At Kamar-Taj, I Have Countless Talent Traits

There are some problems with the latest two chapters. . When selling entries to the other party, it is best to give an explanation as soon as possible as to how many points the other party can give you. You can sell as many co-authors as you want. And there is an entry for just finding a corpse as written earlier. The explosion rate of the entry is a bit too high. Why don't you just take off if you find a place where there's a war?

It would be best to change the consumption of the lottery If you multiply this by 50, 100, 200, 400, you can calculate how big it will be after 20 times

I was made to cry by the stupidity of the protagonist😭. There were all sorts of loopholes from beginning to end, and there was no progress at all😓. For example, the effect of copper skin and iron bones is to increase double resistance by 20%. As a result, the protagonist said it was "invulnerable"😒. For example, the protagonist is afraid of being psychically attacked by Dr. For example, when the protagonist meets the Sea of ​​Insects, he does not want to learn range damage such as fireball and explosion magic, but wants to create point damage such as magic spear and magic Gatling😂

Odin is very poisonous. In the movie, Odin's tight pants can't even fit in his pants. The setting is that the Asa clan gets stronger as they get older, but as a result, they are almost dead and can't even let out a fart. But why do you think Odin is going to destroy the Supreme Mage line because the Ancient One breaks into Asgard? Is the Supreme Mage so worthless? Or are you writing a comic about Odin? If you want to write a comic setting, Ancient Yi's strength is not right.

The setting of the golden finger is good, but the writing is not good, not to mention mindless cheating. When writing Odin Guyi, his pupils will tremble, or he will be jealous, and his defense will be broken when encountering something. You can imagine how the characters with a lower mood than these two are written. I don't dare think about the plot, it's full of loopholes, the words can't be picked out carefully, there are always bad sentences, it's not smooth to read, it's very annoying, no one will read it, I really want to persuade you to quit.

The content is getting more and more clumsy, and the IQ is so high that it seems to have low IQ, and there is no motivation to renew 😐

The earth is destroyed by real estate development

Aren't Ancient One and Odin on the same level? The writing feels mindless 😅

This woman is really disgusting. If you write that she is the heroine, I will report you every day. Create a hundred accounts and report you every day.

If you don't know how to write about women, don't write about it. Don't force yourself to disgust the readers. This is not good for both parties.