Give the 2D Hong Kong Comic a Little Shock

Why does the protagonist care so much about a group of little people? Isn't it natural for Japanese monsters to eat Japanese people?

Platycodon beats the protagonist until he kneels, then takes him back to do it🌟🍐

If you don't catch the good stuff, it's all dross. It is full of mother-in-laws and kneeling and licking in Hong Kong comics, soft eggs. Faith and strength have not been learned at all, not even madness.

What is a strong magnetic field? Epilepsy? No, no, no, it's about implementing a consistent self-belief, it's love, whether you love yourself or the world, without love you can't become a strong person, without these, you're just a trash fish that will fall apart at the touch of a touch, without a complete realm.

Finally, someone has written about enhanced impact. This thing is a purely idealistic power system. It feels more idealistic than the rotation of the magnetic field. The power of the magnetic field is also about friction and electricity. The enhanced impact directly talks about love and belief. The body of an ordinary person plus the twisted love for the sister-in-law can blow up an aircraft carrier with one punch (I fell in love with the sister-in-law, but she cannot be surpassed by the sister-in-law, so she cannot ask for it due to self-restraint)

Are you planning to give Two-Spined Salamander some Hong Kong comic-style cuckoldry?

Really, bro, what you wrote cannot be called a giant shark, it can only be called a little goldfish. I suggest you read female pornographic videos to feed the giant shark in your heart. After all, you have seen too many things like this that I don't know, and there are really many female videos.

Author, let me tell you something from the bottom of my heart. I have wanted to say it for a long time but felt that the free period was not good, but I just couldn't help it. What are you writing about? Or what do you want to write? Magnetic field Dianlao's gauze two-dimensional waste or Hong Kong comic's strong man fighting in the sky and the battlefield? What does the protagonist in your novel fight? Inexplicably, I got a clone, and every few chapters I kept analyzing my mentality and expressing my thoughts, and then what? Which one of you, Dian Lao or a strong Hong Kong comic, doesn't want to do whatever he wants? Have you ever seen people cry and reflect? You don't need to tell me what you like and want to see if you are attracted to watch it, right? Don't talk about the beliefs and ideas of the mother-in-law. You only focus on a male protagonist who is a native of the motherland. Isn't it better than the current one who seems to keep talking about fighting in the sky and on the ground to fuck the enemy to death? In fact, the mother-in-law's is smellier and longer than the old lady's foot bindings? I am not the only one who has said similar things in the book review area. If you want to write a book, you must first understand what the readers want. I wish you good luck and good results.

How come I was shocked by the second dimension😓After returning to the earth, it was a standard cute dolphin stew + I don't know the so-called two-dimensional oral addiction + cute dolphin humor scenes with unclear meanings. It really made me numb The plot was also as light as water, and the protagonist said a lot of cruel words. It has no effect at all. It just hangs up in two places throughout the whole process. The advancement of the plot relies entirely on the supporting characters who don't know where they come from. Moreover, those supporting characters have words such as friendship, courage, passing, and howling of hope. There is no foreshadowing at all. I looked at it with a question mark on my face.

The protagonist's mother-in-law is the most consistent with the Hong Kong comic character.

If your level is seen by other two-dimensional characters, will it make them think that this is all Hong Kong comics?

Today's authors all have a problem. I don't know where they learned it. They cut out chapters to dig holes and leave suspense. Then as soon as readers read the book, they say it's not good to subscribe. If people don't support them, they will become eunuchs. I don't know who is used to this.

There are too many Japanese words, which affects the viewing, such as "Kamisa", "Ah Lada", "Ah Lie Ah Lie" and the like. I don't understand what they mean at all. Can you please stop writing these accents? You may think this is a Japanese comic fan, so you write these, but I came here for the Hong Kong comic and InuYasha. When I was a child, I watched the Mandarin version of InuYasha on Star TV!

No, what on earth is the protagonist going to do? I read 30 chapters and I still don't know what the character is going to do.

The part about Inuyasha was okay, but the part about the Holy Grail later on about the bullshit love was just nonsense. It would be better to let the monster protagonist kill the original protagonist, but in the end he was still brainwashed.

Just like the title, I specially created a post for everyone to criticize. Other posts that criticize alone will be deleted.

The protagonist is a mother-in-law, but I don't know the so-called plot. A rag assimilated by the second dimension

It's not strong enough, push me to the limit

As we all know, the protagonist's IQ and strategy ≈ the author's IQ and strategy, so don't be too quick to be peerless or extraordinary.

You can also watch the Inuyasha chapter. The protagonist is completely crazy in the end and has no idea what the protagonist is going to do? Nagging every day

You and the people next door have the same problem. They are trying to block people in the main world. The sense of fragmentation is too strong. However, the opponent is currently doing well and has reduced the number of chapters in the main world.

What has the author written recently? Don't know what it means

The front is okay, the people are quite normal, but suddenly there is something about whether you like it or not in the back... The sudden metamorphosis of the main character makes me at a loss. It's very cliche, outdated, and it's really meaningless. I hope it can change back to normal in the back. I can accept martial arts crazy, King of Fighters Hong Kong comics are also okay, but don't do it all the time, it's too disgusting.

That's why my suggestion to you is to re-open a book with roughly the same worldview, different characters, different behaviors, and different characters. Take the time to finish it and create a QQ group by the way, I will also add you. It's better to focus the discussion this way and save you the trouble of having to deal with things that are inconsistent with the outline.

What you write later becomes more and more boring.

If you are crazy, please post something that others can understand... The chapter before Dragon Ball was so crazy that it was too stream of consciousness...

Some authors quickly set up a QQ group to discuss the next book. How should you write it? And you dug some foreshadowings and buried them too deep to be used at all.

After the Holy Grail, it's so weird that it's hard to describe in words.

Gua, even though I haven't watched it yet, I can already imagine Aizen being humiliated and given a strong base!

Maybe the chapters haven't been updated enough, so it doesn't have that cool feeling.