The Girl Descends to a Land Without Seas

If it's not a comedy, I'll kill you! Every book is screwed up, every book is screwed up. I actually believe you in every book. And they are all eunuchs! This is not a comedy, I will kill you! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

I hope to strengthen Qingmei so that there will be a greater sense of gap when becoming a defeated dog.

When I saw that the back part really started to twist, I was excited to appreciate the real twisting technology, but it ended just like that. The ending is handled with fantasy elements and ends abruptly. The two most soulful characters in the whole book are Yumai and Yaoyue, and Yaoyue is the heroine, while Yumai's sister's role is unstable. Therefore, the moon shake is very important, so important that in the later period, except for the body and companionship, nothing can be compared to the moon shake. Yanchun's advantage, from his childhood sweetheart to his girlfriend, seemed to be strengthened but actually weakened. From that confession onwards, Yanchun could not compare to Yaoyue. Therefore, the relationship can only be tied up with confession, which is also the twisted part that everyone loves to watch. But what makes me regretful and puzzled is the handling of Shake the Moon. Yaoyue's advantage has always been there, and she can't give up on Qingyuan no matter what. Yaoyue's self-esteem and need to be strong are the reasons why she cannot accept a threesome, and they are also where her personality charm lies. Then start twisting directly. At this time, the fun should have just begun. However, after a big dream from Tianjingshi, Yaoyue accepted it? This kind of treatment has to be said to be a pity and regret, which makes me uncomfortable. This feeling is more like being hypnotized 🙂 than enlightened.

I originally thought it was a good idea, but I had to make a green little brother and make him disgusting. It's just a disease. Going camping with several female protagonists was supposed to be a hot spot, but I made a green little brother and made him disgusting. It doesn't contribute to the plot at all. I don't know why this character was added. Does it make readers sick? A novel that was originally very comfortable, I vomited

Md My dad's nickname is Xiao Hai. Every time I see the heroine calling the protagonist's name affectionately, I feel unspeakably embarrassed.

Come on, no one read the Love Tour written by Crow 😡

The ending is quite abrupt, and the description of emotions is delicate and pure. However, from the perspective of the plot structure, it is just that problems arise - problems are concealed - problems erupt, and finally Yumai solves the problem through the deus ex machina. It is a pity that this method dissolves a lot of things.

Suddenly I found "easy" on the label 🙂🙂🙂

If girls like Sanzhi Yaoyue can't get a good ending as soon as possible, I will scold the author to death even if the account is banned (I just saw Qingmei's confession, and I am not in a good mood. If I have offended, please understand)

Md loves watching it, the taste is so strong, this is the best one