Farming Dungeons in Swallowed Star

Let's do less conspiracies! In Swallowing the Starry Sky and Earth, the pressure for human survival is still very high. If there were too many conspiracies, the human race on earth would have perished long ago. A large part of the reason why so many people like Swallowing the Starry Sky is that the protagonist is decent enough and humans are relatively united.

Good guy, the author suddenly stabbed a seventeen-year-old warrior in the back. The extreme martial arts gym did not take the initiative to recruit him, and it took more than half a year for Master Haoming to go to Jia Yi to establish a relationship. This is outrageous. Do you know how outrageous it is? If this is the case, why call it an elite training camp? Let's just call it Guanxi/Rich Second Generation Training Camp.

I won't watch it if it affects reality. In the Devouring Starry Sky, the Lord of the Universe can only fish people out of past images but cannot influence the past. What does Devouring mean to the author? He can interfere with the past as soon as he reaches the apprentice level. In Devouring the Worldview. There is no such world view! That is a time paradox.

After watching it, tell me your feelings. The layout is really small. The whole day is filled with little tricks that are not very useful. Let's just talk about Lingyin Temple. If it is handed over to Hong, nothing will happen, but it's really useless. Quite annoying. If you follow this way of writing, how many people can read it on the shelves? The original audience of the fanfic is the readers of the original book. The layout is bigger.

Just give the skills to Hong Bu directly through the Extreme Martial Arts Gym. After all, they are useless after leaving the earth. The world of Devouring Starry Sky is huge. It is really pointless to engage in these conspiracies and tricks on the earth.

As long as you don't engage in the Three Brothers and Four Brothers of Earth and write your own story, you can continue to watch it.

It is full of loopholes, many settings are different from the original work, and it looks awkward. At the gate of the elite training camp, as a person who joined the camp in August 1956, can you see someone with a student number starting with 57? Learning from the original work does not mean that you copy it.

Does the struggle between the earth and the universe still have meaning?

Write your own creative ideas, as long as the original work is marginal, I support you! Come on!

Thank you all for your comments. I hope you guys can point out the parts that look boring. A newbie is starting out and needs your generous guidance.