I Was Just Solving Crimes, How Could I Become an Immortal?

Judging from my reading of the 60 chapters so far, there are no major flaws. There are some small flaws here and there, but overall they are harmless. If I insist that there are problems, they should focus on the author's setting and writing style. Setting : As a reader, I am not in a position to explain this aspect with words and deeds. Every author has his or her own preferences, but this setting cannot be said to be novel, and it is just a mid-range theme that comes out of nowhere. However, this does not mean that the subject of detective stories cannot be brilliantly written. Judging from the previous popular Dafeng Dagongren, it also started with detective stories, and the author's shortcomings lie in his writing style and experience. (As well as various unflattering characters) Writing & Experience : I have already commented on the third case when more than a hundred remains of Nanshan Academy were discovered and the martial arts disciples entered the village. The immaturity and innocence of the new author are clearly visible. If you want to write a scene that arouses readers' emotions, the rhythm must be firmly grasped. It cannot be scattered or chaotic, and it must not be rushed. For the protagonist and important supporting characters, the emotional description must be in place. The bloody or brutal scene must make people feel the anger of both humans and gods. The rhythm must make people feel relaxed and moderate. An excellent closing process should not only have the accumulation of emotions and the accumulation of means, but also the assistance of characters, the richness of life details, and the emotional fluctuations and resonance of readers and protagonists. If the author can listen to it, then use this book to practice your writing. You can also say something like a eunuch. Everyone has a maturation process. I look forward to the author's future progress.

You describe the protagonist as eager as a pervert, but you don't really fall in love with him. What do you mean? Put it here to attract readers? You don't think your dirty jokes are funny, do you?

There is a system I can't see if there is CP at the moment The protagonist plays reasoning, and his IQ is definitely online, while the supporting characters are a little bit 🤏🏻intelligent, but that's how reasoning works are, you'll get used to it if you read more Conan Overall, it's good-looking, and I think if nothing else, Sanjiang can be expected

Every time I see this kind of book with a good setting and a small number of words, I feel sad. It seems that there are too few words and most of them will not be written if they disagree with each other. It is tasteless and a pity to discard.

Let's put it this way, in my opinion, the best ending for Mu Shiro is to simply get a box lunch It's almost 4202, and the reviews of Uchiha Itachi next door have changed from rave reviews to mixed reviews. Is there anyone who still likes the female villain's whitewashing routine, right?

Before Chapter 137, I thought this book was good, but it turned out to be disgusting... I was tricked by Mu Bai from beginning to end... It didn't matter once or twice, but it was this bad every time, and it was sent directly to Nanchu. I beg you to die as soon as possible! I originally planned to finish voting for the monthly ticket, but it's gone! After Chapter 137, I only read the title. If I had known, I would have read one chapter and ordered the next.

The logic is wrong. Are the entire six doors of Tsing Yi Gate just decorations? It seems that except for the protagonist, other departments are useless, so why are you here!

The level of suppression is too severe. . . There is no need to crazily level up a crime-solving writer, right? What's the benefit besides being annoying?

How do you feel it was written by some big shot with a trumpet 🤫

There are many people who say that this book is very problematic.

The first part is okay (there are some problems but the plot is quite tight), but whether it is good or bad in prison, I feel that it is getting more and more bad in the future 😂

Solving this case is like a joke.

Keep up the pace, and you can expect the divine book.

That's right, there shouldn't be so few people there.

I'm a little disgusted by Mu Bai, I hope it doesn't break down later

The beginning of Chapter 136 was really not good. The previous ones were obviously very good, but after the beginning of this chapter, I was really shocked.

Super funny, eccentric detective story

After reading the first five chapters, it doesn't feel like a detective story, especially the part where you choose one of three suspects. Even if the protagonist can use reverse reasoning to find the real murderer, it doesn't necessarily mean that the protagonist can improve his investigation ability. I feel that the function of this system is a bit tricky...

It's good-looking but not completely good-looking. The reasoning is all supported by the system on the spot. The combat power is all increased by various adventures. The characters all look like they have lived dozens or hundreds of years in vain. The good-looking women are all destined to be included in the harem. In general, it is the youth version of Da Feng. But somehow it makes people read it very leisurely, without using any brain. Maybe this is the fun of refreshing writing. Generally speaking, the writing is very smooth, the plot also has multiple reversals, and the author's ability to combine stories is also quite strong, but it is not to the point of being funny. If Shuhuang can accept this style, you can still read it.

The reasoning plot is too far-fetched, it's completely like shooting an arrow first and then drawing a target.

The author's writing style is sophisticated, and he laughs and curses between the lines. It's quite good, but I heard from reviews that it was overwhelming and not satisfying enough. Is there any evidence from Shen Nong?

The writing is really good, the characters are not formulaic, which beats 90% of the novels. The plot is also interesting. Even if it is not really a detective novel, it is still very comfortable to read.

I can only say that it's okay, but the depth of the case is not enough. Personally, I would rather see this type of story with intrigues and intrigues. Unfortunately, the halo of intelligence is too serious. The supporting characters have some brains, but only a little. The big bosses who have appeared, such as Shu Chang and the dean, do not have the long-term responsibility and strategizing that the big boss should have. They are like two fools.

Author, the word "foot hair" related to the plot of "Burning Feet Hair" should be changed to "leg hair", because I think what you wrote is clearly leg hair, and leg hair is also used to defeat enemies, and aren't only the fingers of your feet hairy?

The writing gets worse and worse, without polishing the plot at all.

It was finished after only one month 😅

After raising it for a long time, I realized it was over when I stopped investing 😭

Where is the water flag? Who is the owner of the flag? I am confused. Can you tell me?

Water flag anyone? If any🤓🤓

I think it's very interesting and I keep subscribing. Come on, author!