The World of American Comics: Projecting Ten Thousand Realms

I can't figure it out and feel confused. It's just that Pig's Feet keeps accepting apprentices or something. My writing skills are not good either, there is a lot of room for improvement.

What is your theme? I don't see it in the current ten chapters. A good story will have a clear plot line, but I couldn't figure it out when I read your book. It has no thought-provoking main line and no writing style that attracts readers. At the same time, I don't know what to express. I hope it can be improved in the future.

There are typos in the introduction of this novel... But there are still people looking forward to it?

It feels a bit like writing a biography. After more than thirty years, I can't even be the leader of the Assassin's League. Writing novels is like playing an online game.

Why do you think this is a book written by AI?

I can't see the topic of my article and I don't know what the author wants to write.

The sentences are not fluent and the logic is confusing. I hope the author can read it patiently before publishing, or look back at what he wrote after a month The plot is light, that is, there is not enough preliminary preparation The scene changes are abrupt, and the characters are not strong enough! Come on

There is a typo in the introduction: full strength, right

Frequent typos and incorrect sentences make people feel as uncomfortable as defecating in the open. Articles written by the studio are not like this 😅

I feel like the protagonist is Perfect Chiron, there are thousands of heroes in the world, half of them are Rody's disciples.

This is the first time I saw the introduction. There are typos.

What does it mean to not choose to go all out?

Is that a typo in the introduction? ?

High emotional intelligence: The author is very determined and decisive in writing books.

Author, you won't offend anything, right? The writing is okay, although it's a bit self-indulgent, but it's okay. Why are there so many people scolding you in the comment section?