I Steal the Lives of All People to Prove My Fruit of Immortality

A bit boring, a bunch of girls in a hurry, wasting golden fingers in vain

What's the point of posting so many pictures?

Characters, background, storyline. Anyone who has been to elementary school knows that the background of this world is still very grand. The first few chapters involve the outside world, and some of it is written later. The storyline is also okay, but your character creation is indeed not bad at all. Several supporting characters are very prominent. The protagonist's character has become a foil. The existence of the protagonist is to foil the supporting characters. This puts the cart before the horse. Suddenly wearing Entering a strange world, and then encountering life and death at the beginning. As a result, the protagonist is not nervous, silent, and has no sense of urgency. He is taken away from the beginning to the end. He has no opinion of his own, no room for his own development, and no initiative to become stronger. The entire practice has just gone with the flow. This is definitely not going to work. These supporting characters must be used to highlight the protagonist's IQ, instead of giving a bunch of beautiful descriptions to the supporting characters. Instead, the protagonist has become a gangster character.

Brother, what are you writing? Why do I feel like I don't understand? It feels so messy, it's really like a hammer in one place and a hammer in the other

I thought it was all about killing and killing all the way 🙂 but it turned out that I was looking for a female supporting role all the way.

Peach Blossom Fairy

Mao Jiuer

Considering some issues, Shijing would like to talk about it here: 1. Regarding the life span of Immortal Immortal, after each level is promoted, the life span increases by "bits". For example: the life span increase at each stage of the initial level is "single digits". After reaching the first level, the life span increase at each stage is "tens digits". ", And so on... 2. Regarding the lifespan consumption of immortal magic and magic, the lifespan consumed by performing magic and magic actually corresponds to each realm of the Immortal (almost). Of course, as long as the lifespan is enough, it is not a problem. There is no so-called "setting problem". 3. Because this is my first time writing, there must be many deficiencies. You can point them out (no need to criticize), and Si Jing will try to correct them as much as possible. 4. If you really don't like this book, you can give up on your own, but please don't complain.