If I Upgrade, I Can Win Prizes

I always don't choose something that is really useful, and I give a lot of introductions to other options that say how good they are, and then I don't choose 😐 Hey! Just disgusting! There are already things like Zimu River water that are obviously very useful, but they are used indiscriminately and not really utilized.

I wrote a review of this book when I didn't have much written about it. Now that I've read a lot, I'll write another review. 1. The imagination is very big, really big. The lucky draw gives the author a broad space. It can be said that the author has written all the imagination that can be imagined. But I think it's not a good thing to have too many ideas. The writing is too complicated. I hope the author really has an outline and can smooth out these ideas clearly. 2. I think the author's writing style is really a bit strange. The plots of the lottery are poor. In terms of plot, I hoe here and there. I can write several more novels in each different world. There is no need to draw a battle line like this. Can I finish it? Just this update, the author can't write it for ten years? I think the update problem is too serious. I only wrote 20 words this day. Does it still promote the plot? 3. The author might as well delete the one who said you deleted the comment. I really didn't expect that such a comment could bring you so many readers. His comments were not deleted (you can find them by scrolling down), but the review of his own posts was slow, so he said that the author deleted the comments, and then they coaxed him together and had fun, and it became a reality, and he suddenly became a Shennong. Author, there is no need to put your conscience in this place. Either delete it, or explain that you really don't care about grades. 4. There are still many people who come up and criticize me, saying that I have accepted it. Comments are just comments. I think this book has merits and disadvantages. If I think I can read it, I will order it. If I can't read it, I will leave. I hope everyone will do the same. There is no need to let go of the yin and yang. 5. Finally, let's talk about some plot issues, read carefully………… Since the portal to the ice and snow world is in the hands of the protagonist, just close the door, and then the five returners will not be able to come back, have you forgotten? Why are you so brainless, and do those who are still so naive dare to enter? Don't you want someone to look after the protagonist? This plot is a bit ridiculous.

Crazy pressure to fight. More than 50 chapters later, the protagonist is still the same villain.

What I wrote was so random that it was disgusting! Waste of time

You can guess a lot of the plot if you watch it a lot. Although the writing is a bit weak, the unexpected actions still make you want to keep reading.

I can't say this book is good, but it's actually pretty good. If I follow this line of thinking, I still hope that the author will continue to write books in the future. In fact, I still feel it has potential, because old bookworms usually want to read newer things. The logic is good, and all kinds of mess are not important. But with new settings and new things, this book cannot be said to be bad. Of course, it may not be suitable for the market, so let's cherish it.

Why did this author delete the comment? Didn't I just say that the protagonist in Chapter 50 is still at the first level of Qi training? Can't you say that? You have lost a future full subscription!

After reading the comment section, I feel like nothing is said well. Advantages: 1. Don't play awkward games, run away if you can't beat him, and you will reflect if you are careless for a moment. The protagonist has a strong purpose and is very enjoyable to watch. Unlike some novels that keep dragging on the plot. I remember reading one before. The protagonist knew something big was going to happen in his town. He had already known about it, and said three times in a row that it would be better to run away early. But the result was that he didn't run away, and kept dragging on, which made him upset. 2. The logic is quite good, the protagonist is very analytical and very careful. Moreover, someone in the comment section said that the protagonist is also doing this when trying to get stuck in a system bug. There is no such thing as some novels where cheats are too powerful, causing the author to deliberately ignore those operations that can cause system bugs to get stuck. All the characters are well-intelligent and no one is short-sighted. Disadvantages: It is precisely because the logic that the author wants to express is quite in place, which makes it a bit verbose, very analytical, and the analysis is a bit over the top. Now it seems like there are a lot of chapters, but in fact there isn't much plot in the book, and the big chunks are all up for grabs. Others: 1. Some people in the comment area said that the protagonist's upgrade is too slow. In fact, this is not true. Because the improvement of skills can be drawn by lottery, the protagonist focuses on the card system bug and practices messy skills crazily, but has to ignore the main skills to upgrade. Also, the starting environment of the protagonist is too bad and he has to survive in the cracks. If he finds a stable environment, the protagonist will be upgraded soon. 2. There is also the author's update attitude, and the results are not very good. I think this book may be relevant, so please read it and cherish it.

