I Became a Lord by Relying on the Land Deed Between the Two Realms.

The idea is very good, but the reading experience is extremely poor. Can the author really write a story about Water Lord without establishing a territory, and force the plot to play with interpersonal relationships? Brother, do you know what your label is? Everyone here wants to read what you wrote in your introduction: using professional characteristics to continuously develop the army, using the interconnection between the two worlds to continuously develop the territory, and continuously opening up the world based on these two main lines. You are a lord who keeps writing plots and talking about interpersonal relationships. It is not impossible, but your writing style 😥

I've looked at half of the updates now, and I still don't have any territories. What's the ink mark on? What kind of fighting and killing do I want to see? Can you clarify the main point of your writing this book? You didn't "officially take office" because you wanted it to be on the shelves, right?

No priority, a mess

The writing at the beginning is messy, and the background is not introduced well. Is it in a different world, on Blue Star, or somewhere else? Simple things become complicated.

The idea is good, but I have no idea what the protagonist is doing, and the reading experience is extremely poor.

I still don't know what the main plot of this book is, or I can't see where the climax is

This is the first of more than 30 pieces of Two Worlds that I have read, and I haven't returned to it once.

The writing is weird. It couldn't be written by AI. There is always a feeling of incoherence. It has the kind of well-written feeling that suddenly omits a part and transitions to the next part. It is slow and heavy. Many recommended novels I see now have this feeling.

Too much nonsense, 90 chapters and the main plot is not clearly written.

Ask if the Xu family is the son of the protagonist or a relative. If the son is good, just look at the family.

After reading it for a while, I can say that the setting is very interesting, but the writing style and plot are quite average. I feel that the author has no outline and no theme. This is a story about two realms of lords. If you don't build the territory quickly in the early stage, and if you do some things, you can't actually persuade them to quit. The author doesn't think that many things can be done after the territory is built. It will be better to add in a little bit more. It is useless no matter how good you write after being persuaded to quit in the early stage. Since your name is Lord, you should know that when you write a niche article, you should focus on the topic. And brother, you can simply speak briefly and summarize the sentences. It is too much nonsense for writing a novel, and it is not attractive, and there is no way to let readers take the place of it.

The writing is weird, the author must be a newbie.

Rong and sacrificial rituals have undergone different changes in different eras. Now they mainly refer to military strength and cultural ideas. Ritual can be a ritual system or a ruling system, depending on how the author writes it. It is not necessary to write a very narrow list of Zhou rites, Rongsi, and sacrifices. Extending the changes can better leave room for writing, which changes with time and circumstances. The concept carried by the carrier must implicitly contain the values ​​​​of its original ideological system, so for advanced aspects, you can consider the words in the Southeast Asian cultural system. In other words, the integration of Chinese and Western cultures is still difficult to learn. Some are common and some are differences in thinking that are difficult to reconcile. The protagonists in the article should preferably be conceptual. For example: the steam engine itself is backward in the history as a technology, and it can only satisfy the steam age. Conceptual steam technology can satisfy a society from slave society to the cosmic era. Concrete things cannot be iterated and will be replaced by new things sooner or later, which will make the protagonist's carrier become useless. The above is my humble opinion, welcome to discuss.

There are too few words, and it is normal for there to be few people.

Stop writing about two worlds. You are more aboriginal than aboriginal. No one will criticize you if you are an aboriginal. I don't see any characteristics of a time traveler in you.

The subject matter is okay but the writing is not good

Brothers, don't look at what the protagonist thinks, but only look at how the protagonist behaves. Which camp does the protagonist belong to according to the DND camp? (As for the female protagonist, is there no female protagonist, the mainstream is pure love for a single woman, the mainstream is the mainstream of the stallion who wants the kidney but not the heart, or is it the mainstream of the fraternity harem?)

An empire is better than a family😡😡😡

The foreshadowing is too long. The setting is complicated,

The writing is quite innovative, eh, quite interesting.