Small Opening Does Not Count as Opening

Change the name. This name is not enough to get out of the circle Change it to "Saving the World from Dragon Ball", "Cheating from Dragon Ball" or something like that

What is the author's view of the gods? In order to protect his treasure, the Bull Demon King killed the thieves who came to steal it. How can he be compared with the Red Ribbon Army? You must know that the Red Ribbon Army robs wealth by violent means. In essence, it is not a tyrannical country, but an organized bandit. Can these two be compared?

What Thunder cover? Damn, I thought it was about fucking history.

I thought it was a historical novel when I looked at the cover. The cover is really not that good. Fortunately, I read both historical and fan fiction The title of the book is a matter of opinion. I think the title clearly says that this is an invincible novel. I just clicked on the title of the book.

The protagonist's mental energy level is really high

Date Timeline is off to a good start, but I feel like the title of the book is a bit uninteresting. I might get better results if I change the title.

Not to mention other minor plot issues, now that I think about it, it's too far-fetched for the protagonist to want to go home for his faith. It's okay if he didn't understand the power of invincibility at the beginning. After understanding it later, you told me that the protagonist doesn't want to wander around the Dragon Ball world, but just wants to go home? Lu Liang thought it could also be explained by the fact that the chakra spirit returning home from the beginning was a self-anchoring point, and he would have been assimilated without this idea. The protagonist this time is wearing a costume. If the author normally replaced the protagonist, he wouldn't be super eager to return.

It's useless if it's turned on, it doesn't count 🙂🙂🙂

Fortunately, I just feel that the protagonist is not very smart.

In the end, the protagonist steals from the Red Ribbon Legion many times, causing the Red Ribbon Legion to develop digital currency, and then discovers that after promoting this thing, it is more convenient to rule the world than force.

To be honest, I have been looking for a Dragon Ball book for a while. If you don't read the introduction of the book with this title, you will know the beginning of Dragon Ball.

It takes a minute for Cell to self-destruct. Sun Wukong should have enough time to teleport to Northern Kaioh and then take all three of them away? Even if I didn't think about it at first, I thought about it later and chatted with Sun Wufan for a few words. Those few words of conversation were enough to go back and forth several times.

Your synopsis and the title of the book don't tell you that it's Dragon Ball at all. You only wrote about time traveling to Dragon Ball at the end of the synopsis.

One thing to say is that the title of the book ruins this book. Why not make it simple and direct and call it "The Absolute Superpower Begins with Dragon Ball"

If the title of the book were not changed to "Starting with Dragon Ball," it would not be considered "open".

It just feels like there isn't a large audience, so far I've been writing a lot about research and actions on time travel. It feels like writing a Naruto fanfic that starts with a plow to study dragon veins and then travels around the past and future. The writing is okay, but the sense of immersion is poor.

The protagonist wants to solve the problem of artificial humans. Why is he still cleaning up the mess now that the artificial humans have been solved?

Did Cyber ​​Naruto have bad results? Why are you both open?

Can I send this too? But it's normal to think about it. It feels a little bad to have the Universiade crash into the world. Normally, it should be to straighten each world according to plan 1, and finally connect them together to form a closed loop. This book is very boring after entering the fragmented world, because everything is messed up. This should be the final copy, and you should follow the plot first. Otherwise, it will be like this chaotic world. To be honest, I won't feel anything at all after watching it. I still hope that the author will write a fan novel, or else write a novel with a time-travel genre. The Qi Xia novel feels like it is half a story-travel story, and there are many interesting worlds that have not been written in that book.

You should take Dragon Ball too seriously. There are many talents coming from the heavens.

I have read more than 50 chapters, but I still haven't mastered Qi. How long will it take to master Qi? Or will I never be able to master Qi again? It all depends on superpowers.

So awesome? Push two books at the same time😅

Dragon Ball: Is it on when it's not off?

Wouldn't the author change the name of the work?

The storyline of Dragon Ball's timeline was polluted by Perfect Cell's storyline. I can't remember the original plot, and I can't face the characters in this timeline.

It's very speechless. It's a very slow-paced invincible novel, and it's semi-invincible.

Have you ever been a time traveler? Just write it randomly, take it for granted