feels like you have given it but don't want to give it

My childhood sweetheart was an unreasonable girl with poor grades. She would bother me every day to copy her homework and I had to wait for her after school. In the first year of high school, she got a boyfriend and stopped bothering me. In the first semester of her senior year of high school, her mother kept asking me to take care of her, so I advised her to break up and take the college entrance examination first, and then try to be a boyfriend later. Originally I thought she would think I farted. But she was really not sloppy at all, every second. In the second semester of our senior year of high school, the two of us spent most of our free time studying together. She often asks me where I want to go and says she wants to go too. I laughed at her for dreaming. After the college entrance examination results came out, I went to my ideal school. She chose to re-study. During my freshman year, the relationship between the two of us gradually faded. I didn't pay much attention, after all, I have a girlfriend. In my sophomore year, when I was picking up freshmen, she appeared directly in front of me and said with a joking smile, "Let's see if I'm here." I am a little relieved that this silly girl has finally become less silly. I took her to the dormitory. Downstairs, I met my girlfriend and introduced her. Qingmei just kept praising my girlfriend weakly. I thought she was jealous that I had such a girlfriend in college, so I comforted her and said, there are many handsome guys in college, and you will also have a new love. She looked at me and didn't say anything. I felt a little embarrassed, so I helped her move her things up and left. Because we are from the same hometown, she went home with me during the National Day of her freshman year. She asked me in the car how I met my girlfriend, and I roughly told her. After listening, she seemed to be asleep, with her head on my shoulder. I gradually began to feel sleepy, so I lay on the chair and prepared to sleep. Half asleep and half awake, I felt something sucking on my lips. I was so scared that I opened my eyes, but it was Qingmei who was crying and kissing me. I quickly pushed her away a short distance and asked her what she was doing! But she lowered her head and said nothing. The embarrassment continued until the car arrived at the rest stop. I was about to get out of the car to breathe some air and calm down, but she grabbed my hand. She was no longer silent, raised her tear-stained face to face me, and shouted in a voice that could be heard by everyone in the car: Why hasn't Qingfeng in front of the flower been updated yet?

The protagonist has only known each other for less than half a day and has told everyone everything. I can't stand it anymore, but I hope the author writes better and better.

Not to mention eunuchs, judging from the way it is written, I don't want to read it anymore. Originally, the idea of ​​equality in the Xianxia dungeon was already in shambles, and now I want to write this kind of thing in reality. It is simply unreasonable to do this in this world view.

It's not bad, but I don't know the strength of that ability, such as the time-blinking skill. Is the protagonist too bad or what? I always feel like it can't play its due role. They are all in color, and they don't feel like they have overwhelming fighting power.

I just made an appointment with the eunuch and am speechless.

Are you going to poison me from the beginning of Chapter 4? Isn't it bad to be a lone wolf? Want to be a nanny for a group of slutty natives? Can Shen Nong tell me what it's like in the back?

After watching it, to be honest, I felt like I was being forcibly suppressed.

Is the first world a little too long? Moreover, the protagonist's golden ability is stronger than other people's silver abilities, but the combined golden ability is not stronger than other people's golden abilities. This is a bit unpleasant.

This book is obviously much more refreshing after being revived. This kind of Feng Ling Yueying style novel is meant to be fun. If the protagonist fights with other people back and forth, why is there cheating? If I can't kill it instantly with Wind Spirit Moon Shadow, what kind of Wind Spirit Moon Shadow should I use?

If you buy the genuine Black Myth, the Great Sage will be very happy, because he knows that you admire him. If you buy the pirated Black Myth, the Great Sage will also be very happy, because he knows that you are very much like his second junior brother. If you do not buy the Black Myth, he will also be very happy, because he knows that you have your own 81 difficulties, but if you do not update because of the fight against Black Myth, the Great Sage will be very angry, because you are like those monsters whose human lives are like a piece of grass

No. . Is this all exposed? Don't be afraid of being ripped off. . I've seen too many obscenely developed ones, but it's rare to see such straightforward ones 😅

I don't know if this writing is too cumbersome. There are more than 60 chapters, and the first copy is not finished yet. You don't want to make this second copy a paid part, do you? For those who read some other novels, they have basically finished writing the second copy or halfway through before paying for it. It's just a little bit like this, but it doesn't write anything at all. It's just description. There's enough description. Can we just push the plot a little bit? 60 Of them are still in the novice copy, and the main worldview hasn't been revealed yet. I'm really convinced. After you finish figuring out the world view, can you continue to be so good? You see, it's not like I won't give you money.

Just put it on the shelves and feed it like shit. I'm not that bitchy, so I won't keep you company.

It's really senseless to ask for the title without retaining the Five Immortals.

Jin Mo and Five Immortals are fighting for the title. I feel like more people want to see the latter (I also want to see the latter).

If you like reading, write more😍

The author's writing skills are good, and the world view is well written, but the plot coherence and combat power control are not very good. Although he loves to write invincible articles, don't push it too hard, otherwise, you will not even have the inspiration to continue writing, so you have stopped updating for so long, and will continue to work hard. I look forward to writing a new book ❤️

I gave you my monthly ticket, but you didn't get any updates? ?

Did the author go to Tomato to write a book? There is a new book with more than 100,000 words, and it is also about death and reincarnation. The style is quite similar

No, I'm not a buddy. I thought it looked pretty good, but I realized you've been updating it for a while😨

Will the author finish this book? It should be almost over.

To be honest, I feel like I have witnessed it.