Magic Scumbag

Hope it improves! Writing such a long book was not only a whim, but also a way to practice writing essays I don't think I can label this book Wudiliu. After all, when I see Wuweiliu I always feel it's quite brainless, but this book is indeed a combination of cool writing and Wudiliu. It is not like other books where it is directly set to be invincible, and then the protagonist is just as wise. Da Liang has a brain and is organized. Although some of his achievements come from the established technology trees on the earth, such as the portrayal of the National Star Newspaper.                  ，， The author uses ink and water to describe the role of entertainment, which is exactly the same as the current short video of fragments. Entertainment to death, as the saying goes! I give this example to express that the author sets some events not only to make the protagonist show off, but also to add his own thinking. Some people will ask whether this book has a female protagonist or how many female protagonists. But I feel that in this book, the gender of men and women is blurred. This is not to say that the characters are neither male nor female, and the gender description in the article is still clear, but that each character has his own accurate personality. He is like a friend in your life, full and substantial, and you will not deliberately think, oh, this is the heroine. Oh, this is the villain, but treat him as a complete person Therefore, during the whole reading, I didn't even realize that there was no standard heroine in this book, because I was completely immersed in the conflict of the drama and the advancement of the plot This book did dig a hole in the development of Gao Dimension, but anyway, I liked it. Regardless of whether it is watertight or not, at least it can justify itself In short, I think a good book must not only be interesting (Although the definition of interesting has ten thousand Hamlets, some people prefer the mindless and refreshing article about how lonely it is to be invincible, some People like the Lord of Mysteries to have a tight setting and a strong sense of substitution) More importantly, it should allow readers to understand or learn something. I think I have learned a lot of speaking skills and diplomacy haha Don't blame me, it's all my opinion The above

I can understand the protagonist being careful when he discovers a poisonous spot, but why is he so petty when he has such a powerful force in his hands? The expansion of the power is entirely dependent on the protagonist alone, are all his subordinates doing it for free? The key is that after 100 chapters, I found that the planes were separated. I want to develop technology. This is very uncomfortable. It is a magical science fiction. The key is that the protagonist is still so petty and slowly develops. Also, the protagonist becomes a 6-year-old child. Does the author mean that there is no heroine in this book? Or do you plan to just come and finish the whole book ten years later? Not as exciting as the previous one at all

😂😂I have ordered all of them, but I still like to open the pirated version and watch it.

I came in and took a look after receiving the reward for completing the book. I was a little regretful but not too surprised. Personally, I think the main reason is that the world is too big. If the North was written as something similar to The Lord of the Rings, it would be really powerful and directly become a god. But serialized online novels are indeed difficult to organize. If you don't publish and write it yourself, you may be able to adjust the length gap, and you can look ahead and look back at any mistakes... Although it is great to publish online serialization for the first time... But there are still some problems... No more, come on, North! The main line should be laid as long as possible in the next book. With a large frame, it will not be easy to derail~

The plot is good, I recommend reading the author's previous book first. It's just that the update is a little short, so let's keep it for now.

Shocked, such a good book comes from Silver Alliance

Well written, keep up the good work!

When I read the beginning, I thought this setting was so similar to the archangel at the beginning! ? At last glance, it turned out that it was written by one person... This book includes an archangel at the beginning. I personally think that the writing is a bit confusing and taken for granted, and the logic is not so rigorous, so I can't stand it after reading dozens of chapters. It is not suitable for old bookworms, but it is good for those new to the reading circle. Two days ago, I saw someone saying that this book was like Overlord, and after reading it, I felt that it was quite different from Overlord...

Short and weak<(￣3￣)>

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The opening is very distinctive and the writing is delicate, showing the tip of the iceberg of a new imaginary world before the readers' eyes. 👍

Dear friends, I am a loyal reader of the world of tower defense and love this book very much

I read a chapter and the book review area ① A very detailed introduction to time travel. The setting of time travel is designed to give modern readers a sense of immersion without being out of touch with the drama. But the environment of this article is not modern but the future, so... ② God-like background introduction, future + game master + magic game? The omission of this introduction is confusing! ③Book review + introduction = spoiler + explanation Spoilers give little sense of expectation, and are troubled by excessive similarities ④Sequel... Unless it is a super popular novel with a broad public base, and a sequel is written in a new work... It is easy for newcomers to quit Of course, old bookworms are very picky after reading too many novels. It is true that there are many classic works that have dissuading readers at the beginning, but they basically wake up after a hundred chapters.

