A Cultivating Family That Started from Mortals

It's so poisonous that the novel version licks the fee.

The author wanted to write about a peaceful person, but ended up writing a useless and repetitive villain.

The character design of the protagonist is not good and his character is too low. In reality, he is just submissive. Why is it that the protagonist in the novel is also weak and bullied by others?

Oh, it's pretty good, with a sinister beauty.

I just feel weird, and the protagonist doesn't practice the breath gathering technique, so why can't others find it? Also, it was said before that the senior brother can tell that he is not a mortal even at the fifth level of Qi training, but when the protagonist later reached the fifth level, his fellow disciples actually thought that the protagonist was a mortal. The more he read, the more speechless he became. Are you really treating the readers as fools?

This level is good, I like it very much,

Well written. It has a moderate grip, no nausea, and is very comfortable to listen to.

The writing is good, the writing style, the protagonist's mind and character are also quite good, but the pace feels too slow. Although this is intended to be about a small character's ordinary path to immortality, the protagonist has neither talent nor a powerful golden finger. According to the current pace and progress, it will take at least two to three hundred chapters for the protagonist to build a foundation. How long will it take to finish the book...

This author has more brain cells than I do, and my CPU burned out after I couldn't read even one chapter.

It's a pity. It would be much better if the book could be more careful about the storyline.

I feel that the writing is really good, interesting and exciting. The plot is basically logical and the protagonist's IQ is online. It is also very consistent with the protagonist's ambition. He is not ambitious and just wants to live a stable life. But so far, he has only had one battle. Since the cultivation of immortals and the cultivation of immortals and fighting methods are also unavoidable, I hope the writing can be as exciting as the author's strategy and calculation. The overall pace is slow, but it is not a shortcoming, just a different style.

Although it is sinister, the writing and plot are still good, but the layout is a bit awkward.

Is the author canceling his account completely hopeless?