A Mage? A Spell Engineer!

The theme is pretty good, the power system is pretty good too, but it just doesn't look good. What's up with the sudden appearance of a coquettish and cute saint?

It is a good book in all aspects, but there is one thing that I don't know how to describe. It feels quite strange. I don't know why. The protagonist seems not to be here. He is somewhat hostile to his motherland and the empire. He is obviously a secret intelligence officer, but he does not take the initiative to report the information every time. Even if the boss comes to ask, it is just like squeezing out toothpaste, one-third or two-thirds. Logically speaking, the protagonist is an innocent imperial man and has joined the agency. Reporting the information should be good for him, and the main character The information that Jiao got now was not detrimental to him at all, but he chose not to report it every time. For example, when he found the secret text on the leather armor, the protagonist had no idea of reporting it, but the two same intelligence agents were hiding next to him. Only when you discovered it did you know that, logically speaking, these secrets were knowledge smuggled from the empire. As an imperial agent, you should report this matter out of reason and for your own sake. The organization will definitely reward you if they find out.

Kano's first annotation: Already read, nonsense (It is just Rorschach's experience and conjecture of using water-making technology in the secondary plane, it has not been strictly verified, and it is not equivalent to the relevant settings of this book)

After reading Chapter 20, overall, there are no major flaws, but there are constant minor flaws, which makes it uncomfortable to read. What makes me complain the most is that the protagonist lacks actual combat experience and is not prepared with a set of skilled spell combos. So he goes on a team adventure with strangers to act as a guard? Just to save money? What nonsense

More than one book friend complained: What kind of engineer is the protagonist? In fact, it was said at the beginning that he was a college student majoring in sinkholes who traveled through the tiankeng, and the scope has been narrowed down to biochemical environmental materials, not the two major guardians of civil engineering and machinery, and not the otherworldly space machine... So some book friends said that the protagonist does not engage in large-scale construction or build floating cities, but he is trying to sell dogs. Working shifts in a factory, drawing blueprints until your head goes bald, typing code... Those who do these may all be engineers. Perhaps it's because civil engineering has been relatively popular on the Internet in recent years, so when people saw the title of the book, they immediately clicked in to see how the protagonist used magic to remove dust. But I think it's also very interesting to bring other engineering majors into a different world. In particular, chemical reactions and chemical engineering processes are very compatible with magic and alchemy. Rorschach's understanding of the spellcasting process at the beginning is an analogy to chemical reaction kinetics regarding basic reaction assumptions, drafted normality assumptions, and rate control step assumptions. The panel also reflects the idea of ​​unit operations (of course, book friends who have played a certain game with the prefix N may feel familiar with it, and it is indeed one of the setting references). I don't think it is necessary to put the above into the text, especially the beginning. It is simply a crime worthy of death for using textbook hydrology. Regarding the content of engineers, another example is the use of thermodynamics to solve the problem of improving the direction of steam engines. This is too fucking engineer-Carnot, the original author of the Carnot cycle, was once considered an engineer and not qualified to be called a scientist (sad). To be honest, I don't think I handled this paragraph well. I didn't want to make a long discussion like a textbook, but I didn't seem to understand it clearly. But it is true that what Rorschach solves is an engineering problem, and it also provides a power basis for the subsequent stable supply of energy to the teleportation array. After learning the lesson, I later put the discussion on "Energy-Ether" in the book review area after illustrating it with Rorschach's notes. (The starting point is in internal testing of the illustration function. I will use pictures to insert them into the text in the future.) Obviously this is the idea of ​​thermodynamics, including equilibrium state, free energy, etc. Having said so much, everyone in the industry must already know that Rorschach majored in chemical engineering and technology before traveling through time. The protagonist's panel will continue to evolve around the theme of "spell engineer". As mentioned at the end of the introduction, Rorschach will strive to "make people's lives better" whether using magic or the professional knowledge brought by time travel. This is what engineers are contributing to the world regardless of their subjective wishes. Thank you all for your companionship, and I wish you a happy reading!

Druyatz (form in dream) A corner of the forest Leaves of three trees Winter painted on the Tower of Stars

Rorschach went to the Holy Kingdom to study, and then developed a series of new technologies. After returning home, he didn't mention anything. When the war started, his country suffered the loss of having no intelligence and technology, and the enemy suffered the dividends of his own technology. Although he was a time traveler, he was still his native motherland. In the early stage, he promoted that the training of mages in his motherland was more advanced, but in the later stage of the war, it was stretched. You also suffered the dividends of the empire's training system. The simple patriotic feelings in my heart are difficult to accept in recent chapters. Goodbye

The somewhat inexplicable Holy Mother... Throws a bad-hearted thief at the door of a farmer's house to see if they can save him. It gives people a feeling of... Uh... Moral kidnapping of others. Throwing the problem to others. This thief is still a cult... And may bring danger to the farmer.

Mage, data flow. Characterization II. The author of combat descriptions has a certain talent, but the language is not concise enough. The plot description is confusing, obscure and weak in logic. Give this book a death sentence and a six-month suspended sentence.

One thing I discovered is that the more niche a book is, the more people will criticize it, and most of the criticisms are untenable, which is what he himself takes for granted. Looking at the comment section, the novel did not make me feel stupid. Those comments showed my stupidity vividly. I felt like a student without much life experience, who just thinks whatever he wants, like a studio assembly line. After reading too many brainless cool articles, the novel needs a little bit of brain to connect with the previous thoughts, and then I start to find faults.