This is an interesting story, from the previous one to this one, from games to fantasy to science fiction that is now possible. The grandness of the world view is a bit unexpected. But I just like this kind of unexpected novel, it's so exciting...

I had a cold a few days ago and felt dizzy. Then I felt dizzy while watching the space. My brain couldn't turn around and I couldn't figure it out.

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Start watching the original version today! Jesus can't stop me! I said it!

Record it: The first few chapters and the whole data lack a sense of story and no emotional fluctuations in reading.

The cute newbie comes to tell a story and show his face in the boss's book.

The writing is still smooth and the plot is still clear. Hope to keep it up, the only requirement is to update it as soon as possible. I've given you all the recommended votes every day, and I hope to update more.

I found this book very interesting. In order to understand this book, I went to read the author's previous book, only to find that it was a book that I had abandoned after reading dozens of chapters. This time I patiently read it, and it was a bit toxic in the early stages. In the middle and later stages, I only had one sentence of mmp. I felt that my IQ was crushed in this book. I discovered that this was a wonderful book and immediately ordered the entire book. If you think the author plagiarized Bone King, you can try the author's previous book. I feel like the author is simply underachieving when writing novels. If anyone feels the same as me, please give it a thumbs up. It would be better if you add some comments.

This book is really miserable. The author wrote the book carefully, but there are always people who accuse the author of plagiarism without even reading the book... I watch anime as well as light novels and online articles. To be honest, except for some coincidences in settings, the plot and characters of this book have nothing to do with Gu Aotian. But why do a group of people say this is plagiarism with an inexplicable sense of superiority? Please, I am a 2D enthusiast. 2D is really still a small circle, so don't be so inexplicably confident. You didn't even read the plot of someone else's book and you just said it was plagiarized. The author wouldn't feel bad if he saw it. Gu Ao Tian Huo? Sorry, that is only considered "relatively popular" in the two-dimensional circle. No one really cares about Gu Aotian in the Internet literary circle. This kind of invincibility has been around for a long time.

