The Girl Descends to a Land Without Seas

If this isn't a comedy, I'll kill you! Every single one of them is twisted, every single one of them is twisted. I actually believed every single one of your books. And they were all eunuchs! This is no comedy, I'll kill you! Aa ...

I hope they can strengthen the "childhood sweetheart" aspect, so that the contrast when she becomes a "loser" is more impactful.

Just when I saw the real twisting and turning starting, and I was excited to finally witness the true twisting techniques, it ended abruptly. The ending used fantasy elements, abruptly stopping. The two most soulful characters in the entire book are Yu Mai and Yao Yue, with Yao Yue being the female lead, while Yu Mai's role is inconsistent.

I was enjoying the story, but then they had to bring in Midori to disgust me. It was just madness. The camping trip with the female leads was supposed to be a highlight, but they added Midori to make it even more disgusting. It didn't help the plot at all. I don't know why they added this character. Were they just trying to make the readers sick? What was supposed to be a very enjoyable novel turned into something disgusting.

Damn, my dad's nickname is Xiaohai, and every time I see the female lead calling the main character by his name affectionately, I feel an indescribable awkwardness.

Keep it up! Even Crow's "Love Journey" didn't get many readers back then. 😡

The ending felt abrupt. While the emotional portrayal was delicate and pure, the plot structure was simply a matter of problem arising – problem concealed – problem erupting, with Yu Mai ultimately resolving the issue through a deus ex machina. It was a bit of a shame, as this method diminished much of the story.

Suddenly I noticed the label included "Relaxed" 🙂🙂🙂

If a girl like Sanzhi Yaoyue can't get a happy ending soon, I'll ban my account and curse the author to death. (I just saw Qingmei confessing her feelings, so I'm not in a good mood. Please understand if I've offended you.)

I love watching this, the flavor is really strong, I just love this kind of taste.