The Tarnished at Hogwarts

From the borderland, you said that the protagonist of the three-week project does not know the magic of the borderland. I can't understand it, but I'm shocked. JPG Even if you learned Topps' stance...

Let's briefly talk about the current problems in the author's book: 1. The character design conflicts with the actual performance. The border area is not only a place where people eat people, but also a war-torn world. The first priority in this kind of world is to protect yourself. But when Snape wants to draw blood, others look at him like goods. The protagonist does not have any reaction that he should have. He should refute them immediately. It is normal to have a stress reaction. But the protagonist is like a puppet, "forgiving" or having a laugh at the school teacher's behavior. The tolerance for characters in the HP world is too high. 2. Regarding the problem of the Harry Potter trio, they inexplicably started to believe in a "kind" elf from a God's perspective, and then doubted the person who saved their lives. First of all, it is not in line with conventional thinking. Not to say that they are 100% the protagonist, but at least it is too outrageous to casually doubt others without definite [or seemingly definite] evidence. This makes the trio [very] unpleasant. Secondly, the protagonist has no emotions at all, just like an NPC who says fixed words just to advance the plot and let the trio investigate him. 3. The issue of combat power. The world of HP is obviously a world with low combat power, which is not comparable to the world of Magic Circle. Stop suppressing your fighting power for no reason. The author should carefully reconstruct the subsequent plot. 4. The author should think carefully whether he wants to write an invincible and exciting article, or whether he wants to write an article about the collision of two worldviews that creates something exciting. Everyone does not reject Kai Wushuang, but they are disgusted with the idea of ​​suppressing the protagonist just to satisfy their love for the original HP characters. This is commonly known as the abuser. There used to be a fan of Fahuan Lu Mingfei, and he wrote endlessly about first grade life, about a 50-50 split with Chu Zihang. Then it was released not long after it was published. The author thinks it over himself. Either be bold and find a way to transplant some game characters such as Golden Tree, Lani, Big Brother, and Melina, and have a good idea of ​​the collision of world views, or else just write an invincible and exciting article honestly and push the main line quickly. Readers on both sides want it, but both sides are displeased. Above.

A transfer student, he was attacked by a dragon when he entered school, and a goblin died. He had powerful power in his own right, Professor Weasley. Elden's Ring x Hogwarts Legacy✓

Is this the person with three eyes in the Dharma Ring? Why do I look less and less like it? It's the first time I've seen such a weak Sanjiu.

The character is a bit stupid, and the faded one roars all kinds when attacked by a dragon?

It really makes no sense to insist on Hogwarts. Wouldn't normal people avoid danger? Did the protagonist feed the dog with his previous life experience?

This book could be called, How Faded People Become Nannies

The Faded Ones enter the Harry Potter universe, and the subject matter is relatively new. The reason why everyone likes to watch Suture (neutral word) is that two familiar stories collide with new sparks. However, the key to stitching is [two familiar stories] Because it is a re-creation, the setting and tone of the story are limited to a certain extent, and the two creators are born to dance in shackles. You can add some fresh elements during the writing process, but the premise is that you cannot overturn some basic backgrounds and settings that everyone is familiar with, otherwise it will become a trick. I don't need to go into details about the tone of the Souls series. Although the characters in Harry Potter often have funny moments, it is not a pure comedy. The author wants to take a light tone, no problem, no objection. But don't forget that the protagonist is the Faded One, the King of Elden, or the King of Madness. What kind of depth does this background represent? If you forget to suggest restarting the four episodes In order to conform to the relaxed tone of the writing style and the interest of the plot, he can act carefree from time to time, but this cannot be a complete portrayal of his inner world, and the protagonist should not be written as a pure fun person. However, according to the author's current portrayal, this is just Long Aotian who has mastered the power of another world. At this mental age, if you didn't tell me, I would have thought he was a fourth grader. Where is the measure of being a king? This is not the King of Madness traveling through time to Harry Potter, this is a game where players get tired of playing in the Borderland and travel to Hogwarts to cause trouble. I hope the author writes more from the perspective of the faded person himself, rather than from the perspective of sitting in front of the computer playing games To be honest, I am still very interested in this subject. It was quite fresh when I was attracted to it at first, but the more I read, the more I feel that it is too boring. I am really unhappy after catching up on the latest chapter today. I bring this up in the hope that the author can write the article well and not waste this subject.

Here are some pictures to understand what I mean

This book can be said to be abusive. It's the first time I've seen such a lazy author in Sanxuanmu. He's a good-for-nothing author.