NBA: I Live Off My Parents, but My Teammates Are All Superstars

A particularly boring book. It has a system but no sense of existence. It has attributes but doesn't add them. It also signed a contract that only paid more than 1 million US dollars in the second year. This is the minimum salary among Qidian basketball articles. What was the author thinking?

After reading the first season of the protagonist, I can only say that the title of the book is about eating the old and having super strong teammates. I thought that the protagonist's system would stimulate the potential of older teammates and let some veterans who had already declined rejuvenate around the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist led the team to win the championship in the first season, and the protagonist's strength was almost among the top in the league with the help of the system. I came here because of the title, but the result is even worse than those novels whose titles indicate that the protagonist is aiming for the God of Basketball. In his rookie season, he led the team to win the championship and gained FMVP. I have no desire to read anymore. 886

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The timeline is too late, it's already been 16 years. To be honest, I have basically no interest in watching the NBA in the past five years. One is due to the epidemic, and the other is that the current NBA is completely about team basketball and body hair whistle basketball. So boring.

The first part of the writing was okay, but at the end, I felt that it was getting more and more delayed as I wrote, and there was an obvious problem with personal pronouns. The author's monologue at the end became more and more long, and the writing became more and more floating, and it was divorced from the theme. This is a big taboo. The reader comes to see the development experience from the perspective of the protagonist, rather than the author's view of a certain event or industry. Furthermore, as a system article, the growth of the protagonist does not have much to do with the system. The system is only mentioned occasionally, and the growth of the protagonist is not closely related to the numerical changes of the system, which is also a bit off topic. Overall, it's okay. I have some writing skills, but like a novice novelist, my writing is taken for granted. Anyway, keep up the good work and hope to write better and better in the future.

Please reduce the emotional drama, it's quite embarrassing to write.

How many people's desire to read can be dissuaded by a heroine?

Is a good book. The story is interesting and the allusions are readily available. The consciousness is independent and does not kneel to the system, it is appropriate and does not sell chicken soup. On the shore, people pay attention to the rapids, and their emotions move freely and horizontally. A relaxing and interesting competitive article.

Close to 2 meters, choose some 160 or 170 girls, it's fucking disgusting

No wonder you rush to the street, you write attribute points, but you keep saving them. If you don't fix the problem of not adding attributes, then write a few books and a few more, that's what I'm saying.