From Mutant to Dimension Lord

Originally, the boss was carefree, but after becoming a dimensional demon god, he became a wage slave. His main body was locked up, and his clones had to buy everything while working. Even using his collected abilities required points—but who paid those points? It would have been better to just write a system from the start.

It started off well, but then in chapter ten a system was introduced, and all the superpowers I'd worked so hard to acquire were gone. Now I have to exchange points for everything, basically turning him into a mere tool. They ruined a perfectly good premise like this.

The "fun person" is someone who creates fun and then watches it themselves. The author made the protagonist a source of amusement, and the part about the mental hospital made me think the protagonist had actually gone mad and become mentally ill. In short, the protagonist isn't a "fun person," but rather a source of amusement.

The beginning was alright, but what happened later? The protagonist became nothing more than a tool—a tool that knew nothing and had no authority whatsoever. Everything was remotely controlled and directed by the system. The protagonist was practically being told what to do, even when taking a dump. He had absolutely no autonomy over his own dimensions and abilities; everything was controlled by the system. The protagonist was simply a tool for the system. This book is doomed to fail.

For commercial platforms, paying readers are always right. If you're just trying to disgust your readers, don't even think about making money. If you're just entertaining yourself, you might as well not publish it at all.

It was alright at first, but I gave up after it turned into a dimensional demon; it felt really addictive.

The combat power increases too quickly, the plot is bland, and the characters seem somewhat dim-witted. Overall: A bland, simplistic light novel.

I just read chapter 50, and many people are saying it's toxic, that the protagonist is restricted by the system after being transformed into a dimensional demon god. Let me explain on behalf of the author to avoid being misled by others. After the protagonist becomes a dimensional demon god, although his previous abilities required points to exchange, the actual exchange requirement is very small…

He was originally free and unrestrained, but after changing dimensions, this demon god turned himself into a puppet on a string. What was he thinking? This book is doomed to fail.

After reading ten chapters, a system suddenly appeared, requiring points to use. It's like something that's clearly mine, but I have to pay a huge sum to use it—it's outrageous, utterly outrageous.