This is the only summary of the best comments, although it is very reasonable and correct, but aren't the advantages summarized the basic conditions that everyone should have except for those who are just buying on the street? Moreover, after more than 50 chapters, the Qi training level reveals that the rhythm is not good. Why do you analyze the specific reasons? Isn't this stupid? The plots are all written by people. There is only one criterion to measure whether the rhythm is good or not, which is the number of chapters, personal strength, and plot comparison. Experience the plot by leaps and bounds, or averagely improve your strength to integrate into the plot. More specific judgment criteria depend on various factors such as environmental strength. Anyway, this book The rhythm of the book is indeed terrible And verbosity and logic are not the same thing. There are even more criteria for judging it. A very classic one is that the ability is written in a very specific way. It seems reasonable, but in fact it is very stupid, seriously affecting the perception and being useless (this book does not have this shortcoming, it is just an example) Example) And the performance of logic in online articles, I personally think that the protagonist's use of things does not exceed the standard, and does not far exceed the plot performance within the prescribed range. Various genres have corresponding upper limits, and they will easily collapse if they are exceeded. The classic one is the game-type golden finger. Even if the SSS-level talent is very excessive, it can still make the plot possible. As the plot continues, of course it will collapse if you don't grasp it well. The logic of this book can be said to be a mess. It smokes a bunch of useless things. The things must at least be integrated with the plot, and it is an organic combination. For example, if you smoke a bunch of junk and use it in battle, this is an inorganic combination. How to spot the stuck bug? Is there any bug in this ability? Are you saying that my abstract thinking is too poor and I can't think of a way to fix the bug? Goldfinger divides it into restricted and unrestricted based on my experience. With restrictions, if you let go, you will be invincible quickly, and without restrictions, if you let go, it will be over quickly. This golden finger depends on the plot direction designed by the author in the future. It has the potential to become unlimited, but the potential is very low and it cannot collapse without some planning. After all, items are randomly released.

Looking at this speed, after 1000 chapters, whether the pig's feet can build the foundation is still a question 😅

Why don't I read the comments before jumping into the trap? ? ? ? ? The author is so damn poisonous, he releases poison every now and then. Ten times Hex, eight times can choose the most rubbish one. For example, in Chapter 94 of my poisonous game, there was an option: [The Book of Immortal Magic Skills Directly to Ascension], but the protagonist didn't choose it and only chose a clone. The reason is that I am worried that this manual is a magic method. I was also convinced. The words "Xian Dao" were clearly visible on the options, but I just didn't recognize them, right? ?

Finally I remembered that I had been poisoned once before, and this time I was poisoned again. The protagonist takes out a dungeon and puts it outside for others to enter at will, and the ticket is just any material (materials exploded by any mob in the dungeon will also work), what kind of garbage are collected? There is a person who secretly followed the protagonist through the double door and smuggled into another world. He killed zombies and gained heavenly merits. His high-grade spiritual roots turned into heavenly spiritual roots, and foundation building turned into golden elixirs. At the same time, the protagonist was still practicing Qi from level 2 to level 4, and his low-grade spiritual roots turned into high-grade spiritual roots. Extremely poisonous

Is it okay to practice low-level skills to get rid of bugs? Just throw them away when you get started, and just draw a lottery?

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. It is obviously very creative and the ingredients are good, but it is a pity that the craftsmanship is not good. Stewed in a pot, it tastes rancid.

Now I feel a sense of fragmentation, resources are tight in the early stage, and I still have to raid the palace, rob the landlord, and let the dragon girl drink the water from the Zimu River. Later, when the Kunpeng Sect was destroyed, the sect's treasure house was not even glanced at, euphemistically called it "high moral character". I suddenly have to go find some fairy in the back, but I can't even think about anything about the heroine in the previous 350 seconds.

