NBA: I Live Off My Parents, but My Teammates Are All Superstars

This is an incredibly boring book. It has a system but it's practically invisible; it has attribute points but they just drag their feet and never seem to accumulate them; and then there's the contract for only a little over a million dollars in the second year—probably the lowest salary in any basketball novel on Qidian. What was the author thinking?

After reading the protagonist's first season, I can only say it's a case of false advertising. The title claims he's a freeloader with incredibly strong teammates, and I thought the protagonist's system would unlock the potential of his older teammates, giving some declining veterans a second wind.

The timeline is too late; it's been 16 years. To be honest, I haven't been interested in watching the NBA for the past five years. Firstly, due to the pandemic, and secondly, the NBA is now completely dominated by superteams and hair-tight calls. It's really boring.

The beginning was alright, but it became increasingly drawn out towards the end, and the point of view was noticeably problematic. The author's monologues grew increasingly lengthy and rambling, drifting away from the main theme – a major mistake. Readers come to experience the protagonist's journey from their perspective, not to read the author's insights into a particular event or industry.

Please reduce the amount of romance; it's written rather awkwardly.

How many readers' desire to read has been deterred by a single female protagonist?

It is a good book. The stories are engaging and full of allusions. Independent consciousness, no kneeling system Properly balancing the issue means avoiding selling empty platitudes. People stand on the shore, gazing at the swift current, their emotions swirling and shifting within their thoughts. A competitive article that is both relaxing and fun.

They're almost 2 meters tall, and they choose women who are 160-170 cm tall. It's fucking disgusting.

No wonder it flopped. You wrote attribute points, but you kept saving them without actually adding them. If you don't change this habit of saving attribute points without adding them, every book you write will flop. I'm telling you.

I started writing in 2020... (It's useful for heating)