A Hundred Refinements to Fight for Immortality

This book is really good. The story writing is better than 90% of Xiaobai's writing.

Hey, it's been a long time since I've seen a novel about immortality that isn't Long Aotian's style. I hope there won't be any more eunuchs.

The author must persist in writing online articles and writing style, and the audience will be more and more in the future. The most important thing is persistence.

They can't all be so transparent. There have to be a few mediocre authors. (Those at the beginning are not counted) Only the gatekeeper, write mediocre.

I wish there would be less broken sentences. It's very incoherent to pause after just a few words in the book.

The writing is indeed very good, but the results are probably not very good. People may not like this type, or it may not be exposed enough. This is my first time voting for the author. I hope the author sticks to it and doesn't end it. Because like ordinary people, the early results were not good, but it still took off after it was released. Quality is everything. I hope the author will continue to do more.

Well written, I'll give you the monthly ticket, come on!

The writing is really good, the author has something good

It's a pity that your book took off after having too many words and just one recommendation. When the time comes, I'll give you Long Kong some recommendations. It's too much to update like this.

The plot is pretty good, but it's a bit literary. In fact, it could be described in a more concise style.

Why can't I invest even though it's not on the shelves?

This author writes novels very casually. He only updates them every few days. No wonder his grades are so bad. Otherwise, this kind of novel with no system and no time travel would be quite good.

The author sets up a book club and interacts with the group friends more, and the popularity will increase faster.

Today's immortality novels have made it difficult for people to distinguish the difference between immortals and demons.

Good book, really good book. Recommended by a 10-year old bookworm

Current problem 1: Sentence fragmentation (reduce commas, merge short sentences, correct typos) Solution: Start from the first chapter, revise chapter by chapter Solution progress: Chapters 1-56 have been revised (revised) (After feedback from readers, I tried my best to adjust, but the effect is not obvious, so I can only use stupid methods ) Current problem 2: Update 4k Solution: Daily 4k update is a big project for me. First keep it updated, and then slowly increase the number of words. It is a long-term job (it takes time and the speed is slowly increased) If you have any typos, please give me suggestions.