The author really writes whatever he wants. Many main lines are blown up. With so many main lines, he writes one thing and another at once. The combined Kunpeng is in hand and he clearly has a demon refining pot in the 6th-level fairyland. He is speechless. When he goes to the central fairyland, he suddenly has no territory. If he doesn't have it, he can't find it and suddenly he has to find his wife. Wife, what kind of plane are you going to fly to the Eastern Emperor Territory again? You clearly promised to find magical skills and suddenly you went to other main plots. The protagonist is obviously a powerful golden finger behind the scenes and has a long lifespan. He can find a few subordinates to help him find the skills and he will be invincible. He promised to be stable and wander around every day. I just like to tell lies the most. Those bosses don't understand that the protagonist is lying. The main protagonist is too rich and wrote a pretense but feels that it is useless for the protagonist. The author is slowly weakening the protagonist's many invincible buffs and the super strong path is suddenly cut off. How long has it been since the Holy Beast came out? Now, the short-lived protagonist in the arcane world can increase his lifespan. Suddenly, Yang Zhen is not allowed to increase his lifespan with a knife. The magical world is obviously invincible but he does not occupy it. There is also a multidimensional world that I have not inquired about. You might as well finish your own affairs first when you go out.

First of all, it is recommended to read the pre-paid chapters for free without reading the comment area, because you will know if it is good or not by trying it. It's not as ugly as the comment section said, nor is it as good as it is. Even if you have been scolding, you will find that you have read 400 chapters while scolding. I think the author is quite strong. He wrote according to his own ideas despite countless opinions. In this regard, I think he adjusted some bugs or made patches by not reading book reviews or only reading comments collected and compiled by loyal fans without some emotional output. I abandon many books after reading chapter 200. This one is different. I read the latest one (but I won't pursue it anymore. I will explain why later). I feel that the author did not have an outline in the early stage. His plot direction is like a scribbling pen, relying entirely on performance, but the writing is still interesting and does not collapse. In order to make the plot longer, or the interesting novice period longer, the author just added countless seas, suppressed the realm (still at the third level of Qi Refining after hundreds of chapters), suppressed the players, and suppressed the kindness of the protagonist, turning him into lawful evil. If he was a protagonist with a slightly positive outlook, he would have ended the world of barbarians and cannibals in the magical world, instead of ending it after 400 chapters. It is his ability that he can make me see 400 chapters, but I will not give him a monthly recommendation ticket, because as a person who has faced the sea, I was shocked by him. He has a whole paid chapter that lists all the magical powers of the protagonist. When all of them can be defeated, he can seriously introduce to you the detailed parameters, background and usage of three first- and second-level treasures, as well as the new mental journey of choosing and not choosing. The protagonist keeps flaunting his morals, and I feel like he really doesn't deserve it. The biographies of the characters in the book are quite impressive. If you pull out many characters, you can write a novel about the protagonist, just as there are many lottery options and you can write a novel of a few hundred words. The treasure he gave out is quite interesting, as it uses brain cells. There is still logic in the behavior of the characters and forces, except for the lunacy of the protagonist, haha. Finally, I recommend everyone to read it. If you have the appetite, you can read the latest chapter. This is the only book that I have read dozens of books recently that has not been poisoned halfway. Of course, I am poisoned now. It has nothing to do with writing, setting, or stitching. Most of the reason is that there are 400 chapters. The protagonist has never had a main line. The protagonist has always been I haven't found the meaning of his existence. Yes, he is just a fun person. He has no foundation of his own and no real good deeds. He can only send warmth from time to time. When you hope that he will go to the world for the sake of the common people, he will tell you to respect the fate of others. You hope that he will stay in peace, but he is trying to save the world and end the war.

I think the creativity and early writing are quite good. As for the back part, it's too bad. It's better to have an outline. Finally, saying that the protagonist is a dog licker feels like an insult to a dog licker. At least he has a target. It would be better for you to just find someone you have never seen before and just come to him and lick him. It is really unnatural to be so greedy.

