The Contest for Immortality

I feel isolated even before I have practiced much. The Tiantian family, with the surname Fan, is very boring. They are all bloody scenes. For immortals, for foundation building, Aren't the people below all just ants? Also distinguish between the imperial son and emperor, and the common surname? For immortals, isn't the talent of a mortal even more incredible? You can get started without the bonus of elixirs, without spirit stones, and without the help of elders. Then isn't the talent even stronger? Is there no competition among Taoist temples? Don't disciples from multiple Taoist temples compete with each other? Is there no demonic sect or extraterrestrial forces? Is there no righteous path? Is there no competition among the royal children? Besides, there are so many royal children, how many pills can each person get? Even if the secular royal family wants to provide help, how much help can it provide to the disciples who are cultivating immortals? The beginning of the game is filled with bitterness and hatred, which is not interesting at first glance. If you can cultivate one more foundation-building disciple, wouldn't it be better than hundreds of royal family outer disciples? For any outer disciple, he is the emperor himself. Isn't it easy to return to the secular world and become an emperor? Who can stop me? Immortal methods? As you said, there are basically no casual cultivators. Therefore, there are no casual cultivators in the secular world. There can only be outer disciples who have gone down to the Taoist sect. The protagonist entered the outer gate at the age of 18 and only practiced for 3 years. Isn't it better than those princes who entered Taoism earlier than the protagonist and only reached perfection in their 30s? Is the Taoist Immortal a pig🐷? Can't you see this? Also, people with the surname Fan every day.

I would like to give some advice to the author. It is better to go too far than to go too far. Don't always target the protagonist with mindless contempt as a passerby or villain. The protagonist then pretends to be cool and slaps you in the face. If you use this kind of routine too often, it will also lower the style of your work.

Can you give the protagonist some time to grow up, or just skip the growth and become invincible? To pit the protagonist against the aristocratic family from the very beginning is tantamount to a plot in which an egg strikes a stone, and it is too clever. The writing is good, and the settings are thoughtful and original.

First: This kind of ancient cultivator calls parents by mom and dad instead of dad and mom, which is very funny (although it may have been called dad and mom in ancient times, but everyone is used to reading books in ancient settings and should use dad and mom, and some authors like to do something special for themselves. It makes you look different, but it is just poisoning) Second: You lost your father when you were young, and your mother worked hard to take care of the family business to raise you, but the introduction of the text is like "controlling the family business" I just read the second chapter, and it feels so awkward that it really makes people have no desire to continue reading.

This author also committed suicide and gave his own books to other authors as sacrificial materials 🤫

Even before I started watching it, I felt very addicted.

This setting is very strange. They have already become immortals, but they still use their mortal identities to compare? Does this make sense? The path to immortality begins, and the great avenues compete. Can one who cares so much about his past identity succeed in cultivating immortality with such a mind?

If we really want to block the cultivation path at the bottom. The simplest way is to simply prevent people from non-aristocratic families from practicing. The protagonist can't even get started. The setting in the article is full of contradictions.

Although it's cool to watch, the social structure is illogical. This situation, where there is a huge and ever-increasing gap between social classes, can only exist in a closed environment without external threats. But in the book, there is a demon country that is incompatible with the human race! . None of them conform to the laws of biological evolution. The higher the level of biological evolution, the lower its reproductive capacity, and the resources it requires increase exponentially. The specific situation can be referred to the family named Yi in Xuangui Palace in "The Legend of the Swordsman of Shushan Mountain", which is representative.

Pure AI writing, brainless opposition