Romance Begins on an Island

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} "The Hatchling Girl and I on Chitori Island" Riqing, Love, Folklore, Disaster Article Maybe it's because I just finished reading "Suzuya's Journey" recently, and I feel that the topics of the two are somewhat similar, but the content of this book is too little, so it is better to focus more on the emotional line. Title of the book: "Me and the Doll Girl of Zhitori Island" Author: Yu Goose Novel elements: light novel, daily love Status of the work: serialized On the emotional line, one is the childhood green plum (Chaokong Shaking Apricot), and the other is the most beautiful "Queen" in the legend of the island (Jinghai Shenyue). Qingmei is a typical adolescent girl. Every move and every smile is full of youthful vigor, but she is shy to face feelings. The other is Tianxiang, who looks stunning. She is bold and dares to express her feelings, but she is limited by the traditions of the island. The male protagonist has his own emotional fluctuations towards the two female protagonists, so there is a high probability that this book will have two female protagonists. Then on the line of disaster, the male protagonist experienced an earthquake, lost his only relative, his sister, and finally left his hometown. The story later also used the "Queen" as a symbol of suppressing the disaster. When something goes wrong with the "Queen", it can also trigger a local natural disaster. It has some similarities with the folklorist disaster in the "Zero" series, and these are two of the more outstanding points. All in all, the current framework of this book is very large, but the corresponding content is not very much. I look forward to the author's subsequent arrangements.

No matter how difficult the process is, please believe that in my eyes this is a good story, and please give time to all the characters in the book. I looked around at the same time. Currently, there is no book with the same theme in Qidian Riqing. It is the only one with a very small audience. It is a difficult challenge for me. I hope everyone can read it carefully. I hope you can give me all your support. Your support is the key to how far this book can go.

This book will be slow to gain popularity, and the main tone of the book is a little different from other books, but I still hope you can help me read it. This is really important to me. (I am really a little writer with poor grades. The waistcoat is not important at all. Just assume that I am a novice. Thank you everyone.)

There has been a shortage of books recently, so I would like to recommend some books to everyone, okay? Becoming the Reiwa Tea Saint in Tokyo, my love style is a bit abnormal, my rebirth started from an unsuccessful breakup, (Madam, please calm down), invading the human world, our secret base, the green plum quartet in the snow country, (when the cherry blossoms fall, there will be beautiful girls confessing their love), no one understands monsters better than me, monsters The girl picks up the flavor, love begins on the island, the Asian girl completes the manual, I was trained by the childhood maid to become a love master, (Girl, let me qualify), looking for the lost ship girl, Tokyo survival game, the evil female senior sister haunts me, I can't study with the eldest lady, The Red Mansion is overwhelming, what bad thoughts can a girl have?

