Dragon Rider's Sky

As I write, it becomes a business simulation type. They talk about setting up a club to help improve their strength, but in fact they spend a lot of words introducing the entrepreneurial process. So, I came to see the protagonist start his own business? Instead of writing about watermelons, you only write about sesame seeds? Why not include the main character pooping and peeing? Why can't you even distinguish between priorities? Just like the title of your book. Dragon Rider's sky. Where's the dragon? Just the opening plot of nearly 100 chapters, with a word count of 170,000. Check it out for yourself. How many words are there to describe this dragon? How many words are there for interacting with a dragon? Can there be a total of 1,000? Just put it on once at the beginning, and oh twice during the battle, and it's gone! What is this? Tool man? You write about dragon knights but not about dragons? You play warrior and don't buy a knife? Did you run on your legs as a knight? Is this appropriate? Also, I really don't want to complain about the setting of being able to ride a dragon in its young stage. Please refer to the settings for Dragon. The baby dragon is just a fat lizard, it can only run like a duck! The baby dragon can fly, so why call it a baby dragon? It's better to just crawl out of the egg and fly. Then why do you still need to be in childhood? Don't gnaw on it until you grow old. Why don't you go hunting for food by yourself if you can fly? Forget it, these are all minor issues. Writing business simulations there is a big problem. They all fell asleep to me

Too little

When I first read the title, I thought it was the famous military urban novel released a few years ago.

Why does "Starting with an Archangel" perform well? A big reason is that the title and introduction clearly indicate that it is an invincible hero theme. This attracted a large number of nostalgic fans of Invincible Heroes. Recently there is "Invincible Heroes: The Hidden Architect". To be honest, the writing skills are very average, but the monthly ticket can reach 3,000. Why? A big reason is that a large number of nostalgic fans of Invincible Heroes are watching and voting. If True North directly returns to Invincible Heroes, especially if the title and introduction of the book make it clear that it is about Invincible Heroes, I think the results will definitely be better than his.

I will still follow the book. I just hope that Beifang can write it longer this time and don't end it just as soon as it's over.

I forgot how the previous book was successful, and this is what happened.

To be honest, I don't want any players to come out () There aren't many that have been written.

The eunuch who cut himself twice in a row also had a few unfinished books

No matter if there are more updates later or not, please reply.

How come robbing women in the article is considered a right thing by the author? !

That's it? Who will dare to read your books in the future?

I'll go. I also said that I should take some time to raise myself, but am I a eunuch again?

Keep it up, it was updated two months ago. What do you think of this? The previous few books have been chased and lost. I want to read this one again. It hasn't been raised yet, it's already gone. 😠 The author's persistence is victory.

How come robbing women is still considered the right thing to do by the author? According to what he wrote, if he robs a woman, the woman still has to thank him?

Difficult to stretch

Except that it's not enough to watch, it's pretty good so far. I recommend it to you every day.

Archangel is actually very well written, but fantasy novels and game fanfics seem to be similar, but they are not the same field... If I saw names like the Light Calendar or Black Truffle Town in the Archangel book, I wouldn't think it was a poisonous point. If it were left in a fantasy novel, it would be fatal. Many readers would be confused by Ice and The writing style of physical books such as Song of Fire, The Lord of the Rings, and Dragonlance Chronicles is very satisfying. It belongs to a strange category with many bad stories and few readers. Even if this book is classified as a game article by readers, it is of no use because the author has written too much and has no habit of clarifying the genre at the beginning. It is useless to just rely on novel classification to tell the truth. If the author wants to change tracks, he would have to upgrade his Wuling Hongguang to a Porsche 911. That would be too difficult, so I think it is better to write a fanfic honestly.

Why read this book: 1. The writing is excellent, and the world view, scenery, characterization, etc. Have a strong sense of Western fantasy. The style is very similar to some ancient game novels, with a Renaissance aesthetic. 2. This time the author has also integrated the elements of the Fourth Natural Disaster, the jumping-off players and the solemn fantasy style. The contrast between these two styles is very strong. I am personally looking forward to what method the author will use to "put new wine in old bottles" in the future. 3. It is worth mentioning that at the end of each chapter there will be a story note: either the development of the characters or the supplement of the background. These details greatly increase the sense of immersion in the story, and the author has put great care into it. Why not read this book: The overall pace is slow, and the game world is still open for three years. It reminds me of Blue Dragon. With the current progress, I don't know how long it will take for players to enter. Recommended audience: Currently recommended to readers who want to watch traditional Western fantasy and like dragon riding elements. For fans of the fourth natural disaster game article, it is worth waiting and watching, and the future is promising. Due North "The Sky of Dragonriders" Recommendation Index: Grain and Grass (80 points) Number of words: 110,000 Recommendations for similar works: "Into a Strange World", "The Necromancer Just Wants to Plant Trees" Plot Summary: There are still three years before the opening of the "Heroes" game, and the protagonist traveled through the game and became a half-elf NPC. This time, he decided to use his knowledge of the game world to intervene in the plot and seize the title of "No. 1 Dragon Rider". {"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"Book Famine Terminator"}

... After reading the comments, it's like this. We are here to see dragons, either with martial arts or wits. We write a business article, and the chapters listed are all insignificant. I always jump to these chapters directly, so the results are very bad, but... I think I can still save it now. After all, I just started writing it well and I have some savings.

Updated a year ago. Are you going to open a new book?