I Am in Marvel DIY Dragon Ball

The dragon ball is given to Gu Yi, and its use depends on Gu Yi's expression. This is too toxic. After seeing this, I didn't want to continue reading.

I don't understand why I'm afraid of the Ancient One when I travel to Marvel? Directly use the power of the system to seal the Ancient One in a certain time period, so that no matter how hard you jump, the Ancient One who is sealed in the past or future will never be able to reach the present to stop you from causing trouble. When you grow up, you are no longer afraid of Gu Yi, even if she breaks through the seal, it will be useless.

The creativity is very good, but it is too wordy. Many plots are incoherent and there are problems with connection. There is too much popular science content. I suggest you repost it to sort out your thoughts. The book is still good.

Are you doing popular science? A whole bunch of boring knowledge points? No one wants to see

Damn it, can this also lead to my daily poison?

In the advertising dimension, Dryad Grandma Zhang Wei! (Internet image intrusion and deletion)

Everyone knows more or less about Marvel. How long has it been since Marvel came out? I know everything that I need to know, and those who don't know don't want to know more. Popular science is not necessary Dragon Ball is very strong throughout the period, but the jump in combat power is too big. There is no comparison in the way you write it. And yours is the movie version. Dragon Ball system magic has no bonus to combat. Even Tianshi's basic combat power is unknown. How strong do you think magic can be? The Ancient One said that only magic can defeat magic? Joke. Not to mention too much, just over 1,000 combat power points, you can just plow the earth all over. Now that you can make dragon balls, make a wish and increase your fighting power first. Find a place to live in the mountains. Let's ask about Shenlong's materials again. Isn't this simple? Boost to boost to 130 to 140. Who can do anything to you? Unless he uses a nuclear bomb. Do you think the flying pillar is not as fast as the Hulk? And there is no need to suppress combat effectiveness at all. You can write whatever you want, as long as it doesn't look like a certain book, where the combat power of two to three thousand is equal to that of the Black Widow.

I can only say that it was okay, but I stopped reading after reading a few chapters. Reason: I didn't like it. Let's go to the comment section again. Fortunately, I only saw a few pictures ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ……

It's obviously a very interesting idea, I just want to tell you what you are doing 😅

When I read the title of the book, I thought it was a Wudi article, but when I read the comments, it turned out to be a suppressed article. This easily creates a psychological gap for readers who come to read the Wudi article.

Wouldn't it be nice to have a shape-shifting Namekian? Also, it's too loose-spoken and too vernacular.

The writing was okay at the beginning, but it fell a little short when it came to Iron Man. Giving the Dragon Balls to Ancient One was really poisonous. The poster was a bit too big, and the combat power was a bit too much. In fact, you can increase the combat power on the earth in the early stage, and then go directly to the universe. The earth is a mess. With the combat power of the Dragon Balls, nothing on the earth can threaten the protagonist

In fact, the foundation is wrong from the beginning. If you set up that the protagonist can make dragon balls, but low-level materials can only make low-level dragon balls, and high-level materials can only make high-level dragon balls. Then add this idea to the upgrade element, and it will be easy to write. In the early stage, you will make money to use jade and gemstones to build some low-level products. What about curing diseases and saving people and fooling the rich? After a few times, you will slowly rise to the top, and readers will stop scolding you.

The creativity is great. A messy setting, no common sense, all kinds of dramas, and all kinds of secondary settings.

Foreign is not foreign, earth is not earthy. It reads like Peking Opera singing rap

The creativity is great, but the logic is a bit confusing. The author's writing skills also need to be improved. I can feel that there are many things that I want to express but cannot express clearly.