1. Preface I first read it for free on Qidian. Com and was ready to make a decision. After some hesitation, I decided to go to the website and read a few chapters to give it a try. Then I decided that it was not suitable for me, so I decided to abandon the book and share my feelings here. If you think what I said is wrong, just scold me. When scolding, remember to explain the reason. Don't stack up. 2. The problem of the male protagonist What makes me feel most uncomfortable in this book is the creation of the male protagonist. It is such a failure. The male protagonist himself has no bright spots except that he can say a few dirty words. The heroines' affection for him is nothing more than that he is handsome, well-educated or gentle, but he is so emotionally heavy that he commits suicide and runs from Tokyo to the island, hoping to be with the male protagonist. The main escape from the island is mismatched, or too many characters with built-in likability are a detriment to the love plot. Generally, only one such character is enough, but this book is full of characters. The feeling of looking at these characters is as angry as Huang Mao asking his father-in-law if the ghost fire is safe downstairs. Wugen's incomprehensible emotions destroy the logic of the plot. I think a good male protagonist should make readers admire him and think that he is worthy of the female protagonist, so that they can read comfortably, instead of writing about a real person, with female lickers one after another, making people think that the male protagonist is just a idiot who acts recklessly based on his preference. 3. Plot issues Let's talk about the plot. Looking at Qingmei's plot so far, I think it is just a story about a fool dragging his girl to lick the dog. There is no difference between this Qingmei and Qingmei's mother, but it highlights a moral kidnapping. It's such a good interaction. Speaking of the image of the male protagonist so far, if you haven't felt it yet, then swap the genders of the four male and female protagonists in this book. What kind of novel do you think this is? Women's videos don't write like this anymore! 4. Core As for the core, this book focuses on a fragmented, heavy reality and romantic comedy. What the hell is this? The male protagonist can solve everything with one face and one fist, right? I am satisfied with each of these two parts, but the way they are combined is disgusting. The bicycle part can be called a deus ex machina. It highlights a simple and crude character, who recovers his childhood sweetheart and then turns it into a romantic comedy. He uses the opportunity given by one woman to please the other, right? As for the "villain" character, I think the character is well created, even better than the male protagonist. The male protagonist's sister has no plot, so how can readers empathize with her? The "villains" each have their own motivations and stories, but the protagonist's process of "overcoming" them is simple and crude, that is, violence. It's that simple. The mayor is right, he is "a guy who only uses violence to solve problems." The author also thinks the same about the plot. 5. About the crow and summary I also suggest not to mention the crow again. Toru Watanabe's portrayal is still good and has weight, but the plot is copied too much. Kujo and Rin also have a love process instead of directly reaching the full favorability level. To be honest, is a love novel without a process still called a love novel? In general, the author wants both seriousness and comedy, and the result is that both sides are not pleased. 6. What I want to say to the author To be honest, I still like the author's writing style, but this is like a monkfish with a light on. I am attracted by the writing style and theme, and then I am bitten to death by you. I will read your new book now and hope to see your progress.

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The beginning of the story is quite good, and it is considered a good work until the plot breaks out in the early stage. However, the male protagonist is really not a human being. The more I watch it, the more disgusting it becomes. How can several girls fall in love with the male protagonist with such a character? To say that he is indecisive is a compliment. Qingmei was hung up until she died. If I had to do it again, I thought she would wake up, but she continued to hang up. Yao Ai treats the male protagonist like this and he also hangs on her, but it turns out that he fell in love with Yao Ai when he broke the door. Then you have hung a hammer for so long. You will be more confident if you are favored, right? You can stay on this shabby island for the rest of your life to accompany your queen.

Wenqing can do it, but if wenqing gets sick, he will die 😒

After reading a hundred chapters, don't be too disgusted. You don't need the protagonist to be a perfect person. At least he is a human being.

I updated the chapters I saved overnight and will talk about my favorite Kurosawa Rei. She is undoubtedly the most dazzling and heart-wrenching girl in this book. Lianai is really so cute that it makes people feel bad. She will not seek comfort like Yaoxing, saying that she only has a male protagonist, but is arrogant, kind and simple, with a strong personal will. And because of this, Jiang Yuan will never feel sorry for her as he feels for Yaoxing. In the latest chapter, the male protagonist The protagonist realizes his love with Lian Ai and wants to save it. However, Lian Ai's character will not indulge Jiang Yuan, so she now chooses to give up Jiang Yuan. However, when she leaves at the station, she is full of love. She hopes that the male protagonist can turn into the image of her love and pursue her in the future. But why does love fly like a moth to the flame that burns itself again and again? In fact, Jiang Yuan was not familiar with Lian Ai at the beginning. In addition, a series of incidents occurred on Zhitiao Island and old friends. Jiang Yuan needed to accept and resolve a large amount of information and important life decisions within two or three months. Because of his various unfamiliarity and immaturity, coupled with his overly emotional and superior Due to his indecisive character, the ambiguity between him and Lian'ai could not be resolved quickly. He was always hesitant, had no growth or experience, and did not understand the expectations and determination behind Lian'ai's coming to Zhitiao Island, which caused Lian'ai to lose confidence. When Jiang Yuan finally realized that he could not run to Tokyo without her. Although she has a loving personality, she will never agree to him again, but she is still looking forward to him in her heart, so she kept calling Jiang Yuan's name at the station (damn it, I cried when I saw it)