Playing a Role, Starting with The Smiling, Proud Wanderer

It's a very new beginning, but when it comes to female characters, it starts to feel weird. She's messing around in the world, not strong enough, and still provoking women. What do you think? Especially for Yi Lin, it should be over after killing Tian Boguang. For a person like San Ding, what are you going to touch? Isn't it better to just go out and wander around once you have mastered your sword skills?

If you had written about beating up Linghu Chong at the beginning, the monthly ticket price would probably be several hundred

I pretend to be a fortune teller at the beginning, could you please copy me how to tell someone's fortune? It doesn't look like a fortune teller, but like a snitch.

Too slutty, I don't have the strength to take other people's wives everywhere

Linghu Chong is really not a bad person. But Yue Buqun is really not a good bird, he is on guard against his own people.

It doesn't look like a fortune teller, but more like a spoiler. I have never seen a fortune teller who doesn't look at birth dates, palm prints, faces, or predicts bad luck. He doesn't even know how to tell fortune-telling nonsense. This is very problematic. You are trying to pretend to be a fortune teller, not to make the other party believe in you. For example: Mrs. Lin believes that you are a fortune teller, but she doesn't believe what you say, let alone fate. Your pretending will be very high, but Mrs. Lin believes in what you say, but thinks that you are not a fortune teller, but someone behind the scenes. Even if she believes you in everything, your pretending will not be high.

It would be more appropriate to change the name to "Zhutian Congxiaoao plays the role of nanny"

After Lin Zhennan came out of the palace, his temperament became more and more girlish. He felt that Youdao was a hero who saved the beauty, so he should pledge himself to her, and began to compete with his wife for the leading role.

It's been so long since the junior sister has not been taken down. Yilin is not interesting. After all, a lot of words have been wasted writing about the junior sister. Yilin is purely for nothing. I guess Ning Zhongze will need to be there in the future, and Ren Yingying will probably need to be included. You are advancing the plot too slowly. Maybe this book is about the heavens, which would be even more worrying. He can't keep playing ambiguous, right? If you keep relying on these to seduce readers, it will get annoying if you read too much.

The story is wonderful, but the writing is too slow.