The Novice Succubus Gave Me Love Lessons

Followed, there are three questions 1. The male protagonist's ability has been demonstrated in his studies, and now he has shown a fleeting ability to overwhelm others in sports, and the usual half-hour outrageous training amount (running and jumping on a treadmill at 9:30, disturbing the public in a non-soundproof building cave). If you plan to highlight it later in sports, it is recommended to make some small preparations in advance. For example, if you can feel a small improvement after completing daily self-discipline training, well, the suggestion is to use the golden finger. 2. The existence of the succubus in the title is very low. Although it appears frequently, it has no obvious role in advancing the plot. Apart from its snow-white figure in the closet, it is not even as impressive as the good brothers' hurdles. In terms of dealing with the useless succubus, it is recommended to formulate three chapters and let him blast the gold coins and pay the rent. This is more in line with the male protagonist's efficient handling of things. The positioning of the useless succubus in the book is rather vague. It mainly depends on how the author plans to deal with it. Can he position it as a clown who creates jokes like the good brothers, or should he let the succubus die personally? 3. The author's writing style clearly shows that he is a newcomer. He is not very accurate in grasping the small climaxes and laughter points in each chapter. It is recommended that each chapter be a small amount of fun, and two or three pictures will make a big difference. Looking forward to the improvement of the author's writing skills, I wish the author's novels will sell well and not be eunuchs.

I like your writing style, but your word count is not enough.

The biggest problem is that the look and feel is too fragmented. I don't know why, but in my opinion, the protagonist's situation is much higher than that of high school romance. An extremely self-disciplined almighty superman. For such a person, love is just a low-level desire. There are obviously so many scientific problems that have not been solved. Why must he fall in love? Unless the male protagonist is given wisdom. In other words, the theme of this book feels quite divided. In my opinion, no one is worthy of the male protagonist, and no one can stand shoulder to shoulder with the male protagonist. He is already perfect in his own right, so he doesn't need his other half to make up for himself. This succubus is completely unworthy of the male protagonist's ambitions. He is too arrogant and arrogant. To be honest, she smells like a little fairy. As long as she admits her mistakes honestly, I will have a better impression of her. Maybe there are personal reasons why I don't like tsundere! The female succubus really doesn't appeal to me, and I'm not interested in heavy industry. She has the body type of a junior high school student, but what about her mind? You have set the male protagonist's ability value too high, so I think he should go to the studio of Ba Wen, which is a film without a female protagonist, rather than a love story. I can't imagine him falling in love unless the male protagonist is given wisdom. Love is brain-destroying! Oh, by the way, one last question: single heroine or multiple heroines, pure love or harem, or no heroine in the end (but then there is no main line of love). The female little ghost demon still doesn't attract me. The squad leader's description in the article makes me feel that she is also a troublemaker and makes people unhappy. She has not provided any help to the protagonist so far and will only cause trouble, whether it is her subjective or unconscious actions. A perfect male protagonist, I think, also needs a perfect female protagonist to be worthy of him, but now, there is no such female character in the article.

Except for his character, nothing about the protagonist meets the definition of genius. Study: Since you want to be the pillar of the country, why do you still control your scores and hide them? This is contradictory. Since you already feel that high school is not challenging, why not skip a grade? Why not get in touch with knowledge that ordinary people have no access to earlier? Does going to high school have any role for the protagonist? If you don't socialize or fall in love, what's the point of high school? Or is becoming the pillar of the country just a slogan? Sports: This is more bullshit than studying. Most of the brothers don't understand sports. Let me answer this. When Messi had dwarfism, it only took him 5 minutes of training to sign him. Sports talents are the last thing to be covered up. With the setting of the protagonist, it would be too easy to take the sports road. Author, if you want to describe a genius, you should use less of these contents. These contents are not used to describe the genius, but to show off. The protagonist is now no different from Long Aotian, who has hundreds of millions in his bank card, drives a car with tens of millions, and has a watch worth millions and is not willing to arrange decent clothes for himself.

Your cover. Are you sure the veteran driver can't see it? Senior sister

The author is so cute, let me take a lick

There's something on the cover, it's from the Hypnosis series, right?

