Dungeon Crawling in the World of Swallowed Star

The murderers are getting more and more tired... As if they are waiting for others to disrupt the situation.

The protagonist is too soft and has no temper even if he is assassinated. You have to hold back even if you are criticized at every turn. Writing about a fanfic with a protagonist like this is bound to make you unlikable. Not even Luo Feng, Luo Feng's enemies are basically dead. The Purple Moon Holy Land offended him, and the entire small universe was swallowed up.

I won't say much about the protagonist being a devilish chicken. Let's just talk about opening a novel website in a virtual universe. I almost got addicted, but luckily I woke up. You're getting free chapters for free. You don't have to subscribe when it's on the shelves! There is an explanation about the bearer account in the original book, but it was a bit vague when I first entered the universe! Maybe the author didn't notice, but the original book has a full explanation of how Luo Feng, who used an anonymous account to complete the mountain guest trial mission, was imprisoned in an ice prison and traded with fellow aliens. First, he traded with Luo Feng at that time. Those who use bearer accounts are all powerful men above immortality, but they want Luo Feng to help him top up more money so that they can play for a few more years. According to your book, if bearer accounts can be used to make money, such as opening a bank account or starting a company! Those immortals can easily produce a few sets of ordinary secrets and sell them for money, so do they still need to ask Luo Feng to help them recharge more money? Selling a set of ordinary-level secrets will allow them to play forever. In my opinion, it's not worth asking for help for such a small thing. These people only need a starting point to make money very quickly. They mainly don't have a bearer account, not that they have no money. If they can make money to renew it for themselves, wouldn't they lose face? In addition, as mentioned in the original article, bearer accounts do not have the function of trading and buying. Bearer accounts are just for apprentices who are not yet old enough to contact the universe to learn about the universe first. They can only read news and play some free games. I don't even know what the author is thinking, how can you, a person who doesn't even have citizenship, pretend to be a bank card? In reality, there are indeed some anonymous bank cards, but anonymous bank cards do not mean that the person applying for the card does not need to provide proof of identity! Of course, who you are is a different matter, but it's obvious that the protagonist has nothing to do with any of the above! This poisonous point really makes me feel as sick as if I had eaten ten kilograms of Xiangxiang. Also, the smug behavior of shipping the masterpieces of cultivating the mind at a cabbage price is also annoying. I know some people will object when they see me saying this, saying that this is the first bucket of gold and so on. I am not opposed to selling the classics at a low price in the beginning, but I look down on his smug behavior. In addition, the author, don't you know that the minimum requirement to join the Qianwu Dao is planetary level? How did you get in as an apprentice? You said that your money can make a difference, but you are so poor. It is obvious that you are not qualified to do this kind of money-making ability. Then the question is, how did you get into the Qianwu Dao?

It's not even easy to kill people. If you write it like this, you'll probably have to cut it this time.

Ji Yue, slightly poisonous, was shot and killed. In the end, he only paid 100 million, so he will not pursue it.

Why is there a female protagonist? Swallowing Starry Sky doesn't need this thing. The role of the heroine in the original text is to increase Luo Feng's mental toughness in the early stage. Other functions are essentially nonexistent, and she is only a symbolic person. Tomato didn't even bother to describe the heroine in detail. Your whole heroine, you still spend so much space revolving around her.

It's a mess, you are so powerful, if you don't take revenge, you can only wait for others to kill you. If you kill you, you will earn nothing. If you can't kill, you will continue next time.

No, you are a time-traveler after all, and you can write N chapters of the earth's broken secrets

Ever since I entered the Moon Palace dungeon and ordered two or three chapters, I've really been blinded by the whole site. I have no idea what you're writing, what's the purpose, and why! If you write this in the free chapter, I will be very patient and read it, and slowly let you lay the groundwork, but it is not true! This way you will give people the appearance of being overwhelmed by your card level! Well, I have some unfortunate news for you. This book is out of stock. I'll bring it back when I want to read it!

Is it okay to write it this way? If you don't follow the plot and have an original plot, I don't know how it will be received.