Since the author is writing about traveling through the Marvel Cinematic Multiverse, let's talk about the current combat capabilities of the cinematic universe. The first is what if (Marvel has officially stated what if is part of the performance within the worldview of the Marvel movie multiverse): Nick Fury believes that Captain Marvel's punch is equivalent to ten nuclear bombs. Captain Marvel from another universe punched through the mantle in a few seconds and made a large crater in the core of Xandar. According to the core of Xandar, which is as big as the core of the earth, the crater is no less than 1500km. In Guardians of the Galaxy 1, it was mentioned that there are 12 billion people on Xandar. Party Thor and his friends smashed a burning meteor. According to Jane's observation, the meteor was the size of a planet. Party Thor blows away the Rangers from France to England. Tear down Stonehenge with one finger. Team Shock sent Thor flying from England to the United States with one punch. After flying on the road for a few seconds, Team Shock was able to keep up with the speed of Thor who was knocked away. Thor's energy output can only recharge Team Shock. The Ancient One can split the timeline of a universe, and after the death of the body, the soul can still travel through reality at will to talk to Doctor Strange. The five-jeweled Ultron destroyed the galaxy with a single thought, and the galaxy-destroying attack was easily eaten by Doctor Strange Supreme. what if The screenwriter said in the interview that the six-gem Ultron can destroy multiple multiverses. Black Strange survived the collapse of the universe, but it was more laborious to withstand the six-gem Ultron attack and he also used the Time Stone. Then, some of the normal Marvel Cinematic Universe settings are all from the official Marvel Cinematic Universe set collection and screenwriter interviews. I don't know why I can't post screenshots: Thor's hammer on the Rainbow Bridge has been compared to an earthquake, which can shake from the observatory to the treasure house below the Asgard palace. "Odin is the most powerful Norse god. He can easily destroy an army with just a little movement." From the art manual of "Thor 1". In the Thor 1 prelude comic Riodin created a galaxy. In Thor 1, Thor smashed the earth of Jotunheim with his hammer. The screenwriter commented that Thor shook the entire planet. The complete body of Surtur is 4km tall. The English and Chinese versions of the set have stated many times that hitting Ronan's hadron cannon with the Power Stone in Silver Guardian 1 can destroy natural satellites. The director commented that the Axiom Canon, developed by Kerry from the Captain Marvel setting collection Starforce on the Rise, turned a habitable planet into a purgatory-like place, and the core of the planet was already unstable, but Carol survived the attack of this weapon. Captain Marvel can travel through black holes. The Pioneer spacecraft can absorb impacts and withstand meteor shower-level hits and high temperatures. It fell directly from the atmosphere to the ground, but was easily crashed by Thor. Iron Man's palm cannon can vaporize metal. The destroyer ray is equivalent to 100,000 times the power of the palm cannon. The melting point of the Eternals is the core of the sun, which is 20 million degrees. Supreme Alitham of the Celestials is able to create the universe with his bare hands. In Thor 4, Eternity can erase all the gods in the universe with just one thought.

Calling Odin Zeus makes me instantly numb.

Author Niu, the whole novel is like writing prose. Those who know it think you are fan fiction, and those who don't know it think it is an artistic work written by a literary youth to compete for the Nobel Prize in Literature. I suggest the author write a special article and submit it to Yilin. Writing a novel at the starting point is too humiliating for you, and your talent is not worth wasting time for us readers to read.

No, the introduction only has a few words and I can't write it fluently, so I still expect the book to be good-looking. . . .

After reading Chapter 10, I'm a bull's eye and a horse's mouth.

I read sixteen chapters all the way, but I don't know what the author wrote or what he wanted to express 😰😰😰😰

I felt very uncomfortable reading this book.

The writing in Chapter 13 is too discouraging. It was written in the previous chapter to hide away and then immediately get mixed up. This way of writing is a bit 6

I want to see someone who is obedient in front of the protagonist. Dragon Ball Demons Including girls. {"NickName":"Book Friends 20220831073106908","UserId":393420323}

Come on, I rarely see Dragon Ball Marvel novels

Anyway, this is the first book by a new author, and I find it quite attractive.

What is the introductory video?

The author also worked very hard to finish writing this book. I still look forward to the author publishing similar books.

What was written in the previous chapters?