I'm really looking forward to the plot where the female kid keeps licking her, her emotions are pushed to the male protagonist's bottom line, and then she is killed and kicked out of the house by the male protagonist, regretting it and crying and realizing the reality.

Sigma men are not mentally retarded, nor do they lack emotional intelligence.

The laws of nature support the elimination of some creatures. The male protagonist did not violate the laws of nature. To be honest, I can't imagine how a living body could violate the laws of nature.

The subject matter of this book is not very good. This type of romantic comedy in which one party begs the other to avoid it is considered a classic romantic comedy, but the problem is that the protagonist setting of this book is different from other common romantic comedies. In other romantic comedies, the avoidant party either has a special situation and does not want to talk about it, or the other party is too shy to talk about it. What is this book about? The female protagonist is not worthy of the male protagonist. The male protagonist has an extremely invincible and self-disciplined character and the female protagonist is a bitch. It's like a serious and well-characterized savior character suddenly appeared in the book. As a result, the entire audience's attention is focused on this savior character, and no one cares about those pornographic things. The same is true for this book. The extremely self-disciplined and interesting character of the male protagonist makes the core attraction of the book become the male protagonist Sigma. When he falls in love, his character collapses. As we all know, romantic comedies themselves revolve around the characters. When the character collapses, the book collapses, making it impossible for the male protagonist to really talk about it. So what should we do? Is this book going to be a million words long? Impossible, comics are okay, but novels are so full of stuff and so long that if the progress slows down, it will make people want to abandon the book, and the progress of this book cannot be fast at all. So I suggest that instead of writing about a female brat fighting against Sigma, forget about writing about the Legend of Sigma. It is extremely self-disciplined to strategize, lead human progress, unify the world and step into the stars, and then fast forward directly to the battle with aliens. It is not much better than you, a loser.

The cover is hypnosis⭐guidance, the author name is Thimble Single, and the authorship is really complex.

I just watched the video on the cover, the senior is so cute

If you want to attack the author, please be gentle😭😭

Looking at the author's ID makes me want to smoke Rac.

If you don't update millions of words, where will the good data come from? Internet writers like you were born to be locked up and coded.

There is no penis when cutting books, and there is no way to explode without sex 😫😫😫😫

It's very interesting, and the author's application of the abstract culture of the Internet is very smooth and not blunt, and the characteristics of the characters are also very accurate. The series of "chemical reactions" produced by this kind of abnormal characters in a very life-like scene have always been my favorite type. However, this kind of absurdity, or "fun" feeling is still quite rare for authors to show. It is still the same evaluation. It is very interesting. If it has the current quality, I will continue to read it. Please support the author.

The author understands traffic, Thunder Fire Sword➕Fall in love with Lu yyds

The male protagonist has Brother Lu's abilities, but he has more emotions than Brother Lu. He doesn't fall in love, but he hasn't met the person who makes his heart beat. I hope the author can write it well.

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How should I put it, Ayanokouji's way of writing does not have the sense of reasonableness of the plot, and it is a forced self-pleasure novel. I can only say it in one sentence. If you think it looks good, you can endure the constipation feeling while watching it without thinking, and you can also taste the unique smell of shit. But those who can't accept this sense of separation are Yi Tuo's defense. The essence of the protagonist and the plot emotions of the people around him can only be described as a piece of explanation drawn from the separation within the separation. Typical protagonist's personal transformation of the last century's shit literature

To be honest, I feel that the author can turn to fantasy and write a book in the style of "Who taught you to cultivate immortality like this"

Come on, buddy, I'm waiting for your next book. I'm optimistic about you. You're much better than those who don't have grades and don't let others give their opinions. Come on.

Many people just don't understand why the protagonist hides his talent, so they feel very disconnected and think the protagonist is a fool. Is it possible that after the protagonist fully reveals his talent, he is definitely qualified to be assassinated? At his level, fully unfolding can definitely lead an era, but the price is his own danger. Hiding one's talent is just hiding it from the public. Real high-ranking people have every chance to know his talent, such as Ge

High school life is so boring. I don't want to recall that stuff. If there is anyone who likes to watch it, please ask. (Just wanted to post it)