My Life Has Subtitles

After picking up and missing items three times a day, you still send them to an antique store one after another. Do you think this is appropriate? Also, the granddaughter is also very poorly written in my opinion. She jumps up and down like a retard. Do you think readers will like such a disgusting setting? The characters should be written with higher intentions, and stupidity is the most intolerable thing.

Ever since it was put on the shelves, it has become more and more ridiculous. The more I read it, the more awkward it becomes. I open my mind and think that this plug-in is not good at all. Even if I don't write about stocks and finance, just writing about picking up leaks is better than the intrigues and bad pretentiousness in this messy society. There is no new idea!

Starting from the class reunion, all kinds of pretense and slaps in the face made me vomit.

It's certainly not a studio novel, but it's certainly not good-looking either. Chapter 5: Why did the protagonist pick up the missing copper coin? If you want to pick up the slack, don't write that he is an old farmer who sells family heirlooms so that his children can study. You can completely describe the seller as a prodigal son, and there will be no psychological pressure at all to pick up the slack. If you pick up an ordinary middle-aged and elderly person who is forced to sell out by the pressure of life, you are a real villain.

If there really was such a panel, one could see through various situations of a person. Then you should become a life planner. This career may not be the most lucrative. But it can play a vital role for all mankind.

It's a very refreshing article. It's well written so far, and there's nothing unreasonable about it. As for picking up leaks three times a day and selling them to one place, I thought about it and it's very reasonable. If I do the same thing, first of all, the boss is a nice person and relatively honest. Secondly, changing the place may lead to something wrong. Furthermore, this is an inertial pattern, a subconscious behavior of people.

You can see so much information, and you have a relationship with the police. How can you get a favor from a gangster who is causing trouble? Look at the evidence of his crime. Why does he have a backer? The backer's butt is not clean either. Isn't the evidence readily available? Give the evidence to the police classmate, credit is great, the trouble has been solved and the favor has been obtained, I feel very aggrieved to see it.

This is a routine from more than ten years ago. Not to mention that it is not outdated. Just writing this will not pass the review. Once you report it, it will be accurate. Author, please take a good look at what you can and cannot write at the starting point😓

It's not interesting. Picking up leaks is too artistic and exaggerated. Of course, this is common in picking up leaks novels. What I can't figure out is why a leak-picking novel has to involve intrigues in social relationships, just for the sake of conflict?

It's a pity. Such a good subject matter would have been popular more than ten years ago.