Showbiz: Conquering the Entertainment Industry Through the Host Competition

Ma Fanshu

Not bad, Wang Bingbing is rushing

Li Hong is the most beautiful

To be honest, if the subject matter of this book had not been chosen so well, I would have written the paper long ago. . . . If you are not sure about the heroine, don't write about it. Just stare at Li Hong all day long. At the age of 38, she is almost ready to be the protagonist's mother. It doesn't matter how old you are, but the plot is awkward. How could a host who has been on CCTV for so long be so reckless? It's so embarrassing.

I subscribed to one chapter specifically to complain about it. I didn't read the paid version, but 90% of the previous free chapters were copied from popular Douyin videos. When I read Chapter 1, all I could think of were the characters in the Douyin video. There was no look like the protagonist himself. Every bit of it was exactly the same as the video. Even the tone of the dialogue was not changed. Anyway, it was just copied.

I can't stand watching the copied songs. It's okay to write a song in dozens of minutes, but you can only sing it a cappella, because it's impossible for anyone to arrange and record it for you in dozens of minutes.

Goodbye... I read Li Mubai, which you wrote next door, and I also read the latest chapter of this book. Because the heroine didn't like it very much, I could only say goodbye. I hope the more I write in the future, the better it will be.

I've basically read all of Li Mubai's books, and the plots are pretty good, but the pace feels too fast, and there aren't many details. It's a bit like a plot summary. Maybe all the novels out there are like this. If you don't quickly come up with interesting points to attract readers, no one will read it. Starting from the beginning, I think the content can be refined more. In addition to the plot, I can describe it in more details and write it more excitingly. I think there is only one heroine, which is a bit missing. After all, it's a pity that entertainment stories are all about career development. I think Sa Beining is pretty good, and both Wang and Ma like it. There is a heroine and a confidante. After all, I have already written about it. Wouldn't it be nice to have more exciting plots? Come on come on

From the beginning of more than 200 chapters, there are too many private goods. The plot is constantly preached and indoctrinated to the readers, and the plot is fragmented.

When writing about hosts, write about hosts well. Suddenly I started to participate in variety shows, and suddenly I started copying songs. I originally wanted to see a different subject matter, but the result was still the same as Wen Chao Gong. Nine out of ten entertainment articles are from Wen Chao Gong, and one is about people from ancient times who traveled back and became actors.