I'm really impressed. You didn't write like this if you wanted to write about group portraits. Besides, you didn't write about group portraits, you wrote about the system! For the first time, I spent a chapter writing about a supporting character who lurks next to the villain in the early stage as his younger brother waiting for an opportunity to avenge his family's destruction. However, he is missing from the plot in several subsequent chapters? Why did you spend so much time describing the background and psychological activities of the supporting character Liuzi when the protagonist has never even met him? You can just write a plot where the six villains are submissive on the surface when they are shouting at them, but there is a cold flash in their eyes when they bend down to agree. You can then describe it when the six villains rebel. I endured it the first time and continued reading. The second time around, the guard discovered that the protagonist didn't look like a refugee. Why! You tell me why! It takes a chapter to write? ? ? Tell me why you should write one sentence in one chapter? ? ? I thought it was some important role, but after calling the protagonist a spy, it didn't matter anymore? ? ? I kept watching it, and when I saw that the protagonist was knocked back to the original world without any problem, I was completely convinced. You can do it with a hammer here and there. There are so many supporting characters that are useless now, but I don't see how the protagonist can break the game. Goodbye!

I remember reading this novel before and being poisoned. You were given a bunch of cheats to choose from, and you chose the worst one. Sometimes the worst one was also very strong. In the end, you didn't even need to use it. If you put it in other novels, any one of them could be used as a cheat. When it comes to the protagonist, it's all a pile of scrap metal.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I feel that the money is wasted. A good book can be written like this by the author. There is no main line and the plot is all kinds of water. None of the extraordinary props are used in the right place. The skills in the Qi training period are all super-skilled magical weapons that can make the air fly in seconds. I don't know what the author is thinking. He wants to cheat the protagonist, but is afraid of cheating too much. He is desperately trying to level up and reduce his combat power. Moreover, the protagonist is full of lies and the top boss, either you should not contact them, or you should tell them properly. The most important thing is your lottery ability, and the rest are just minutiae, without telling the truth.

That's awesome. I have practiced Qi for dozens of chapters. I thought you could write ten thousand chapters to become an immortal. After reading Chapter 190 of the Table of Contents, I only practiced Qi to the fifth level, and then upgraded to five levels in a row? ? ? Shit

Before this guy ran away, he even gave everyone a limited exemption. He was very particular 😜

Over fifty chapters, Bengbu can't stand it anymore. This character doesn't develop cheats at all, doesn't explore options, and can't combo the things he chooses. The mother-in-law river is a plot requirement at first glance. What's really fun is the sky rope, which ignores the terrain, can break through the air, and special scenes can guide the direction... We all know about skill upgrades, but what does essence sublimation mean? The mutation can still be understood a little bit, why don't serious people really give it a try? It's not like I'm going to die soon… This is a strange choice, and why not choose a longevity fund? There must be something else later. If you connect the combo early, you can also use the longevity sacrifice flow. You have to bet on the probability. You didn't bet when you should bet. Why do you bet on dogs and not bet on dogs... Then start writing a lot of details about things that are completely unused... What's the use? You don't buy it😳😳 Then Buying secret skills again... Why are you in such a hurry? You have to sell some elixirs to make up the plot. You are a cultivator, not a Buddhist. You can just grab it directly or buy it slowly. The double door is used... Besides, you don't have time to practice. It's not like you can practice several skills at once. Later, you said you need something to practice, the recycling bin, holy shit😂? I don't know what I'm doing... I couldn't resist it anymore, and I don't know what this character means...

I still feel that my fighting strength is overpowered, and there is always an unpleasant feeling. In the world-saving mission, the North Pole can kill Nascent Soul instantly, and the ordinary intelligent snow monster can also obtain golden elixir. The protagonist is still a little miscellaneous fish practicing Qi. . And the protagonist gave Fu Pingbo a skill that can become an immortal for free. . Fu has a sect's heritage and inherited skills. It just so happens that the only thing the protagonist lacks is the major skills/alchemy and talisman inheritance. At least he can exchange for some non-core skills, so it's all for nothing. . Fu is also interesting. The protagonist takes him away and successfully "escapes" , which is equivalent to saving his life and giving him a safe place (new world). He also gave away training techniques, training resources (to spawn monsters), and food (spiritual food brought back from the world of immortality). . He doesn't know how to repay the karma (there are merits, there must be karma), and repay the protagonist, why is it so embarrassing to just keep taking things for nothing?

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It's okay at the beginning, but it gets worse as it goes on. The protagonist's outlook on things is chaotic and disorderly. He's sometimes good and sometimes evil. He can save people for profit, but he can also kill indiscriminately. Anyway, he has no bottom line.