Doomsday: I Told You Not to Call Me Dave!

How many times have I told you, Dave is your neighbor?

A word for readers! I want to tell you what kind of book this is: a book that revolves around the upgrade of a doomsday shelter and contains supernatural powers and science fiction elements. When others flee, I enjoy happiness; when others seek survival, I become rich. This should be a refreshing point that cannot be avoided in apocalyptic novels. I tried my best to write this book around it and the sense of security brought by shelter. But the timeline I chose is relatively early. The end of the world is getting worse little by little, so the environmental pressure is not great in the early stage, and it will intensify in the tenth chapter. Then there is the unique selling point of this book: plants! I will start with the basics of the game, and then adjust and modify them to get plants with unique power. This process also starts in about ten chapters, and is introduced bit by bit. I hope everyone can read it slowly. Finally, writing is not easy, please support me! Catch-up reading is everything!

Urgent need of praise! Not a professional, the author drew it himself, so I can only praise it and not criticize it! I will add more later, if you have any drawings you can send them here.

Author, you are under too much pressure. You need to deal with your own pressure well before writing a novel. For the first novel, you must first finish three months of perfect work. Readers don't just delete the book if they don't read the latest chapter for a day. They just remember to make up for the chapters they owe. (Some authors are very condescending and will ban comments and delete comments if they disagree with each other. But you are too timid and worry about the readers' mentality every day. You are destined to never finish the novel.)

The heroine is here, the plant is anthropomorphic

The first order has passed, so I made a cold remark. The background of your book is too close to reality, and it will probably be reviewed later. This cannot be fooled by changing the time or creating a parallel world. Everyone knows it. I don't know if the author has considered this issue. I have a personal suggestion for reference. Dismantle the country, downplay the whole, change it to various forces and regions, and unfold the plot based on cities and major organizations. The names of cities and forces are all fictitious. The reference here is "I used a game to change the timeline." This book feels good in terms of imaginary, and it is imaginary enough Of course, this is just my own opinion and is for reference only.

One idea is to put Japanese melon or cherry bombs on flower pots and sell them to those countries. Not only will you receive supplies, but you will also gain experience by killing monsters.

Super Dave

It is recommended to focus on the perspective of the protagonist. The transition between multiple perspectives is a bit abrupt and deviates from the theme of the apocalyptic shelter. The main plot is ultimately driven by the protagonist. The branch plots can be used as auxiliary to fill in the world view, but they cannot overwhelm the main plot.

Why isn't there my big brother Super Machine Gun Pea

Okay, it should be cut and scattered.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. There is a lot of repetitive content. For example, the introduction of the mutant pea shooter is repeated more than three times. It is not on the shelves now and will be charged in the future. It will be suspected that the word count is too high. This kind of repetition should be avoided too many times.

Could the author have the protagonist heat up a corn pitcher and turn it into a popcorn pitcher? {"NickName":"I am a handsome guy 123","UserId":410492590}

Okay, please encourage the author first, I will continue to subscribe if it doesn't crash. I just searched the starting point for this subject. It seems to be quite rare and suits my taste.

Zombies ate your brain

I feel that the author needs to strengthen the plants. I feel that the expressive power of plants is far less than the effect of thermal weapons.

Corresponds to Chapter 60

Bamboo wall, corresponding to Chapter 10. (I was too busy before and didn't draw for everyone)

This should be really cut, right? I originally wanted to raise him, but he died 🙂

Your updates are outrageous, every now and then they stop for a day or two.

What the author said is really nice. I worked hard to update it for the first time, but it has been 4 months since it was released. I have written 35 chapters and 70,000 words. It is really hard work.

Flowerpots can be paired with crows to play air force=complete book. Everyone was given flower pots and pea shooters to shoot on their backs. Then the experience will be infinitely doubled📈

Already submitted, just write well.

If the author has time, he might as well cut up the book and re-imagine it.

The writing is very good, why can I only vote for two? Please improve~

Okay, come on, keep updating

Hurry up and post an explanation of the unlimited update suspension. Before subscribing, I didn't see the bad record of the previous suspension of updates. Otherwise, I wouldn't subscribe at all 😅

The author really writes well, come on.

A niche topic but no obvious poisonous points. You can look forward to a wave of encouragement.

Chong Cong Chong