Daliang in the previous book is quite impressive! In the main world, the only first human empire in the past and future that unified the main world was created by Daliang. Let me count for you what achievements this bright boss has achieved in the world of Invincible Heroes. Of course, if there is anything wrong, please point it out to book friends. After all, many things have been forgotten after so long. First of all, he is the master of the drow elves. The drow elves were originally elves from the elven plane. Later, because I forgot the reason (him), they ran to the underground world and became black elves. When Daliang conquered the underground world, he first subdued a black elf named Monica, and then made Monica a saint of the black elf clan. After that, he continued to cause trouble. When the first 16th-level strongman of the Spirit Clan was born, he drove her crazy, and then made her become Monica's assistant, and then sealed the second and third Black Elf Mistresses who would soon unify the Black Elf clan after breaking through to Level 16. Then she pushed Monica to the position of Black Elf Queen and unified the Black Elf clan. From then on, the Black Elf changed its name to Drow Elf and swore allegiance to Daliang. He is also the King of the Dwarves. The dwarves were originally one of the major tribes in the elven plane, but they have been marginalized by the elves for a long time. Later, they couldn't bear it and launched the War of Independence. Although the dwarf king was very brave and fought one-on-one, there were several 16th-level Elf Kings in the elven plane. He is also the mentor of death in the plane of the undead and one of the monarchs of the undead. When he went to the plane of the undead, Da Liang entered the summoning formation set up by Elder Quentin, one of the top leaders of the Wizards Union, and happened to be in the big... At one point in the formation, it happened that the union branch led by Elder Quentin was being attacked by the men of Melancholy Monarch, one of the orthodox rulers of the undead plane of the undead. In order not to be destroyed, Elder Quentin launched a large formation and prepared to summon reinforcements, but Da Liang happened to arrive. , Not only destroyed a node and reduced the power of the formation, but also attracted the summoned undead army. , A good experience of the power of the Sea of the Dead, but for the protagonist, the greater the loss, the greater the gain. After surviving the Sea of the Dead, he followed the portal set by Elder Quentin to the Wizards Guild, and then Da Liang heard some secrets and obtained the artifact at the same time. A component of the Angel Alliance, Da Liang later succeeded in becoming the boss of this eliminated branch by relying on these secrets and the tokens given by the archangel. With the help of the remaining men of the union branch, after some planning, he became the bishop of a church in the Immaculate Holy See. The undead believe in the God of Death. Even the undead monarchs believe in the God of Death. The Undead Holy See is the Holy See that believes in the God of Death. However, some undead do not believe in the God of Death. They believe that the God of Death is just a more powerful hero. What they believe in is that the undead are mortal. Only truth is eternal. With the help of angels, they established a wizards union to fight against the undead monarchs. After understanding the situation, Daliang made a cool move. He put forward a new point of view, that is, to believe in God as a god. Who doesn't want to become a god? It's just that the Undead Monarchs didn't dare to think about it because of the Immaculate Doctrine, but Daliang successfully persuaded the Sad Lord to accept his point of view with his sharp tongue, and based on this point of view, he edited the new Immaculate Doctrine and created the New Immaculate Holy See. Then he announced a In this game, he successfully gathered the components of the artifact Angel Alliance, and took advantage of the Wizards Union's opportunity to attack the First Monarch. It not only demonstrated the strength of the Wizards Union, but also suppressed the First Monarch, and at the same time helped the Crystal Dragon snatch their obelisk from the angels. He saved the Crystal Dragon and the Poison Dragon Clan (unfortunately, there is only one Poison Dragon left, but this one has the potential of level 16, and he is responsible for reviving the Poison Dragon Clan) and then threw out the New Unsullied Doctrine, thereby pushing the Sad Lord to the throne of the New Unsullied Holy See, integrating The power of the Undead Monarch and the Wizards' Union reunited the Undead Plane. From then on, Da Liang became one of the Undead Monarchs and the Death Mentor of the New Unsullied Holy See, allowing the Undead Plane to firmly occupy the second position in the evil camp, and later pushed the Undead Plane to the position of the boss of the evil camp. . Good and evil are camps that have existed since ancient times, and they are also the only two camps. However, Daliang forced himself to open up a third camp, which was the neutral camp led by the Five-Color Flag Alliance. The Five-Color Flag Alliance has five main alliances, two of which are the Crystal Dragon Clan and the Purple Dragon Clan, whose members are all born at level 15 and whose leader has reached level 16. The other two main alliances are also national-level forces. Only Daliang is the main alliance and is in a leadership position. He used the power in his hands to create the first empire of the main world, the only empire in history that unified the main world. This broke the restrictions of the main world and allowed the human race of the main world to give birth to 16th-level strong men in the future. He also joined forces with Lucifer, the former Lord of Hell, to defeat and seal Satan, the former Lord of Hell, and arranged for the Archangel Michael to seal Lucifer and obtain the Doomsday Blade. When Michael sealed Lucifer and continued his work of opening the divine plane with great satisfaction, Da Liang led people to unite with the angel mentor Metatron and the 16th-level supreme angel Surya to ambush her, seal Michael, and push Metatron to the top. Taking the position of Archangel, Daliang himself became the Demon King of Destruction and the Lord of Hell. Since Hell was greatly weakened by successive wars, Daliang gave up his top position in the evil camp to the plane of the undead. At this point, all the top leaders of the three camps became his own. This was Daliang's peak period. During this period, Daliang was able to command all planes directly and indirectly, and his power had reached its peak, until he opened the divine plane. The author has coded so many words, can you give me some feedback?

After reading hundreds of chapters, let's talk about my feelings. (Not poisonous for the time being, just blowing) This book is the sequel to the author's previous book "Starting with an Archangel", so it takes nearly ten chapters to introduce the protagonist and the protagonist's power at the beginning. This is considered to take care of new readers, so be patient and read on. The protagonist is the person who opened the Age of Gods in the Ancient Age of Magic, but there was a deviation that led directly to the fourth era of the Age of Ancient Magic, the Age of Gods, the Dark Age, and the Age of Steam Magic, the Age of Steam Magic. The plot will not be described. After reading a hundred chapters, the plot should be relatively slow, but it still gives people a feeling that it should be like this. It should be related to the writing power. The author's description of the scenes is great. Book friends who can't accept the slow pace can also give it a try. The above is not really bragging, but now I am going to start bragging. This book can be regarded as a steam magic novel. I have read a lot of this type of novel, and the following problems often arise when reading it: Chaos, steam civilization is synonymous with ancient chaos for us. The social order is not perfect, and the scientific and technological strength is too backward. It initially has the shadow of modern society, but compared with modern society, it is too backward and chaotic. I am confused. Many books of this type are confusing to read. There are too few descriptions of social features, and new terms appear at every turn. Nobles, churches, kings, armies, gods, magic, professions. There are too many things that we have never seen before. We only understand them in novels, and many novels are very different. Therefore, in many novels of this type, too little description of social features makes people lose interest in them (of course, it would be better for authors who are not good at writing to write less). The author handles these things very well, not the best, but there is always a kind of magic in the words that attracts people to read. It does not feel confusing at all, and just opens the veil of a new world little by little with the protagonist. The author's last book was dismissed after reading the first few dozen chapters. I really can't believe that the author's writing skills have grown so much in this book. It can be said to be terrifying. Good writing skills and perfect description of social features are crucial to a novel. Readers are a group of people who read stories. We don't mind watching the protagonist fight wits and courage in a secret room, nor do we mind the protagonist unfolding his story in a super vast continent. However, if during the protagonist's progress, we not only understand the protagonist's story, but also follow the protagonist to experience a scenery that is completely different from reality, this is undoubtedly a huge bonus. Finally, if you think the book is toxic, you can leave a message under the book review. I have time to give an appropriate answer based on my understanding. After all, I gave up the book when I first saw that the protagonist was going to the academy. When I read it again, the author repeatedly emphasized that it was not an academy. After reading it, I found that it was unexpectedly good. After all, the poisonous point may be the poisonous point you thought after being misunderstood. Please don't come here if you are just a fan. If you are not satisfied with the answer and continue to complain, I will not object. I just don't want the book I read to be misunderstood. Everyone's pleasure and pain are different, which is understandable. In the end, I didn't take the money, I spent money to read the book, and I had to write a long paragraph about it, I lost money 🤫 The following are the latest new insights, which are not very obvious in the first 150 chapters, but after that, you can slowly feel the charm of this writing method. The author's ability to develop multiple lines is very strong. It is not limited to the protagonist. Instead, like a movie, multiple main lines develop at the same time, with the protagonist as the main character and others as secondary, leading to an ultra-broad universe era. And this is not a steam magic world at all, this is an interstellar magic world! ! !

Everyone is writing book reviews, so let me write one too 😊 I didn't know about this game until I read the Absinthe book, and it was only after I came into contact with Gale Battlefield that I understood the entire worldview. It can be said that Absinthe was the one who inspired me to be interested in games and novels; later Twelve Wings pushed this interest to a climax, and also caused his vacancy period for the next three to five years; and then God Level turned out to be a first-class refreshing article. Putting aside the utilitarianism, it is really a book worth ordering. Unfortunately, after finishing the book, the author also entered a trance; and finally, this is the first chapter of this book. The story begins, and a strong godlike aura hits my face when I first get into it. I know that no matter how bad the plot of this book is, there will be something that makes me happy. As expected, the story has been advancing steadily, presenting a manipulative Su Qin in front of us, but it ends abruptly at the end. When we want to see what the so-called god is like, we are left with an ending that is endlessly imaginative. Now, Wang Daliang has reappeared in the world after 2000 with his past achievements, looking forward to once again bringing us a story of sword and magic, war and peace.

At the beginning, an archangel chased me until now. The new book has started well. I hope the God Plane will have a good layout. Don't be greedy for progress. Good wine will be savored slowly. The sequel is more difficult to write than the new one. Come on 😁

The author's skill in the latter part of the last book is simply amazing, but it's a pity that there are only one or two hundred chapters, which is not enough. If the previous book had been as good as the later version from the beginning, I believe the author would have been able to become a god. Looking forward to the new work, please do your best, Mr. Liang＾0＾~ What kind of bicycle do you want T^T What kind of watch do you want T^T

I gave up in the second chapter and said that my personal strength would be cleared, but in the end I kept thinking about adultery. Why was my strength gone? Why can't I release my magic? So damn poisonous!

We all know that the outside of the crystal wall is the general universe. The author has not yet said what role the original Hero World server group played after the breakthrough, but judging from the initial star that spawns monsters, the game system must still be there. In the previous game, when the black elves were about to rise, the system would arrange for hero promotion. When the First Empire was established, Howard was also promoted. This game also said that Michael cutting the crystal wall was a manifestation of the system's will. At that time, the hero world and the earth were both narrow universes, and no one was nobler than the other. The contact prophet could predict the future through the authority given by the system, so it seemed logical that the will of the earth would return as a small character from the future (such as giving the deduced "Skillful Shi Fei" initiation to Shi Fei's body). So is Shi Fei's rebirth a concrete action by the earth's will to break through into the broad universe? The breakthrough of the Heroic World is manifested in breaking the set upper limit of the realm and realizing self-iteration. In other words, the game system of the Heroic World has realized self-iteration and became a strong artificial intelligence. After all, this system was written by humans. If the people on earth can write such a strong artificial intelligence, it is incredible that the earth itself is still trapped in the narrow universe after two thousand years. It can even be speculated that the heroic world may not be able to completely break away from the narrow universe, but it is dragged down by the earth.